Legendary Trickster

It's too weird to be given a thief apprentice job after learning lockpicking. The problem is that it is mandatory. The protagonist added attributes before he agreed. I didn't read further. Is this game multi-vocational or single-vocational? I suggest changing the beginning of the single-vocational profession.

The following is only my personal opinion, friendly discussion I did not read in depth when I wrote this paragraph. Only at the beginning of reading (introduction and original text of the first chapter), the author stated that the level limit of the first version of this multiplayer game, Tide of Darkness, is 50, which is obviously high for the label DND. Making people laugh In DND, that is, the rules of Dungeons and Dragons, whether it is from the 1 or 2 editions in ancient times, to the influential 3 or 3.5 Editions, or the 4 editions whose rules or market response are mediocre, the latest 5e, 5r editions, the level of 50 is a number that players cannot touch. In the 5th edition of the DND3 series that is widely used on the desktop, the legendary realm is above level 21, which is almost never open to players in actual play. Detailed legendary expertise/legendary spells and other features are only detailed in the 3rd edition. The famous character Elminster is the chosen one by the Goddess of Magic, the captain of the Queen's firefighting brigade, and the most famous spell caster in the country. He travels through many planes all the time, and he will never reach level 40. In an evaluation system where you can stop time and travel around the world at just over ten levels, a number like level 50 is a meaningless explosion in terms of narrative level and expressiveness. The author's setting of values ​​in this way reflects nothing more than ignorance of, or even contempt for, the DND system. Personally, I suggest that the author remove the label of DND to avoid some wrong perceptions and expectations. I also hope that there will be more respect among different circles

I feel like the protagonist is more like a bard. Haha, it's all about eloquence.

Do you feel that this empire's power is too weak? Although there is division of labor, is the Holy Knights purely SB? And doesn't the empire have its own state religion? There are Christian, Jewish, Muslim, Indian and other religions in foreign countries. China also has Confucianism, Buddhism, Taoism and other religions

The plot is quite similar to "Super Mechanic", reincarnation of a vest? The super awesome Germinating Organization is very much like the super awesome Eye of Darkness The fourth natural disaster. The protagonist plays first. Prophet, attacking the enemy with words and the official force of waste 😊

If only what you wrote was half as good as that of Super Mechanic

Why do you still have players here? ? ?

If you have any thoughts, please tell me here. This book is not a serious game novel, nor is it a serious fourth natural disaster novel. It is a bit of a Western fantasy. Players and data are just tools for the protagonist, so it won't be too outrageous. Of course, if you have better ideas, you are welcome to discuss them. My writing skills are not good, so I will try my best to write a good plot.

Everyone is welcome to make suggestions. If you have a good name, you can type it out.

This book... Ah, forget it, Super Mechanic counts as one to me anyway, and it doesn't seem like it's totally impossible to take a look at it for the time being.

Although there is currently a version, the protagonist seems to have no main plot? Do you not plan or take the initiative to find some benefits when you understand the future? It is too passive to have no goals.

At present, I feel that the protagonist's frontal combat power is too weak, and there is no trick that reflects the protagonist's professional characteristics well. The career settings and skill settings are not too eye-catching, but overall there are not many problems.

One kill, two kills, three kills, that's it for this book.

It seems interesting after reading the introduction. Let's add a bookshelf first. If you are a female protagonist, I suggest you don't have one. . Most Qidian authors (meaning more than 98%) will really lose favor when they write the emotional line and lower the 95-point plot to 30 points... I haven't read your book and I don't know how the writing is, but I suggest you don't add a female protagonist🥺