Reborn in Japan to Write Web Novels

Overall, it's okay so far, the writing is okay, and the plot isn't too toxic (I personally think it has two and a half toxic points), except for the emotional line which is dragging (half a toxic point). The next thing is where I was poisoned for the first time. I am not happy if I don't vomit: What is the protagonist's psychology? When choosing a publishing house for a new book for the first time, you don't even shop around (the key point here is, I really don't understand it. How can you know it won't work if you don't try it? I don't want your opinion, I want my opinion? Without trying it, you think other big publishing houses will crazily squeeze the protagonist?)? Especially in the Japanese publishing industry, don't you know what will happen if you are a slave with three surnames? Don't you know what will happen to Tanigawa Ryu? The back part gives people the feeling that they are not editing for beautiful women, why should they vote for HJ Library? After taking a look at it, What did HJ Bunko do? It only hindered the protagonist. It didn't promote the new book (after all, newcomers can understand), but it was sold out. What the hell is it like squeezing out toothpaste for printing (a disease of big companies?), And then randomly found a novice illustrator (new author with novice painter, understandable, but look at what this artist does after that), if the protagonist hadn't written it The text of the novel is good, but selling illustrations and sending toilet paper is not feasible. In the final analysis, it is not because the protagonist does not shop around and licks you from the beginning. It would be strange if HJ Library does not squeeze you to death (novice painters have done that kind of thing and did not take the initiative to change it. They also want to negotiate with the protagonist. It feels like they have the protagonist, but later found out that this group of people really thought this way, and then they really fell over)! PS: What the hell are those people criticizing me for? You guys have ordered them all! At least I just complain about things that I think are unreasonable, and I always support them. You guys trolled me so hard, I thought you were die-hard fans who couldn't bear to hear people say bad things about their works, but in the end it turned out that you were just plain bad-mouthed trolls

Can girls be changed to girls, girls, and written the same as Red Boy?

Judging from the author's humorous comments, he clearly explained all the poisonous points and the advantages of refreshing writing, but as a result, there were many poisonous points in his book one after another. As for Riqing, who gave you the courage to despise an industry that has been mature for decades? It is undeniable that although people have a lot of toilet paper, God still has it. Just like there is no shortage of toilet paper in my country's online literary world, there are also great gods after all. Furthermore, what is the use of China's advanced online writing experience? National conditions and environments are different. What the Chinese like to read may not necessarily be liked by the Japanese. Do Japanese people like to read your story about feelings about family and country? People like things that are small and beautiful, but they also like things that are pretentious. Do you like to read their works when they come to China? Those who have different wills cannot agree with each other. This is a novel written entirely according to Chinese logic and does not take the Japanese into consideration at all. With the subject matter, why bother setting up Japan? Letting go of the parallel world of China would not be much more beautiful. At least the Chinese are good at this

I've read two hundred chapters and I don't know what the author wants to write. You said you wanted to write what you wanted to write, but what you wrote is not that exciting. The emotional drama is too weak. The emotional line you wrote is very embarrassing, not funny, not heartwarming, and has no twists and turns. It is too bland, which is to say boring. If you don't focus on the emotional line, why write so many words? It's unnecessary. To be honest, the male protagonist has no personality at all, and there are not two female protagonists with distinctive personalities. Moreover, the male protagonist is a thirty-year-old street writer before time travel (I can't admit that earning more than 10,000 yuan a month can be called a street writer). I think the title of the book is "Rebirth of Japan to teach readers to write starting points for online articles". There is no foreshadowing for you to be slow, and there is nothing. It is just the passing of time. The main character I'm making money again, and I'm thinking of other channels to make more money. What I'm really convinced about is that if you write electronic copyrights for a book, Japanese, simplified Chinese, traditional Chinese, and English copyrights, will you also write copyrights in French, English, Russian, and German in the future? To be honest, these things are meaningless. You have written so many things that can be explained in one or two chapters. You have written online articles until now ( I saw two hundred chapters) is still a book, and it can be surrounded by a lot of peripheral animations, comics, figures, and theatrical versions. Just change the title of the book to Save the Japanese Industry. The protagonist teaches others how to write books. You yourself have made the same mistake as you said. It is not exciting, it is boring, and you want to write what you want to write anyway, so just treat me as irritating and don't worry about it.

The title of the book was changed to "Rebirth of Japan" and "Let's Draw a Sword and Kill It in Another World" 🙂

The most disturbing thing about this book is the emotional scene. The protagonist clearly looked at him squarely, but he didn't care about the heroine. He also asked why she was angry. Didn't he have some clues in his heart? This guy is no longer straight, he has cerebral palsy! If you want to have a harem, be open and honest, or don't play ambiguous. This emotional scene looks so disgusting!

The plot is too vulgar and cliched, and the pretentiousness is too blunt. Author, have you really been around at the starting point? It is also too paper-based. Why do I feel that the author treats me as a Japanese in the article who has never seen online articles?

The protagonist is really funny. When writing online articles, he assumes the personality of a time traveler. When dealing with the publishing house, he assumes the personality of an aboriginal. He kneels down and bursts into tears with gratitude. The royalties of hundreds of thousands of yen (the author is so stupid that he can't even distinguish between royalties and royalties and still pays the royalties), which makes the protagonist astonished. The publisher even decided to print an additional 1,000 copies after selling out all 3,000 copies in one day. In reality, S13 Publishing House doesn't even know that it is stingy. I advise anyone with recommendation votes not to vote for this book, because this book was written by the author while patting his head!

6, Writers use originality when writing novels. It is recommended that you don't create something original in it, but send him directly to the real world to see how many people you can crush.

Why are you still drawing your sword after writing so many chapters... And shouldn't the biggest joy of this type of novel be that the stupid neon man is impressed by the starting point routine in the protagonist's novel? Why are you writing so much shit about publishers and anime?