Wood Escape Users in the Pirate World

It's well written, but the pace is a bit slow.

I didn't want to read it after seeing the introduction. There must be another one who blackmails Akainu. I really don't understand what's wrong with Akainu. It's enough for a real soldier to be blackmailed so miserably.

First, it is okay to set a special race for the protagonist, but it is too weak. He can kill a hundred ordinary people as an adult. Author, do you think this makes him strong? In One Piece, ordinary people are trash, and the three Luffy brothers were able to fight dozens of them when they were young. Secondly, the protagonist still has his parents alive, which I personally feel is very bad. Family relationships are rarely described in the One Piece world, because family relationships can create weaknesses, so it would be better to just set him as an orphan. Or the protagonist's parents are powerful and dominant, but they can easily conflict with the original work. Thirdly, there are too many descriptions of Haki. Readers all know what Haki is, so they can just go through it. There is also the history of the Straff clan. I personally am not interested in those at all. Instead, I find them verbose and annoying. There are some details that I won't go into. After all, newcomers and new books are all problems that can be avoided by paying attention. I have read books for more than ten years, and now I can't help but look at everything with a strict eye. I feel very awkward about the smallest problems. I personally don't like to read those popular mainstream novels. I want to write a book but find it too troublesome. I am a lazy person. Let me mention a few things that I think are worth noting in fan fiction. The characters in the original works cannot be messed up: this is particularly important. For example, Akainu will not let the pirates go, Shanks will not kill innocent people indiscriminately, and Sengoku has a high IQ and will not do stupid things. Big names will not pay attention to small fish and shrimps. Like some novels, the protagonist offers a reward of tens of millions to attract the attention of the four emperors during the Warring States Period. Don't! Fighting scenes: Don't be too detailed and don't go over them in one stroke. If you look too closely, you will feel like you are watching martial arts, and if you don't describe it, it will become an alternative city. If they are evenly matched, the fight will last for several days, after all, One Piece fans. Heart-blooded manga: One Piece is a hot-blooded comic. The protagonist who is too rational has no sense of involvement. It has to have the feeling of fighting even if you can't beat it, and doing it even if you know you shouldn't do it. Go back and read what you have written before, otherwise you will end up digging a hole but not filling it, ending in an anticlimax. I think fan fiction is more difficult to write well than original work, because fan fiction has reference to the original work, and readers will compare it with the original work, and some loose points will become poisonous points. I write so much just to have a novel that I like and can read. Finally, I hope the author will work hard.

I am a student member, and now my daily membership is stable at 4,000+, but it almost reaches 5,000 every day. Update time is double eight o'clock in the morning and evening. It was supposed to be about the time it was put on the shelves, but now that I think about it, I just want to mention it. I don't know if there will be an update one day! 1. One update will be added for every 5,000 rewards. 2. When the first 10,000 rewards appear, in addition to the two updates worth 5,000, an additional update will be added. The number of words is still short at the moment, please add the rules later!

The Wood Release without Yang Release is Yamato level, and the Wood Release of the big pillar is + Yang Release and Xianjutsu.

The word count is too few, please come back with more words.

Wooden Release is a privileged dog ability in Naruto. It can absorb any chakara and self-proliferate. Those who can only use Chakara are restrained to death, just like the Northern Ming Shen Gong and internal power. However, after leaving the world of Naruto, the practicality of Wooden Release has been severely reduced. It cannot absorb true energy, internal force, magic, fighting spirit, domineering, and fruit abilities. It is not as useful as the druid's control of plants.

Can you give me your feedback on my book? For example, what is not well written, what needs improvement, etc. Of course, don't talk about changing the protagonist's name (ಡωಡ)hiahiahi Just comment on this floor. I will read your opinions carefully and I will change what I can.

A lot of civilians died because of Luffy, and Luffy was not a good person.

Jieyin really couldn't stand it. Do you have time to form seals when masters compete with each other? If you write about pirates, write about pirates well. You can get the Mumu Fruit because the protagonist has watched Naruto and can learn from the moves to develop the fruit's abilities. You make a seal. . . Maybe you wrote this book just for fun? If so then it doesn't matter. You can write whatever you want. If you want to write a good book, you have to think about it seriously.

I feel that the fight between Golden Lion and Roger was so tragic because Roger had Lord Bucky on board.

Fire's consciousness is to be a pirate? 🤫🤫🤫

Why not updated

No... You are not alone

Superhuman system classification, superhuman body, superpowers, creation system, local powers, and control system.

"Purple Sweet Potato 2" is released tonight... Another wave of Marvel fever... I ٩(๑`н´๑)۶Why can't One Piece make a big move! ! Angry😡

Wow, the article is great, I look forward to the update. Good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Oh my god, I update every day, but today a good friend came to Shanghai for only one day. I put down my studies and went to play with him for a day, but I also updated a chapter... Why does it show that it has not been updated for seven consecutive days? I am so angry that all the investments made by the ten well-intentioned book friends like me have failed!

No matter how you write, please support me daily, come on

Another person who was poisoned by this pirate thing, why did he want to become a pirate? Why didn't he just go for it?

Recruiting actors, friends who are passing by, please help! Even if you don't read the book, add bookshelf, or vote for recommendation, you can still have a supporting role! For example: Name Nicholas Zhaosi Gender Male Ability Superman type·Dance Fruit

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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Haha, I still need to form seals, bye bye

What a great idea. Come on, author.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The threshold for writing novels is as low as cross talk. You have to work hard on your own. When writing this kind of fan fiction, don't lay out too many chapters in the early stage. You have read the original work, which seems too ink.

Why did Mao write about his father in such detail? If I don't understand it, I'll just skip it and it won't have any big impact.

Pirates is written around pirates, so the definition of pirates is cruelty, darkness, and killing. That world should not be saved unless there is revolution