Escape Dimension

This is my little brother's trumpet account. I can't comment on the larger account in the assistant. . . . I will read it at the starting point after publishing the chapter. First, I will correct some typos, second, I will change some modifiers, and third, I will train myself (a bit far-fetched...) I can do it, I will definitely be able to do it. . . . .

"Escape Dimension" Author: The Dream Genre: Science Fiction Rating: 7.7 Book Review: The writing style is relatively smooth, and the characters' expressions and behaviors are very vivid. I suggest that you can strengthen some details of the psychological description, and then modify the wording in some places. It may be more delicate to read and the picture will be stronger! Remember to correct typos and modifiers to make it even more perfect! As for the plot, the setting of the resurrection from the dead in the era of the ship star, I personally think is very novel and interesting. This is a point that can attract readers. The ups and downs of the plot and the control of the rhythm are no problem at present, and it is very interesting to read. The only flaw is that the article is too short. Please keep up the good work and update it (*≧ω≦). Overall, the writing style and plot settings are good. I have already subscribed to my favorites. Please continue to work hard! From：chushiji