The God of Death in American Comics

:            1.，            2.，（）           3. The rhythm of the story is orderly, neither urgent nor slow, and the narrative technique is not a novice Problems: 1. The names of the protagonist and the Zanpakutō are a bit awkward. The Japanese-style names with a starting point make people want to hide their faces and run away, especially the Tanbi-style name emmmmm Zanpakutō. The name is okay, but a bit too casual 2. The protagonist pulls the flag and breaks out of the Soul Society. Will SHIELD be suspicious? After all, they are all Japanese-style names, which feel fake, and how to round up this lie later is also a problem That's all for now

How should I put it, the beginning was like stripping yourself naked and standing in front of a hydra, using a pen to draw key points on your body: Look, here is the heart, here is the kidneys, and by the way, I still have hemorrhoids! The general plot of exposing everything about yourself makes me addicted. Although I can understand that you want to overdo the setting quickly, but you will look a little disgusting later on.

Marvel's Mystery Test is a very interesting place, such as the forces of hell. Each hell king or lord in the hell universe has his own personal pocket universe. Usually these hell forces do not intersect, but they gather together when they meet to choose Satan. [Satan in the Marvel universe is not a person, it represents a title, just like the emperor of a human country. Anyone can hold that position.] For example, the famous trading devil Mephisto also served as a satan.

The more I read the first few chapters, the more familiar they became. I thought the author had opened a new book, but it turned out that this was a direct copy of another novel? And there was no difference between several pictures in a row. I thought I was reading another one 🙂

The author didn't do his homework well. First of all, if the author focuses on the movie universe, Ghost Rider has movies and TV shows. Mephistopheles, the lord of hell, cannot be ignored, after all, he was the one who created the Ghost Rider. And if he is there, there will definitely be heavenly forces. Not only that, the male protagonist was already competing with the hell forces for people when he killed Xu. So I hope the author can slowly rewrite it after reading it. It seems that on the grounds that the male protagonist has not watched the series, he is gradually involved in the mysterious side of Marvel.

The protagonists can completely form a faction, such as the ancient mage's faction or the X-Men's faction. Everyone writes books because they don't want to have contact with SHIELD, but they end up being exposed to SHIELD. There are also people who are invisible to the person who is the god of death.

Collect big villains. If you have any good ideas, you can tell them.

Oh, why are you afraid of S. H. I. E. L. D.? Wear a mask and kill everyone who provokes you. Are you looking to see who dares to mess with you? The one who threatens you will kill the people he cares about. See who threatens whom. If you keep licking, you can't be tougher. If you don't have money, go to the gang. It's a big lesson in licking hair.

Rubbish! He said that he had the strength of three seats, but the No. 31 Kidou was hollowed out as soon as he fired. The strength of three seats could not even defeat a Kilian. The name of the Zanpakutō is also very dramatic.

Doesn't the God of Death only care about the void? Why did Mao go to S. H. I. E. L. D. To fight against the underworld? This has lowered the status of the God of Death.

As for the protagonist, it doesn't matter if he's not Chinese. You can just choose a European or American. After all, it's acceptable to write American comics. So what do you mean by making a Japanese one? 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

Hehehe finally stopped updating. When you write about Death, you write about Death. The soul-killing knife's ability turned out to be summoning, and you actually summoned Sun Wukong. You keep updating, whoever stops updating. Oh yeah!

Forget about the death system, what the hell is the Monkey King, can't there be a captain?

Even if Thanos destroys half of it, he won't be able to destroy Death, right?

Personally, I feel that Little Baker is a failure. He has no other use except dragging down the protagonist.

This name is so ridiculous

It's too slow to update. I've already prepared the monthly tickets.

Rewards for updates 🙂

Where are people? Why do books disappear as long as they are kept?

Resurrected😰😰😰