Invincible Treasure Chest

I sincerely beg you to fish out the dry stuff again and distribute it again. This is not water, it has been soaked in the sea.

Author, do you have any prejudice against women? Have you ever been hurt? Also, the first two chapters at the beginning are about ex-girlfriends. Is it a little wordy? Is it necessary to introduce so much? Anyway, it seems to me that you are just trying to make up for the word count and there is no need to write so carefully. I am not just telling you my feelings after reading this book.

It's really a strong recommendation. The introduction seems quite interesting, but when I clicked in and read Chapter 15, the impression left on me was that the number of words in ten of them can be said to be nonsense. A paragraph that can be solved in one hundred words will always use eight hundred words, which is not fascinating. This is very discouraging. There are only three types of fans who can become fans of this book: those who are patient, those who are full, and those who have insomnia.

Real water... The author seems to be unable to grasp the focus of the narrative, always focusing on the corners, and the protagonist is not likable at all, even annoying

The writing is okay. After reading the first six chapters, I still write about the protagonist. Some of it feels very draggy. The details don't need to be too detailed, as this will make people unable to read.

I've only read two chapters, so I'll give you my personal opinion. The author's writing style is worthy of recognition, and he has the ability to describe the story in detail, which is something that many authors lack, including me. But I think some plots don't need to be too elaborate, just dig into a box, and there is no need for so many words. If the author could simplify it a bit, I think the results would be better!

After reading Chapter 45, almost everyone else's Chapter 6 or 7 was full of content! ! !

There's too much nonsense. The word count is so low that I gave up after just reading a few chapters. It doesn't matter if it's a little watery, but this is too watery.

After reading Chapter 11, I really can't stand it anymore. Problems include: 1. It's verbose; 2. The outlook is incorrect; 3. The writing is too dense; 4. There's no sense of immersion; 5. I guess the author has read too many novels about gods and heroes. Do you understand?

I stopped reading after reading Chapter 9 and Chapter 10. Do you think that as a woman, you are asking too much from the protagonist? It doesn't require you to have big goals, and you don't even have a basic plan. The protagonist's so-called plan for the future is to have enough fun while you are young. To put it bluntly, doesn't it mean that the conditions at home are not bad, and even if the money is needed, the family can come up with it. For such a person, my ex-girlfriend didn't accept the rich second generation at that time, but I can understand even if she did.

After looking at a few pictures, I feel like I was writing essays when I was a kid. There is no limit to what you can do with one thing. In my area, it's called pulling the grass and blocking the bag cage.

This book is so watery that you can open two books from one box.

Garbage and water are a waste of time compared to books.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and it's all water, and it's completely a Rakhi book.

I strongly recommend that you don't read it, it's all nonsense

After reading the first fourteen chapters, the character and code of conduct of the protagonist are very to my liking. The author's writing style is also okay. Speaking of shortcomings, I feel that the biggest shortcoming of this book is that it is too watery. When the protagonist goes out and sees several people suspected of being robbers, he spends a whole chapter analyzing why the protagonist guesses that they are robbers. Then he takes out a slingshot and spends another chapter explaining why the protagonist has a slingshot... It's too watery.

After reading seven or eight chapters, I can only say that it's too...

I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and this is the craziest book I have ever come across, bar none! Others still have plots and interesting content, but this author is just Luo Liba, who talks nonsense over and over again without any real content.

Let's talk about whether Shen Nong was poisoned to death 😏

He was originally a potential author, but he insisted on being a eunuch and writing, and no one could save him.

What do you call the Invincible Treasure Box? Forget it, call it Invincible Water.

I haven't updated it in six months. I guess I'm already in the palace.

The author is not only water but also a eunuch king

I don't want to say anything... They have all said what I want to say! After reading this book, I realized how rubbish "One Eye Ten Lines" is!