Half Step to Immortality

After seeing more than a dozen pictures, I finally got a taste of martial arts 😍

Shiloh said, 😰Yeah, yeah, come on.

What the hell is this written about? ! A bit disgusting as a pseudo-literary youth

This pig's foot is said to be from time travel. It doesn't have such a big brain at all. It is said that it is not from time travel. It is even more brainless. I don't know what to express. Just say that the grandfather who has spent his whole life working in iron can just sit back and watch the rumors all over the city so that his grandson can become a person who burns, kills, loots and commits all kinds of evil? How could a founding prince not dare to really discipline him and not investigate him just because he is spoiled by his father? A prince's son was framed and the people in the city knew about it but didn't know about him? Are there dead people around you? It can only be haha

I want to know, if your book has not been signed, how did it get on the signed list?

Is it true that Internet article authors have entered an era of spending money when writing Internet articles?

It's disgusting that the pig's feet are moaning for no reason.

It's so fake, you can't get your money back.

The plot is procrastinating and confusing, with no distinction between priorities and priorities. I had to read the first few chapters, but after chapters 20 and 30, I didn't know what to write and couldn't see the main plot.

The writing is really good, I feel that the young prince is the protagonist and he was framed for killing the woman. This really feels like a swordsmanship in the snow. And as far as these chapters are concerned, they are indeed better than the previous chapters in Snow.

This data must have been purchased by TB!

Some people like it, and some don't. Anyway, I don't like it, but I won't make personal attacks. Writing a book is not easy, so just do it and cherish it. Trolls, if you troll the author away, no one will write a book!

What is written here? When you reach 100,000 words, come back and take a look. Where is the half step?

To be honest, the article is dense and messy, with a bit of snowy flavor. How many readers do you think will pay for it in the current market?

To be honest, just from the writing style, it is quite literary and really good. But this data... Is a bit too exaggerated.

The beginning is very attractive, some parts are a bit sloppy, but the key points are very exciting, the overall direction is very good, it will definitely be a good work.

Can't you make more updates? It's so frustrating to wait😭😭😭😭

Very interesting... Very relaxing and comfortable to watch 😚😚

There are too many pitfalls at the beginning, but no explanation at all, so I say goodbye.

I specially registered an account to curse people. First of all, it's a bit novel that the protagonist is disabled through time travel, but whether you want to create suspense or dig holes, the key theme must be clear! At least let everyone know what you wrote. It needs literary talent. You have no literary talent. The plot is unclear. It makes people uncomfortable after reading your book. Are you here specifically to scold me?