One Punch Sword Master

When I read it myself, I always feel that something is wrong. When I read other people's books, they seem a little different and the things that are wrong are different. So, let's listen to everyone's opinions.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I feel like the inner qi sword and the outer qi sword can be combined into a whirlwind of water like a hungry wolf, into a swordsmanship that ignores the nature of the cross-tooth dragon killing fist, reach the top of the dragon, and then be upgraded to a monster killing sword or something like a monster god killing sword, and you can become a dragon or above.

If you write well and don't supervise me, I will give you five recommended votes every day and put them all on the shelves.

Wife means wife, that's called wifi. You should be careful, this is basically common sense today.

Brother, are you still writing? If not, I will delete it.

The author's writing is okay, but the elementary school part is too long. I promised you to show off.

Which school is so good? Are you still providing your wife's money before 12 o'clock?

I want to ask in which chapter the protagonist graduated from elementary school. After reading hundreds of chapters, I can't stand the life of an elementary school student. It's obviously a good start. Fast-forwarding to adulthood and writing some passionate and emotional dramas are just a punch of food. Wouldn't it be better than playing house with children?

I don't want to read it when I see an elementary school, it's almost like a running account

Author, what you write is too self-centered. I like your style very much, but I hope the author will listen to the opinions of readers. One person said that your plot is protracted and the progress is slow. It may be bias or not suitable for this reader's taste. But what many people said is your own problem as the author. I will only say one thing here, that is What the author writes is said to be slow, but in my opinion it is just like a running account. I want to describe it as detailed as possible, but readers don't like it. I suggest the author speed up the progress and focus on the key points when writing. You don't need to spend so much ink on other things. You can take a look at how well-written and high-achieving fan works are written. As I said, pay more attention to the readers' feelings and don't always be too self-conscious.

I think it's pretty good. It's rare to see one-punch novels like this nowadays. However, the progress of the plot can be a little faster. After all, it is based on the theme of one-punch. After all, fan works still have to show off in the plot 🤭

The title of the book is Sword Master, and Chapter 90 is an introduction to swordsmanship.

I have written so many plots, but it didn't take me so long to write them in elementary school.

Do you miss your elementary school career so much? . .

It's normal to be a eunuch. There are so many poisonous points written. More than 200 chapters are still not available. Someone pointed out the poisonous points. It's not right. Just put on headphones. The world belongs to one person.

6 Oh, I won't update Chapter 7 if it's gone. It's no wonder that I am the author of The Eunuch.

Your book introduction is also fucked!

After seeing One Punch, I felt a little confused and quit reading.