I Have a Thatched Cottage

Saving the old man was supposed to be a subversion of tropes, like a miraculous cure, and closer to reality. But it turned out to be a melodramatic soap opera about women, instantly lowering its quality to that of a simplistic, lowbrow novel.

Poison, extremely poisonous, even Shennong couldn't withstand it; a single glance at a cultivation manual is enough for a disciple to learn it without a master's explanation.

Dear author, your new book is great! I've joined the new book investment group, please update!

Another book that's all show and no substance. Why can't they just properly train their apprentice instead of going off on tangents? Goodbye. The protagonist is a complete goofball. Look at the original novel; that's what real apprentice training is all about—high-class, intelligent, and the supporting characters have their own personalities. This one... Hahaha, goodbye.

This is toxic! They claim to be invincible within the system's security limits, yet they're so afraid of this and that, acting like cowards and having so many inner monologues. They're not even as good as a honey badger.

Author, those disciples dare to bully and step on the protagonist's feet! Shouldn't he exude some authority? Otherwise, every disciple would dare to slap him in the face and step on his feet.

Why do so many fantasy cultivation novels, especially those about taking on disciples, start with an incredibly beautiful woman coming to become their apprentice? After reading so many of these books, I've come to one conclusion: they're okay for the first few chapters, but then they become the kind of clichéd, predictable stories.

The sect costume they designed instantly lowered the overall sophistication; is this some kind of erotic novel?

You've chosen someone with a lower cultivation level than your disciple as your junior brother. What were you thinking? Your eldest disciple has fallen for you—are you trying to pull off a teacher-student romance? Although I don't like this book, I wish you good luck. Goodbye!

What is invincibility? True invincibility lies in being invincible in every way. If you only possess physical strength but your mindset is like this, can you really call yourself invincible? You just look like a weakling with power.