Great Elf Sage

Just focusing on the beginning, the book throws out a lot of vague and specious definitions of magic. I'm sorry that readers are not here to read textbooks, and most people are not interested in your setting. The beginning of this novel is very much like the author's self-pleasure, that is, the author is very happy to throw away the setting and write, but the reader is so dizzy that he cannot see the main plot. Yes, I personally can't understand why around Chapters 7 and 8, a whole chapter is suddenly spent on writing about the escape of the brothers and sisters, and then there is a large section of elf settings, and then there is a plan that looks like a completion of the main plot. There is a better way to write the first foreshadowing, which is to suddenly switch to another character at the beginning of the novel and devote an entire chapter to other characters. . . It was too deliberate and the plot was very disconnected. When I read this chapter, I thought I was reading the wrong book. The second one completes the main line of the plan. . . . It's too sudden and hard to digest. You have to know that the reader is feeling dizzy after slowly chewing through a long section of the setting, and then suddenly encounters the opening of the epic main plot. . . To be honest, it's better to read the previous setting before reading Chapter 10, or to go directly to Chapter 10 without reading the first 9 chapters. I don't think there is much of a difference. When I saw the words "Completion Plan", even if I hadn't read the first 9 chapters, I could still guess that the elves had racial defects that had an impact on the elves' survival (although these were hardly reflected in the first 9 chapters, and the 9 online chapters were not enough to lay down enough relevant clues). . . In summary, the main plot at the beginning of the novel is not clear enough and there are too many settings. . . . Personally, I didn't read it any further. If after ten chapters the protagonist suddenly starts to go about his daily life or studies other things instead of completing the plan, then the plot problem will be even greater. To use the analogy of One Piece, the first few episodes tell the audience all the settings of Devil Fruit, CP9, Four Emperors, Celestial Dragons, Roger One Piece, etc., And then suddenly use 2 to 3 episodes to talk about the past of supporting characters (such as Nami), and then the next episode directly tells the audience the existence of D's will, and Roger has another reason for starting the Age of Pirates. Then continue Luffy's adventure... If the first 30 episodes of One Piece were like this... Although I am not rigorous, I did feel this way when I watched the beginning. In addition, the author is reminded that sentences such as "a is b with special attributes" should be used with caution! ! ! Because the information content of this kind of sentence is basically equivalent to "a is b", and most of the sentences like "a is b" are nonsense. In the same way, there are words like "a certain characteristic" and "a certain degree".

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I also like to watch overload. But I don't like the Bone King in it. Let me tell you what I like first. I just like this kind of modern people traveling through this world of swords and magic. Then use solutions and ways of thinking that are different from those in the world there to solve problems. What I hate: I really liked it at first, thinking that I finally encountered such a good anime. Then the hero saves a village and then eliminates the bad guys. I feel super happy to see it. So when did I start hating it? Conquering the Lizardmen is the first point. Do we have to kill so many lizardmen to conquer them? I feel that the male protagonist is too cruel, a bit like a modern ancient empire. I particularly hate aggression, so I had a bad impression from that time on. I was more or less speechless after that. Then came the most shocking part for me. When the male protagonist occupied an entire region of that empire, he actually killed all the residents there. Yes, I specifically confirmed it in order to confirm the plot there. They were all killed. This is really naked aggression and massacre. I know. From a historical perspective, war will accelerate the integration of civilizations. It is true that the lizard people will live a better life under the rule of the male protagonist, but is it really necessary to kill so many people if they are clearly going to fight with others? Let's not talk about the lizard man, let's just talk about how he massacred so many people in the imperial capital later. Fortunately, he didn't let his men torture him first and then kill him. I really wanted to vomit when I saw the male protagonist's subordinates praising his kindness for giving those people euthanasia. He was not a common man before time travel. Such hypocrisy is really disgusting. In the end I still like this anime. But at first I liked anime and liked the male protagonist, but now I like anime and hate the male protagonist. Because the anime also vaguely mentions that the male protagonist's thoughts are slowly being turned into evil. The plot is exactly like this. But his biggest insistence has not been affected - to protect the guild he and his teammates established. In order to protect his guild. The male protagonist maintains his humanity in the early stages of the plot. Even if he explores the world and understands the world, his humanity is revealed, but it is also mentioned that the male protagonist's thoughts have been affected. In the second season, it began to penetrate the human world like an invasion. And by season three, that's when the carnage begins (just thinking about it). Fortunately it's not serious. But it's hard to say if there will be a fourth season. So this is a good anime with a good plot. But when I saw the barrage, I really... A group of brushers worshiped the Bone King's words. Haven't they seen what the comic author is vaguely expressing? The male protagonist is constantly being demonized and becoming less and less human. (However, according to the internal development of the plot, even if the male protagonist is demonized, he will not do anything bad to the guild, because this is what he cares about most in his heart) I like this anime. If the part where the male protagonist is demonized is removed, I will like it even more!

Recently, some readers reported that the relationship between Nolan and Chrissy was too childish. Kangkang spent a night rereading the previous chapters and found that this problem did exist... Therefore, part of Chrissy's plot was modified without touching the main plot line and retaining the laughter. The main directions for modification are: ① Chris has not been obsessed with Nolan since childhood, ② The relationship between Chris and Nolan is limited to enemies and companions on the path of magic research, ③The degree of ambiguity in the relationship between the two has been weakened, and some related plots have been modified. ④ There may be progress in the emotional line in the future, but not now (after all, the focus of the plot is not on this) ... The main revised chapters are: 4, 15, 22, 26, 27, 43, 44 [By the way, if you find other shortcomings and loopholes in this book, you are welcome to leave a comment in this post, I will read it, thank you!

It really hurts that such a beautiful book has so few readers. The student party gave a reward of 1,000 starting coins to show support.

Author! I really like this book of yours. As long as the quality does not deteriorate, I will keep following it. I really hope that Nolan will achieve the status of god with the concept of magic and sages. It is really cool 👍

Came here after a recommendation, but found out that it has already been rejected? (Dead fish eyes)

I just wanted to add (づ ●─● )づ

True Spirit takes the route of becoming a god, but I personally feel that magic itself is a force that can fight against gods. If the protagonist takes the route of becoming the God of Magic, I feel that there is no essential difference between magic and other supernatural powers. I don't know what the author is thinking, but I feel that becoming a true spirit (god?) That fuses a concept is like becoming a slave to the world. I hope that the protagonist can truly find a way out of magic. He does not need to integrate with a certain concept in the world, and can fight against the gods with only his own wisdom and strength.

Did the author never want this book to do well from the beginning? 😅 The settings are crazy from the beginning, and there is no plot.

Elves become adults at the age of 19? Having grown so big at 19 years old, shouldn't the longevity species grow very slowly? Solve.

Just reading the introduction reminds me of a Nikkei book called "The Founding Magician". The protagonist is reincarnated into a red dragon in the mythical era, teaches magic to humans who are still under the tribal system, and opens a multi-racial magic school. Unfortunately, the death of the protagonist's student and wife Ai at the end of the first volume made me autistic and give up the book (although it is said that he will be reincarnated in the future)

There is a guy who is famous for writing about ghost slayers. His writing skills are obviously not that good, but his writing skills and story skills are definitely lower than yours anyway. However, he received more than 20,000 yuan and more than 200 monthly tickets... If you had chosen the light novel section or the fantasy section, it should not be so miserable. Alas, fantasy is really bad. You have five thousand in the fantasy section, maybe double that in the fantasy and light novel sections.

Author, can you repost it in the light novel section?

I would like to know where this cover is available ('▿')

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