The Advancing Little Mage

The introduction has a retro style, which is really nostalgic!

It's hard to tell whether the protagonist's encounter is bad luck or good luck.

I don't like the protagonist's character, I'm disgusted by this kind of person

This book seems to be written with a goal of reaching a few million words, so you must persevere. It might become popular after it reaches a million words.

Classifying career settings is a good idea, but you must control it well and don't write it out of order.

Is this Military Body Boxing a prank or is it true? You can't fight with martial arts fists...

The writing is very good and I'll be addicted to it at first glance, but the number of words is too small. Please update it as soon as possible. I say

It is suggested that the author can establish a book club group. As long as you keep writing, more and more people will join you in the future, giving you more followers.

There are a lot of characters appearing in the first chapter, and they all seem to have roles, and it feels like driving directly

Generally, you need to read the introduction before you can understand the book, but for this book, you need to read the introduction before you can understand it.

I feel like it's better to have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist.

The main characters in the book are all vividly portrayed, with distinctive personalities and traditional magical characteristics.

The main plot is not clear enough, but the travel notes or growth experiences are quite exciting.

A reminder from the front row, the protagonist of this book explodes later, so be sure to read a few more chapters~

The overall style is more relaxed, not a hot-blooded, casual book.

The protagonist's personality is very important, it directly affects the readers' interest. It is better to have a higher IQ.

With her status as an empress and the title of the most beautiful woman in the mainland, I think she is probably the future heroine?

Authors should think about what kind of elements they are good at writing. It is best for new authors to write about what they are good at so that they can perform better.

The opening chapter is not attractive enough and not outstanding enough. The three golden chapters still need to be studied, but the connection afterwards is good.

The author can be more bold, such as relying on the IP of some great gods, or adding more intense confrontational plots

The writing style is relatively mature and quite good among new authors, but the imagination can be improved.

The world map has initially appeared. It's best to hide it a little bit and don't reveal it all at once.

The dual cultivation of magic and martial arts can be placed in the introduction or title of the book, which will make it more attractive than it is now.

Readers have different grade levels. If this book is for people under the age of 20, it doesn't matter if they are in Secondary 2.

It's okay, overall there's nothing wrong with it, but it also feels like it's missing some of the main highlights.

Just two words, word count, word count, come up quickly, no matter how you write, keep up with the word count first

The character traits of the supporting characters are pretty good and could be enriched a bit more

You must keep writing the early books no matter what, as it will improve your future writing path.

Oh? I found that the protagonist's name was pretty good,

I suggest the author list the cultivation levels in a single chapter. The writing is very wonderful, but I have never been able to distinguish the realm.