
I’m Buying a Membership in Konoha
我在木叶冲会员
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- 438k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 7y ago
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- Qidian
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Taking the Anime World All the Way
Since this is an anime and manga list, the more over-the-top, action-packed, imaginative, and risqué, the better... As long as it doesn't get censored. So let's begin our journey through the world of anime! Whether you're a newcomer 😉😉😉 or a big name 😘😘😘, if your writing is good 🤔🤔🤔, I'll support you 🤒🤒🤒. I'll screen books carefully 🌝🌝🌝, remove abandoned ones 😂😂😂, remove books that stop updating 😷😷😷, and remove stories with broken plots 👐👐👐. I have to write my own book 😥😥😥 and review all these b
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Just on a whim, why don't you all list out the things in the original work that you think are unreasonable?
Although there are Naruto bugs... Well, I can't count them all.
The Hinata family! To be honest, Hinata, who is known as one of the three major pupil arts and the most wealthy family in Konoha after the Uchiha, is really not worthy of his name. The strength of the whole family is just a helper.
Evaluate and correct errors!
Because it is my first time to write a book on Dian Niang, many situations are not very clear. I hope that readers can give suggestions. If there are any incorrect settings, I will correct them in time. At present, the most common topic raised by everyone seems to be about the intelligent system. Some people say that the intelligent system is a poisonous point in Dian Niang. I really don't know about this. If everyone feels that this is not good, I will make some improvements in the future. Finally, thank you all for your support. Thanks~!
Normal time traveler
He opened the Sharingan at the age of one, developed the Mangekyou at the age of two, learned all about school beauties at the age of three, graduated as a genin at the age of four, joined the ANBU at the age of five, was a Kage at the age of six, defeated the Six Paths Madara at the age of seven, destroyed the Otsutsuki clan at the age of eight, and was invincible in the world at the age of nine and began to travel through all realms.
The Hokage's money is two yen, big brother, the exchange rate. Your special piece, one hundred thousand dollars is embarrassing to look at 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😡😡😡😡😡
Another point is that only Kiri in the five major villages will kill his comrades. They are pure ninjas who will do whatever it takes for the mission. The one who pays the most attention to bonds is Yun. If you read the original work carefully, you will know that each generation of Yun ninjas has deep bonds and sacrifices to save their teammates. There is a lot less intrigue than Konoha. Even if there are human beings, there are deep bonds. The two who could perfectly control the tailed beasts before the Fourth World War were both Kumo ninjas, so the author wrote too poorly about Kumo ninjas...
I'm thinking about the conflict between the Hyuga branch family and the main family again.
In addition to Ningci's hatred towards the clan because of Hizashi's death, Hizashi was also dissatisfied with Hinata, who was far inferior to Neci, being able to become a clan clan. When it came time to really do it for Hizashi, Hizashi didn't stand up. After Hizashi was reincarnated in Suitou, he didn't have any objections to Hizashi. The caged bird is originally beneficial to family separation. Without the caged bird, family separation would not be able to go out. As for the Zong family, the Zong family doesn't go out at all. Whenever they go out, they will be attacked. They stay at home and act like rice bugs. In fact, they are like caged birds. Hinata has caged birds regardless of the branch family, one is visible and the other is invisible.
Isn't the protagonist only 5 or 6 years old? Let's go drinking together, and we're still drunk
😅🥵 To be honest, the age of the protagonist is a little inappropriate for the plot you wrote. It looks awkward and the sense of involvement is too poor. .
I almost thought I would watch the original Aotian campus scene again
It can be seen that the author's writing style has a bit of a "fighting spirit turning into a horse" feeling. I want to complain a little bit, but I don't know where to complain, and I feel uncomfortable holding it in.
This book has not escaped the trap of misappropriating abilities. The Hyuga family knows the bones of the dead. The first is that the plot is unexplainable and cannot be used in large-scale battles. Secondly, no readers will find it exciting to steal abilities. People who watch Naruto are very mature. Even with the help of golden fingers, logic is needed, or you are an enhanced type, enhance soft fists and physical fitness to evolve white eyes. Either you are a creative type and can learn non-attribute ninjutsu or medical ninjutsu combined with soft fist without leaving the characteristics of the Hyuga family. Otherwise, if you just change the family, it won't matter if you have all the five middle schools. If you characterize the Hyuga family at the beginning and guide readers' imagination and expectations, it will end at the end. This kind of book is destined to have no good results, and you will lose the most attractive thing.