Magic Hand

The plot setting is very blunt! Before Chapter 22, I forgot that the protagonist was a time traveler, but then I remembered that the protagonist was a time traveler. According to the two protagonists, there is no need for the city lord to assassinate two rune masters. He has conquered almost all of them, so he still wants to kill people? ? ? Big question mark. ? Author, you don't have to do it for the protagonist. The plot is blunt and awkward, and later it is said that the slave rune master will be hunted down by the union. Is it necessary for the city owner to take such a risk? ? Throwing away things, looking at one thing and forgetting the other, picking up sesame seeds and losing the watermelon!

Didn't see any response, time traveler? Since you are a time traveler, there will definitely be cultural differences. After traveling through time, what about the integration of cultures? I've read Chapter 16, and I haven't seen any time travel questions at all. I have been writing about unicorn arms and unruly girls (basically in novels, the first woman the protagonist meets is almost always a unruly girl, and I'm tired of it!), But of course this one is not that serious. The protagonist was originally a scumbag, but after time travel, he became stronger. Except for a unicorn arm, no one has mentioned the changes brought about by time travel! This is very inappropriate. If you don't combine it with something modern or something (sword making/ship repair) and don't have something eye-catching, how can you make people remember it?

It wasn't until Chapter 22 that he said that he was a time traveler and that he was a dog before? What kind of love is there for a master? . . What a ridiculous thing! I really don't know if I haven't traveled through time before Chapter 22? ? ! ! I don't see the atmosphere of a time traveler at all, so I really don't know what the author was thinking. Question! ! ! !

Nice introduction...? It's just that the plot and introduction don't match up, right? ? ? ?

The writing is okay, but why don't many people read it? I hope the author can persist

The protagonist moved unconsciously while watching the short video "Kilin Arm"? ? ? ? Ding, congratulations to the host for enchanting the little penis with "Reduce Rune", "Enlarge Rune" and "Endurance Rune"

Come on, author, please update. . . . . Persistence is victory

IQ! IQ! IQ!