Super God Academy: Blade of War

The suggestion is to speed things up and finish it in one go.

Personally, I think this novel is good, with no major flaws. My advice for fanfiction is to avoid writing romance; romance is a difficult element, and poor writing can easily ruin it. It's best to gloss over it briefly. I feel this novel has great potential; if it doesn't fall apart later on, it'll be quite perfect.

Although I don't have much money to tip you, my daily recommendation votes can support you. I hope you'll update soon!

Super God Academy is an anime that attracts viewers with its thighs and genitals. The rest was a complete mess. (Having powerful connections is enough.) Without a harem, I find it completely unappealing. Also, we don't know exactly what the void is yet, so be careful that it doesn't conflict too much with the anime plot later on.

... Now Yan seems like the Misaka Mikoto from back then, emmmmmm, author, if you're going to write a single female lead, don't treat Yan as a backup. These days, everyone writing super-powerful stories treats Yan as a backup. The mighty Angel King reduced to a backup is even worse than Ge Yan. Either start a harem, or be single, or have a single female lead, stop with the fancy stuff. Ge Xiaolun is also pitiful. 😤The above is just my personal opinion, discussion is welcome.

After reviewing the initial chapters, I feel this book is excellent, just a bit slow to update. Author, keep it up! If you maintain the quality of the first few chapters, I think it has great potential.

Personally, I feel the protagonist is quite strange in some ways. As a god, instead of developing his abilities, he spends all his time being a lazy bum? What's the point of being a lazy bum if he can't even guarantee his own safety? Even with a third-generation body, he can't absorb enough energy to upgrade and needs help from the Sun Star.

It seems like Yan isn't in this one, so I'm not really interested. At the beginning, we thought Yan was the female lead, but then Qi Lin appeared halfway through. It's not very interesting.

I just subscribed, and the female lead isn't Yan?! Then why did you write so much about Yan's storyline, and then have Qi Lin, who hasn't had much of a plot in dozens of chapters, be the female lead? Disgusting! I'm not reading anymore.

I'm disgusted. They wrote so much about the romance between He Yan and the female lead, but she barely appeared later on. It's really disgusting. Qi Lin had very little screen time at the beginning, but they forced her to become the female lead.