The Northern Liang Hostage

Many thanks to Guan Guan for recommending the book, and many thanks to Guan Guan's book friends for coming to support me!

I gave up after reading more than 300 chapters. I had a lot of ideas in the early stage. I originally thought that the scene would become bigger and bigger in the future, and the pattern would become more and more grand, becoming a magnificent epic of world hegemony, beauties and heroes, wisdom and war, but it turned out that when I arrived in Beiliang, I suddenly lost my mind. It turned into a love entanglement between a man and n women, with entanglement, infatuation and hatred. The progress was slow and the plot had no direction. A promising historical hegemony novel turned into a costume romance Mary Sue idol drama. I was quite disappointed. It would be better to submit this book to a female channel.

Come on! Oranges reward hard work, illusions step on flowers, and the writing will get better and better in the future. A good book will not be unappreciated. 🌹🌹

1. Security is a problem. The protagonist often goes out without a guard, resulting in being assassinated on the road many times. Houses are not much better than public toilets. There are always people sneaking in. Whether it is the palace of the prince or the prince-consort, the guards are useless 2. There are always little people who act as villains. I don't know where the courage and ability come from. At first, he was the son of Zhizhou who had no official position. He assassinated the protagonist, assassinated the protagonist's brother in the capital, and led the army to attack the palace. I really don't know why he was so arrogant... Then in Beiliang, a small official in the street office dared to I plotted against the prince-in-law's house, found someone to stun the protagonist halfway, and framed me. Didn't I expect that the protagonist's special status would definitely not kill him because of this... Even if he went back to take revenge afterwards, there would be no sense of satisfaction... 3, it's really bland...

Does the author have any misunderstanding about the palace with a different surname? If you can enter alone, can you kidnap someone? Is this a powerless woman? He's obviously a martial arts master, okay?

It's Chinese New Year, Chen San and the princesses wish you all a happy New Year and never be short of books! In addition, you must pay more attention to your health and protect yourself carefully. Chen San prays that you will be healthy and free from all poisons!

I saw that the heroine came in with many talents. Is there anyone like me... There are not many harem stories nowadays 😁😜

Well, let me tell you my personal opinion. The protagonist's situation or treatment in the early stage was too awkward First of all, he is the third son of a different surnamed Wang, and the people in the city where the palace is located can be regarded as enjoying his protection. Although he did some evil deeds in the past six months, it feels like people treat the protagonist like a poor man who did some evil deeds. At most, he is just like the evil son of a wealthy businessman, not like the son of a prince at all! ! The second one is Hong Xiu'er, the subjugated princess of Qi. Her fearless attitude is really strange: The two siblings were rescued by the male protagonist's family. It's not surprising that I went to perform, sing and dance for a living, and was paid a lot of money (my ex-boyfriend was drunk and was instigated). Whether he has martial arts skills is not a problem, but when he makes a living in that kind of place, he must have the consciousness of being entangled in words or words and deeds. If you are arrogant, why would you go to a vulgar romantic place in the era? It is very inconsistent After being bought back by the male protagonist, compared with the male protagonist, he is more like the hostess, and the male protagonist is like a son-in-law (perhaps the male protagonist does not care about the setting). The relatives of the person who was harmed by the male protagonist's predecessor wanted to take revenge. They sent people or personally came to kill the male protagonist, but they failed. The male protagonist blamed his predecessor and did not kill anyone (including Hongxiu's younger brother). I consider this the male protagonist's magnanimity 8. Not to mention the Jiulang, the princess's slaves and the slaves that the palace does not want to see, as well as the defense around the palace and the male protagonist. . . . Summary: Except for Hong Xiuer, the status issue between the male protagonist and other people (no matter who they are) in the early stage is the strangest. Maybe things will get better after you get through it (after all, I also saw a review of the book that said more about the entanglement and love between the male and female protagonists in the later period 😃😃😃)

Something seemed wrong to me. After reading the comments, I realized what was wrong. The villain the protagonist faced was wrong with his identity. It was too out of character.

Your Majesty, I came here and asked if this book is green? Or maybe it's a gift of a girl, but it's just about flirting but not the plot, etc.