You’re Possessing Me

I'm just expressing my personal opinion. I believe everyone knows that human nature cannot be tested. In the book, the author asks Chen Qingfeng and his wife to be true love. Then don't go and have sex with Chen. Don't you know what will happen to them after the protagonist leaves?

To be honest, author, you need to revise the synopsis of your book. The synopsis gave me the general impression of a modern setting with a resurgence of demonic energy, and the protagonist being a ghost (and probably a malevolent one), possessing and seducing souls. Overall, it seemed to be leaning towards a dark fantasy genre.

I finished reading it in one go. Some reviews were negative about the book, but I personally thought it was quite good and innovative (was the author trying to create a horror park-like atmosphere?). I didn't find any major flaws. I think the poor sales are because too few people know about it 😄. I wouldn't have found it if I hadn't been browsing randomly. The author could try using social media to get some chapter recommendations or post some ads. I hope the author perseveres.

The ghosts' instincts are all restricted, leading to being trapped in a maze? Isn't that something ghosts are born with? And then there's the meddling, the protagonist's intelligence is reduced, I really don't know what to say. People often say that if you give me a lever long enough and a fulcrum on which to place it, I can move the world. The protagonist has to rely on the system to become a ghost, so are the other ghosts' skills also given by the system?

The beginning was alright, but it got increasingly overly saintly later on. Especially with the introduction of the female lead, she's such an idiot, it's really annoying. And isn't it ridiculous that the ghost cultivator mainly focuses on fire magic? One of the Ten Great Yin Marshals, Ox-Head and Horse-Face, can't even defeat a bunch of newly formed little ghosts.

In the later stages of the Grand Primordial Ceremony, Chen Jiu was the only cultivator; the large number of demonic cultivators felt odd. Moreover, the target was the release of Nightmare, one of the Ten Great Heavenly Demons. Such a momentous event... And the cultivation sects and the imperial court seemed completely blind to it.

The author is good, but his skill is lacking. But you can't force the protagonist to become less intelligent.

Follow your own ideas, don't waver easily, and keep going!

I've subscribed to the whole thing. Keep writing, it's really good and has the potential to become a legend.

The writing style is too depressing and dry; it lacks appeal.