Doomsday Killer

Looking forward to the decisive plot of killing and killing, it will be enjoyable

I have collected the books. I like the apocalyptic books the most. Unfortunately, Qidian has too many restrictions on apocalyptic books. You can't write anything about it, and you are not allowed to write anything about violence and pornography. But this is what happens in the apocalypse.

Warm House (๑• . •๑)

It's very well written, but it's a pity that I didn't vote for it. I'm looking forward to it ❤️

Come on, the author is great. It's hard to mess up the starting point, but it'll be fine once you figure it out. Take it slow!

So strong... Why did you have to cowardly stay in the room for three days?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I'm here, I hope the author won't think I have a venomous tongue. (つД`) First of all, it is still a language logic problem. There are many contradictions and typos. After writing a chapter, you must read it twice yourself! (Knocking on the blackboard) Secondly, Wu Miner or Chen Lili, who is the heroine? It stands to reason that the protagonist brings out Wu Min'er in the first chapter. If she is the heroine, then Chen will steal her role. If Chen is the heroine, then her character design will be very unpleasant. Which novel have you seen where the heroine wants to have a monkey with the protagonist from the beginning? (And there has been a strict crackdown recently on descriptions ennn, be careful not to get 404.) Then, the sentences can be more concise, and you can use a few words to explain things clearly. Try not to make a whole paragraph, otherwise it will affect reading. Finally, I personally think that the character and past experiences of the protagonist should be reflected in the subsequent development and plot of the story, rather than telling everything at the beginning. I don't think any ordinary reader would be interested in reading it, right? Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. I also hope that the author will continue to work hard, come on.

What about updates? What about updates?