DC Rider

The author went to read DC's Knights book and look at its settings. The protagonist you wrote is not good, the system is not good, and the belt is not good. There is nothing interesting about it.

Not enough writing, touching dialogue, Bai's potential

I'm curious about one thing, what's the use of binding other belts to a decade's transformer?

The Flash is infinitely faster than Kato

Author, your lack of chapter names is very discouraging...

Does The Flash still need toys like Kato?

I read it for 2 minutes, and my eyes were full of classmates. I said that the book written in this way is so distorted that I don't want to read it. The writing style is not enough, and I can't even make up my mind.

Adding Kamen Rider abilities to those protagonists is unnecessary! It's like a junior high school student teaching a high school student! Kamen Rider is weaker than Zheng Lian!

First of all, the general environment of the DC world is difficult to write. Just based on movies and TV series, there will be errors in the strength of heroes and villains. In addition, if you don't know much about the relationship between the characters, let alone the complexity of the multiverse, the timeline is very important. It will be very troublesome if some major events are advanced, such as the Blackest Night, the invasion of Dark Batman led by Barbatos, etc. Giving the power of the knight to the hero is an interesting point, but I think it is very difficult for you, the author, to write this now. The local hero forces and villain forces are complicated enough, and now the involvement of Knight World villains and Consortium X will make writing even more difficult. The plot in some chapters is outstanding, but the rest can only be described as mediocre. Take the Doomsday in this book as an example. If it is a real Doomsday, it will not be killed. Once it is attacked, it will immediately evolve the ability to adapt and will only become stronger and stronger. The one in the movie is just a fake, a low-quality Doomsday that can be killed. It is better to write the original name of the knight. Most of the Chinese translations in the new decade are not good. There are not many writers writing about knights, so keep at it.

Can you check for typos? There are so many typos that I didn't see.