The Whole World Is Hunting Me

Let me say a few words to the author. I happened to be pushed to this book. After reading the beginning, it felt like I had taken a breath of fairy grass. I can give an amazing evaluation. The passage from the sudden change to the escape at sea gave me a very good impression. However, I never expected that I had just followed more than a hundred chapters. The plot in Eagle Kingdom was immediately poisoned by a series of poisonous points. However, I felt that there might be other developments after writing such a beginning, so I decided to follow it. For a while, here are some thoughts The advantages are obvious. As I just said, the beginning is amazing. The protagonist has been resigned to the situation, but suffered a disaster. From violent murder to escape, the modification of the appearance highlights his wolf-killing point, which immediately makes the protagonist transcend the mortal world. His escape is to remove the oppressive feeling of the hero's unfree destiny. The protagonist's behavior is a real fight against heaven and man, and the pattern is quite large. It has the power of the Golden Three Chapters, which is very good in terms of attracting people to read. The character of the protagonist is also ruthless, decisive, and a rare anti-hero. In addition, the description of the action scenes is neat and clean. Killings are not sloppy and fatal quickly. The protagonist in the imagination has such a murderous feeling. Let's focus on the poisonous points, the plot of Eagle Kingdom that I have seen until now The first point is that the author's beginning is actually very suitable as the beginning of an infinite flow. As a result, he went ashore and became the urban soldier king. In this way, the oppression caused by the previous natural and man-made disasters entered a wrong outlet. At this time, I don't know what other book friends think. The layout of the book has changed from the previous one to the sky. The struggle for survival immediately turns to a mere gang fight. No matter how tough the opponent is, the situation is lost. The difference between Sisyphus and a pheasant; the background is different, and the image of the character is set off by the scene of survival at sea. The protagonist is a real human Tai Sui God who is constantly struggling and in danger. The second point is the expansion of the world view. After landing, I started to learn martial arts and guns, and encountered terrorists in the process. The timing here as a place where other extraordinary powers appear in the world is okay, but it is too weak. In comparison, the protagonist has no need to learn these bells and whistles. The layout is still small. Especially the part about joining a martial arts school. It is more natural for the protagonist to join in order to integrate into this place like Chinatown than to join to practice martial arts. Anyway, he is stealing from his master and he learns quickly anyway. I haven't seen it later, maybe the author has other ideas that have been written down to justify it, so I'll just treat it as a generalization. The author has written eight books, but judging from the word count, this book did not end well. I hope the author can work hard to write. No matter what the score is, it will be good. To finish well, one is to accumulate experience. If you don't practice this kind of thing, it will only lead to a vicious cycle. The other is to accumulate a stable readership. When you write a book, you will also bring readers with you. The achievements are accumulated step by step. This is called building character. It is just like opening a restaurant. It is not enough to attract people. You must have repeat customers and retain people to keep the restaurant open and to become a large brand. After all, we don't open a gym, and we can earn a lot of money just by cutting off a wave of fitness cards and taking personal training classes, closing the door, and running away. I wish the author good results in advance.

AlsoI don't know if I rely on this industry to make a living. If so, I hope you can consider the following. If not, just look here. I looked through the author's other works, a total of eight books, and I feel that most of them were ended hastily. The stories are actually good, but the descriptions are too rough. I read dozens of chapters, all for the story, but when I got to the Eagle Kingdom to learn martial arts, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The feeling of a gangster novel from more than ten years ago, full of the feeling of the plot... It's not that the writing is not good, it's just because it's outdated. The era of martial arts mythology has passed. With the physical foundation of the protagonist, he can learn Muay Thai, Israeli fighting, or even ordinary Sanda, which looks better than "Mythical Xingyiquan". Taking a step back, you can barely accept Wing Chun as a whole, but Xingyiquan is exactly like Tai Chi in novels more than ten years ago, which is not good for people's senses. With the development of fighting events in recent years, most people who like fighting understand that the most important thing between attack and defense is breathing control, followed by force exertion skills, and finally moves. This article, Xingyi Quan... However,the purpose of saying this is to tell you that the details of the article need to be more carefully controlled. First, understand the readers' hobbies. Second, try to be as close to reality as possible and meet public standards. You can refine your own content by searching for relevant information. Then let's talk about the most important problem of this book: The protagonist's strength is too vague. First of all, the protagonist has a problem, and he also exercises regularly. He was once a track and field athlete. In other words, the protagonist's physical fitness is beyond that of ordinary people. After breaking out of the cocoon once, it should be far beyond ordinary people. In this setting, when fighting against the ship boss, you actually have to talk about knife skills... You can dodge bullets, but you can't avoid the ship boss's knife... Isn't it very contradictory? There are several other examples like this, so I won't go into details. This highlights the author's loose control of the plot, which is even more uncomfortable than reading the word "". Just a random comment at the end, I feel that this book reminds me of Uncle Jay's old movie "The Black Man", which has a sense of the times. FinallyI hope the author will get better and better.

After seeing Sneaking into Eagle Country, I couldn't stand it anymore. . . Was it really written by one person?

I was completely attracted by the first few chapters. Although it was a series of failed consoles, it felt very oppressive. It was an immersive illusion. I felt that I had come across a good book and was ready to book it all. What happened after I smuggled into the Eagle Kingdom? Putting aside the fact that there was no mention of the host's misfortune buff in the early stage, when we arrived at the martial arts gym, you told me that the protagonist had evolved, killed countless people, and had extraordinary physique, but was frightened by a martial arts gym leader? Forget it, the whole text is too oppressive, and there is no chance to breathe, which directly causes readers to read fatigue. Note, it is reading fatigue, and the heart has been hanging. It seems that most of the night, it turns out that there are still 300 chapters hanging? There is absolutely no care for the readers' feelings. Appropriate daily routine is necessary, especially for online novels with thousands of chapters. There is no daily routine or relaxing space at all. The readers are really tired after reading it. Before and after the stowaway in the novel, the protagonist has been holding hostages several times, and the fighting has begun to be routine. After the stowaway, he has directly become an urban costume. Let's not talk about the previous fighting and killing. The protagonist also has supernatural powers. As a result, except for the demonic shadow at the beginning, there is no other ability user or the display of the supernatural side. To be honest, if this book was a short novel instead of an online article, the author would definitely be able to write it well. However, the framework, combat effectiveness, and combat training system set by himself are not suitable and cannot support thousands of chapters, but he is forced to continue his life in an attempt to write more. To use an analogy, it is as if the funds are enough to produce a perfectly produced 12-episode series, but the money that is enough for 12 episodes is forced to produce a year-round series with hundreds of episodes. In the middle and later stages, the IQ of the supporting characters collapsed, and I thought it would be a deep story. Alas😢

I am coming! ! ! I think the overall structure and general layout of this book are very good and innovative, but the author particularly likes to torture the protagonist. This is obvious from the first chapter. What is particularly puzzling is that there are actually pirates in this writing about modern society? Still flying the flag? The maritime police were probably raised to shit, and the abuser gave me a sense of accomplishment. Then I don't want to comment on the next few hundred chapters, because either the abuser is paving the way for the abuser, and all kinds of bad things like winning the lottery can happen, just like being hit by a flowerpot when you go out. Newcomers can choose to skip reading (otherwise you will want to kill the author). This is a bold book that cuts off the future. It is really strong!

The beginning feels a bit like the opening of Death Row Paradise and the escape of demi-humans. Although there are many bad things, it can temper the protagonist, but if there are too many, it will become boring. If the protagonist's character is a little "weaker", it feels like he can become as dark as Tokyo Ghoul Kaneki's hybrid version of the Joker after eating the gecko / Heath Ledger version and Joaquin Phoenix... He seeks spiritual sustenance in an unfair world, but what he likes most is to be destroyed bit by bit~ But the character of the protagonist in this book is too strong, a bit like if you force me to death, I will kill you, just to survive... But what will you do after you survive? Revenge? Or should we figure out the secrets of our own bodies? This is up for debate. . The author who wants to be angry but needs to be on the line of crackdown, who is on the verge of being tempted by 404, can't I still let you vote?

It's beautiful. I like this type of book {"TopicId":"584142587913371648","TopicName":"First encounter in my impression"}

In fact, I have only read Chapter 50, but I really want to say that it is very healthy! (Shocking sound) I don't know what happens next, but the escape sequence at the beginning always reminds me of "The Bourne Supremacy". It's the kind of protagonist who doesn't know the specific situation but has super mobility. He uses everything around him to grab a glimmer of life from the cracks and survive. Also, the whole trend of the protagonist gradually gaining abilities reminds me of "Quantum Break". It is also the kind of ordinary protagonist who gets involved in a big event and gains abilities. After gaining the abilities, he is very calm and has incredible execution ability. There are very few poisonous points and can be ignored (after all, I am a female protagonist, so I feel that I am quite picky) It is quite eye-catching at the beginning, quite awesome! ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

It's very interesting. The author needs to work hard!

To be honest, it's not that good. Although the writing is okay, it's just that. 1. The protagonist's emotional transition at the beginning was too blunt. The cowardice of more than 20 years changed in a few minutes, and there was no sign of the past. Second, there is no explanation of where the man went at the beginning (I didn't look at the back). Although it is said that the protagonist will become stronger by killing people, but where is the corpse?

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Good book, I don't have enough recommendation votes, and my monthly investment has been used up. I'll give you a reward.

I started watching Gu Yue'an, and then I was attracted by your style. Later I saw your short film Xiaoju on Zhihu. Personally speaking, Xiaoju is the best short film I have ever watched. In fact, I am looking forward to the subsequent Valve Master. I think the framework is very good, but it is a pity. I think the short story in the Book of Yue exceeds the entire article. The beginning story is the main body. This new book also sees the latest updated chapters. This book is also very good. It makes people unable to guess the future direction. I am looking forward to the new twist in the next chapter. Come on.

The author only hopes that he won't be in the eunuch 😅😅😅 After Junyan and Summoning, he cut four times in a row. It's so tiring to chase! ! !

The magic spell of Balabala: From now on, you will code words and never change them. No watching dramas, no traveling, no getting sick. Don't play games, don't socialize. The liver-breaking code word means life and death. It is the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet, resisting the cold flames, and the light at dawn. Dedicate your life and glory to the starting point, tonight and every night.

Sure enough, as the title of the book says, what happens around Pig's Foot always develops in the most unlucky direction, but there is a glimmer of hope. 😠

Later articles became more and more short and weak, which made me unhappy after reading them😕

It's getting shorter and shorter. It's a good idea to combine 2 chapters into one chapter. I'll wait for updates. The experience is terrible.

It's really a pity. The first twenty or thirty chapters are really well written. When I got to Eagle Country, it felt like a different person was writing it.

After reading novels for so many years, this novel really impressed me and I couldn't stop reading the first few chapters. After reading it, I feel a little unfinished. But the author should be careful not to keep the plot highly tense all the time. Watching it too much will cause aesthetic fatigue.

Has the author read the Nine Swordsman series? Cangye's name reminds me of the psycho in Unparalleled Freedom.

The protagonist is also a talented person. When he knows that the whole world is rejecting him, all he thinks about all day long is layout, plans, and conspiracies. Is there a hole in his brain or something else? Don't you know that people make plans, but God knows? When the sky rejects you, you are still thinking about strategizing, and every plot in the book succeeds. This is the most incredible thing. The halo of the protagonist should not be so obvious, okay? It's uncomfortable to watch.

Let me give a brief review. The outstanding style in the early stage is very interesting, and it successfully expresses the sense of oppression of being targeted by the world. Unfortunately, after arriving in Eagle Country, it suddenly turned into a novice routine story that slaps the face in the city. The sharp drop in IQ is very discouraging. Friends who don't read routine stories can leave after reading the first part to avoid being angry. The above

The first few pictures of this novel are really beautiful! I thought I had encountered a rare fairy grass. But since I arrived in Eagle Country, I felt that the protagonist's IQ was really unsightly, and the supporting characters were also all kinds of brainless. They were just a slap in the face from another world. . . And there was some fantasy boxing technique in the end... I was poisoned to death and gave up the book. . .

The writing is fucking rubbish. Where did so many powerful experts come from to surround and kill the protagonist? If you have the skills to recruit a group of equally powerful people, you might as well deploy a three-stage and four-stage expert to teach the protagonist what it means to be low-key.

This book is really a magical book in the early part. I read it early this morning. I was attracted by the plot as soon as I read it. I even read the collections and comments of this book over and over again. What I couldn't figure out was how could such a beautiful book only be collected at 10,000. Shouldn't it start at 100,000? There were so few comments. I had a bad premonition that I might not write it well later. As for where I started to give up, let me tell you, first I went to sea and got on the ship, a mysterious phenomenon occurred, the ship lost its sails and started killing each other for food. There is actually nothing here, and I can accept it. But what I can't accept is this weird and mysterious phenomenon, because there are also such mysterious phenomena all the time.        ，，                                                                     I was quite disappointed, because I felt very comfortable in the early stage of reading it, and I read it from a sacred book, but the gap in the second moment was too big. Why I don't like this mysterious phenomenon that poses danger to the protagonist all the time? That's because it's completely different from what I thought. After watching the early stage, I thought that a powerful supernatural organization had found the protagonist and had to kill the protagonist for some unknown reason. The next step is to go overseas. I thought that after going to the UK, the protagonist would slowly become stronger and then return to China to show off.        ，，，452， Having said all that, I actually feel quite sorry for this book. After all, it started out so well, alas😔

It was the first time I saw the author overturning himself in Chapter 400. The author reminded me of a friend I once had, a second-generation rich man who didn't like cars, beauties, or having fun, but just loved climbing on the grid. We called him a hard-working literary young man.

One thing to say, according to the author's request, it jumps directly from 44 to 452, which is quite good. I am a new reader and have not read the middle part, but at least the parts I am reading now, I think it is very nice.

Donate your monthly passes as soon as they become available! I hope Boss Wu will be more aggressive next time!

In fact, I personally (personally!) Think that some urban routine writing is acceptable. Although it is terrible, it is indeed a shortage of books and there are too many people using it, so I can reluctantly read it again. But the author's early stage was really good, and it even had a bit of a realistic feel. It was such a good start, but the author had to let himself down and write like that later. There were too many gaps to read. After looking at the review, the author said that it was because he had not thought about how to write later. He suggested that the author should have a framework and his own rhythm for writing in the future. He would rather be scolded by readers than lower the quality of the book, because this is your work and your business card. How can you discredit yourself because of other people's voices? Comparing the before and after reading of this book will even make you feel deeply disappointed. It is obviously the first time you read the author's book but you are disappointed with the author. I hope the author can take his work seriously