Konoha's Beginning Kaleidoscope

I have only read a dozen chapters, and I can't bear to complain about a few points: The Fourth Mizukage Yagura was not controlled at all during the Third War; At the beginning of the Third War, the Kazekage disappeared and then the Sand Ninja and the Iwa Ninja attacked Konoha; The bridge of God in the Third War in the original work The battle (the death of Obito) interrupted the Iwa Ninja's supply line. It was because of various reasons and the situation of the battle that the Iwa Ninja had to withdraw their troops. The Iwa Ninja actually had an advantage in the frontal battlefield between the Iwa Ninja and Konoha, but the Iwa Ninja was stolen by the Third Raikage. Then the Third Tsuchikage led ten thousand Iwa Ninja to surround the Raikage to death. As a result, the Iwa Ninja were severely injured and the Kumo Ninja were leaderless. The two great ninja villages had no intention of fighting again. The Sand Ninjas were the first to be defeated because they were the weakest among the five major nations and were the first to launch an attack. The Mist Ninja battlefield was suppressed by the Uchiha clan, and then the Seven Ninja Swordsmen were sent to sneak attack Konoha's supply line to the Mist Ninja battlefield. When they met Matt Dai, half of them were kicked to death by the Eight Gates. Then the Mist Ninja had no intention of fighting anymore and just retreated Anyone who has different opinions, or the author, please come out and tell me what the hell you wrote. Did you enjoy the original work? Comments below are welcome

This novel was a bit disappointing. The behavior of the protagonist really makes readers feel a little bit different. After chapter 80, I really became less and less interested in reading it. This novel must be another unfinished masterpiece.

Well, time has gone too fast, it's only been a few chapters and it's been ten years later

The protagonist planned for ten years and successfully allowed Nagato to channel the heretic demon while Madara was still alive. But he never expected that Madara would be saved by the author and continue to train him to cause trouble. 🤝

The character of this protagonist is a bitch, ***, 250. I care about this, I care about that, I want to do it but can't do it, I want to do it but don't dare to do it. Cares about more things than Naruto.

After reading the introduction, I thought that the protagonist would not be able to use the Sharingan, but after reading the book, I felt very disappointed. The author still did not break away from the overall pattern of Naruto and blindly pursue the bloodline. Although the book is still good, it is not as amazing as when I read the introduction. To be honest, I despise the Japanese way of judging heroes based on their bloodline. Why can't ordinary people defy the odds? In your Naruto world, bloodline is the key to talking about. So, as a time traveler, I should be a little different, right?

It was on the search list, I didn't expect it.

Not bad🙂

There is a new "pressure treasure" in investment, making a fortune without any thought.

After reading all of them, what I saw was a stupid protagonist. The writing was okay, but I was unhappy with the character of the protagonist. To put it bluntly, it's just naive. After Naruto, will the ninja world be peaceful only when people understand each other? Are you kidding me? It should be Nazuo and you who are too strong to understand each other. In addition, powerful enemies will appear one after another in the later stage, and the ninja world will be peaceful.

Believe me, that's right (manual funny)

Suggestions for the author When I saw the idea of ​​cloning the reincarnation eye, I thought the author's idea was quite good, so I will also give you an idea. Chiaki Asagi, the protagonist of Naruto: Naruto Expedition, Yamanakahara, and Infinite Prophet Xu Yue, the three protagonists in these three novels all made the same thing, which was to use part of the heretic golem and part of the chakra of the nine tailed beasts to make a small pseudo-Ten-Tails. The former Asagi Chiaki did not have the Samsara Eye to control the small pseudo-Ten-Tails, so he could only control the small pseudo-Ten-Tails through After sealing the Ten-Tails and entering his own body, he enters the pseudo-Ten-Tails chakra mode. The latter two have the Rinnegan and can control the Ten-Tails to enter the Six Paths Sage mode. If you want to clone the Rinnegan, why don't you get another pseudo-Ten-Tails. The complete Ten-Tails Jinchūriki will become Kaguya's sacrifice, but the pseudo-Ten-Tails will not. The only difference is that the pseudo-Ten-Tails is weaker than the original one. I hope the author can take my suggestions seriously.

I was so overwhelmed with writing that I arranged the plot of Nagato summoning the Heretic Golem before the plot of Kakashi killing Lin? Then Obito went berserk, and Madara died without the chakra of the heretic golem to sustain his life. Moreover, Obito had not grown up, and his heart was not cursed by Madara (because Madara was already dead without the heretic golem). The original Madara finished explaining Obito and asked Black Zetsu to supervise Obito to actively cut off the link to the heretic golem. Without chakra to maintain his life, he died on the spot. You haven't discovered the loopholes you wrote yet and are still writing them down.

☜(`O´)I want this skin

To be honest, I'm looking forward to it, because after reading the book for a long time, I have a problem, I don't like to watch the protagonist slowly transform from a rookie to a boss. I quite like this kind of novel that has strong combat power at the beginning. Although the author is a newbie, I still give him a thumbs up! It's only 70,000 words now, so let's save it first. Hehe.

This is the most venomous Naruto story I have ever read. The narrative is vague and not smooth. It is narrated completely according to the famous events of the original work, and what happened at the key time points needs to be consistent with the time points of the original work. Before the time of the original work was reached, there was completely blank time in the middle, without extending the author's own ideas. Ten years had passed with one title. The ambush has to be laid right in front of the readers' eyes. You might as well write this point directly. What's the point?

My picture must be the most beautiful.

I almost gave up on the first few thoughts, the writing was a bit childish, and the friendship with Fugaku was superficial. You must know that this is a ruthless man who can sacrifice the entire Uchiha clan for his son!

Uchiha is an urban management brigade, so the villagers are bound to be ostracized and disliked

The fantasy routine (the grandson of the elder) is covered by the Hokage's skin. Also, the backup plan that took ten years to prepare is of no use. Others are going to kill him and his relatives. A few words that have nothing to do with him are let go. The most disgusting thing is that they have been following the original work to change it. The original plot is still the same. Brother, it has been more than ten years.

Whether the writing is good or not is a technical issue, but the eunuch's failure to make an announcement is a matter of character.

It makes the protagonist too soft-tempered and not decisive.

I'm so hot. I have a supporting character named Lord of Mysteries. This is a stupid novel that dares to gain popularity. Go and give Ning🐎 a spark

What the hell is this book's character list?

Haha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

It's so damn toxic, I really don't recommend watching it.

It's a bit embarrassing! The protagonist feels that Naruto was able to fight a country's war. First, after the first battle, many low-level ninjas died, and even many high-level leaders died. Second, the final battle scared all countries. Before the Warring States Period, even Hashirama and Madara's combat power was not unacceptable, but are Naruto and Erzhu's human combat power? Infinite spiral hand sword, the ultimate version of Susan, the third Naruto was just that old at the time, and all countries were on the same page, you Otongmu family can play by yourself, even if you live to 30, there are still more than ten years, after Tsunade retired, it was Kakashi, but nothing really changed when Naruto came to power, even his daughter was almost written as a caged bird,

Very nice author who sticks to his own style and doesn't want to be influenced by others.

Personally, I don't think this book is good. It makes people angry after reading it.

Brother, the first dozen or so chapters are a bit awkward to read. As for the second chapter, I haven't read it yet, so I decided to calm down and look at the good points.