The Apostle of Humanity

See Chapter 11. The author responded to me in the book list and post more seriously, so I read it again more carefully. The structure of the work has detailed settings and balance. In fact, how to balance supernatural forces with political economy has always been a difficult problem when creating urban supernatural powers. This work has a subdivided map of the urban campus, and the balance is very careful. It can be seen that the author has thoughts to express. The narration basically has the male protagonist leading the rhythm. Generally this is not good. On the contrary, it is necessary to downplay him and isolate him, which will highlight his wolf nature. You can take a look at the narratives of the first few Wolverine movies and The Matrix. There is a skill you need here, that is, everyone is a normal city in the bright field. Then use night or dark lines or copies to directly create dark scenes. This kind of repeated maxing out of the same event or map is very suitable for the protagonist's temperament. Finally, there is his partner. The distance should be kept apart and the age of the girl should be lowered. This feels better, so this is probably how an uncle matches a lolita. The action design should be cool, and it should be given according to the requirements of action movies. The tone should be cool and dark, and use a yellow car when necessary. The protagonist talks too much, so it would be better if everything was restrained so that the killing would be shocking. For multiple revisions, you need concise, violent and smooth writing, which is more suitable for such a structure and core. Come on~

Why don't you write it? I feel that this book is generally very smooth and good to read. The setting of this book is quite novel. Although there are some flaws, it is the first book after all, so it is already very good.

The title and title of the book are a bit interesting. After reading the beginning, isn't this some sort of spiritual energy revival flow? My interest suddenly dropped. After reading a few more chapters, they are all about the introduction and development of routines. They are quite satisfactory and there are no innovative breakthroughs. It's not a poisonous weed, but it's nothing fancy either, just like that.

It felt pretty good at first. Have the motivation to keep reading

The student party has no money to charge. You can only subscribe to your chapter by grabbing red envelopes. When I have money - let's talk about it then. Haha

In fact, your writing is quite good, but it's too fast-paced and not detailed enough. But it shouldn't be too detailed, it should be a little sensational.

I think it's good. Why are there so few people?

All the gods and demons are showing off, only humans are being beaten

I'm looking for a role, Jiangshan. I hope it's on the freshman list.

I hope the author can make the plot bigger and add some sense of logical analysis. If it is just plain and straightforward, people will lose interest in the mid-term. I hope the author can learn from some of San Zha's silly jokes. Haha, I'm optimistic about you. I have added 1,000 starting coins.