Immortal Bloodline

Talisman with thousands of golden elixirs, my God! ! ! This is basically a persuasion operation. .

I don't understand what kind of characteristics the author wants to create for the protagonist. Not to mention, after working hard to join the sect, he spent 3 years trying to crack the formations set up by the Nascent Soul cultivators. And as I said before, the protagonist has no talent for formations and has not even learned them. I don't understand how the protagonist has the confidence to break that formation. He doesn't have normal thinking. I don't want to talk about the poisonous points behind. There is a reason why he is not popular.

Already collected, hope to encourage each other

It's really well written. The author is very attentive. I have collected it.

Now I know why you are a eunuch. You can go and see the battle between avenues. I haven't watched the rest yet. The front part is simply plagiarism.

Come on, if you like to write novels, write them seriously first and don't care too much about other people's opinions. Maybe as you write, one day, you will be surprised to find that you succeeded. Of course, it is also possible to lose everyone. There are many famous literary figures in ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad, and even more are in dire straits. Only by never forgetting your original intention can you always succeed. Success is only a reward for hard work, not the purpose of hard work. There is a difference between writing and doing business, even if it is business writing. So it's important to be mindful. Only if you don't change your original intention can you have no complaints or regrets. Let's work hard and encourage each other!

The writing is too poor and verbose. The introduction says there is no golden finger, but you, a little Qi-training monk, discovered the relics of the late Nascent Soul? There are also a lot of golden elixir talismans?