Mountains and Rivers Destiny

Dear author, I am a student, so you will understand. I want to support you, but I can only do so after I go to college. I would like to say that the layout of your book is quite novel, using chess as a layout, but your handling of the emotions of the characters is indeed good and bad. I feel that the male protagonist and male characters are not concerned. The problem is, but the emotional transformation of female characters, especially the heroine and the second heroine, is really uncomfortable. The transformation is indeed not very good, and it is very difficult to persuade. In fact, to be honest, Yan Konghua is better as the heroine than Zhou Luhua. The relationship between the three of you is too difficult to handle, especially the character of the male protagonist. And let me tell you about a small bug. Author, please correct it. In Chapter 193, You Said that Zhou Man had his arm cut off by Yuwen Qiushui in the second Shanhe game, and his hamstring was broken by Luan Hengtang in the third game. However, when you introduced Yuwen Qiushui in the previous article, you said that she cut off his arm during the battle with Zhou Man after his hamstring was broken in the third game. You've made a mistake. I hope you can correct it. Author, you can write about the general trend of the world, but you always have problems with the emotions of your children, especially female characters. I hope the author can practice more and don't change emotions too quickly. Finally, I wish the author can write this world well.

To be honest, I feel that the writing is quite interesting, but some plots always feel a bit awkward, so I will just say a few words here. This series of events from escaping privately to meeting the protagonist and experiencing them together should be for the princess to mature. But at present, it seems that the situation is easy to change, and the nature is hard to change. The arrogance engraved in his bones can be felt across the screen, especially in the recent chapters. He usually prides himself on being wise and resourceful, but he quickly listens to a few provocative words from his enemies. Obviously he left the palace privately and went to the hinterland of the enemy country, but when he was in trouble, he blamed his fiancé for not arriving in time? The fiancé rushing over is also a capital "death"! Also, I have always thought that this kind of plot of breaking people's marriages and stealing other people's wives is really the dregs of martial arts novels. Regardless of whether the character of this princess is likable or not, since she already has a fiancé who has a bright future and a gentle and gentle personality, let's not force the marriage to end. Let her and her fiancé have a beginning and an end. Didn't you, the author, say that triangle relationships give you a lot of stomachache, so don't write about it! The same goes for the female supporting role. If there's no role for her, then don't write it. Why tease her if you don't marry her! Autumn pear cream!