I’m Buying a Membership in Konoha

Although Naruto has too many bugs... Well, there are too many to count.

The Hyuga clan! To be honest, the Hyuga, which claims to be one of the three great dojutsu and the strongest clan in Konoha after the Uchiha, is really undeserving of its reputation. The whole family's strength is just that of extras.

Since this is my first time writing a book on this platform, I'm not very clear on many things. I hope readers can offer suggestions, and I will correct any inaccuracies in the settings as soon as possible. The most frequently raised issue seems to be the intelligent system. Some people say that the intelligent system is a problem with the current mascot, but I really don't know about that.

He awakened the Sharingan at one year old, the Mangekyou Sharingan at two, conquered all the beauties at school at three, graduated as a genin at four, joined the Anbu at five, became a Kage at six, easily defeated Madara Uchiha at seven, wiped out the Otsutsuki clan at eight, and became invincible at nine, beginning his journey through countless worlds.

The Naruto characters' money is in taels, bro, that's the exchange rate for yen. You're just throwing around one dollar, even ten thousand dollars would look awkward. 😳😳😳😳😳😳😡😡😡😡😡

Another point is that among the five great villages, only the Mist Village would kill their comrades. They are pure ninjas who would stop at nothing for their missions. The Cloud Village values ​​bonds the most. If you read the original work carefully, you'll know that every generation of Cloud Village ninjas has deep bonds and many have sacrificed themselves to save their teammates.

Aside from Neji's resentment towards the main branch of the family due to Hizashi's death, Hizashi was only dissatisfied that Hinata, who was far inferior to Neji, could become the main branch. When it came to Hiashi's sake, Hizashi still stood up for him. Even after being reborn as Toshido, Hizashi didn't hold any grudges against Hiashi.

😅🥵To be honest, the protagonist's age doesn't quite match the plot you've written; it feels awkward and makes it difficult to immerse oneself in the story.

It's clear the author's writing style has a bit of a "fighting spirit turning into a horse" feel to it, which makes me want to complain, but I don't know where to start. It's frustrating.

This book also falls into the trap of exploiting abilities. The Hyuga clan possesses the Shikotsumyaku (Corpse Bone Pulse), which is problematic for two reasons. First, it creates plot holes that are difficult to explain, as it's unusable in large-scale battles. Second, no reader will find exploited abilities satisfying.