Clouds Rise Over Valoran

I thought the author would take me to experience the scenery of Runeterra, but he wrote more than two hundred chapters about the war between Demacia and Noxus... Since we know the grandeur of the world and don't explore the truth, why does the protagonist fight like ants? Glory? Justice? What does it matter in front of the giant? What does it mean before the void? The Star-Forging Dragon King can create and destroy stars with just a few clicks... The scenery on the thousand-year-old ice of Freljord, the isolated Ionia, the two sides of Piltover and Zaun, Pilgewater where pirates clamor, the mysterious Shadow Island, the yellow sand sky of Shurima, towering into the clouds Targon... At this level of procrastination, even if I write more than 500,000 words in one block, I can't finish the areas I want to see even if I write 10 million words, and depending on the results, sooner or later... Do I come to watch game fan fiction to watch war movies? The impression given by the whole novel is that of nobility, justice, glory, war, reform, liberation... I thought it was a novel about the history of ancient Rome's struggle... In the current environment, war-themed content is really boring and makes me want to vomit... I am curious, is this easier to write for the author or better for the readers? Am I just bored? The author of DND is like this too. He often brings a bunch of young men to fight, and it is always about lord activities, power struggles, etc., Yuck... I suggest changing the name of the book: "The Justice of Demacia in Time Travel" Purely complaining, welcome to chat, my keyboard is already thirsty

I can't stand it any longer 1. The combat power system is broken. Are the people I met in the early stages considered to be the high-end combat power of the entire force? Evelynn can be ranked so high. Demacia's combat power is ranked among the world's strongest. Except for the two sisters, who are both mortal-level T4t5, how can the Demacia group still fight against the void? The top celestial warriors are as strong as the star spirits, can you catch up? 2. Some stories are obviously used before the official follow-up is released. They are not as good as Hex's heart, and they do not comply with the settings, and there are often contradictions in the context. 3. The writing focus is biased, with many anecdotes and less focus. For example, after the protagonist killed those 1k people, did the protagonist's mentality change? You just brushed it off, but you can see that he has changed. It's very sudden. This thing doesn't mean that if you write that he has become cold, he will be really cold, but it is revealed through a little bit of psychological details. My opponent said you are so cold. Why can't I feel it? I feel like you are so nagging and so girly. 4 How is this game played by the protagonist? He just logs in and starts playing. He doesn't watch any of the activities, and he doesn't even take a look at the lobby. It doesn't mean that you have to know all the stories like the protagonist Hai Xin, but you also need to know a few. Okay, ask the one who doesn't know the story of the man-stealing Silas? How much momentum did the officials create at that time? At this point, do you think I know a man who steals a man? Everyone knows that the prince was almost captured, but when it comes to the protagonist, besides knowing his skills, he is really just an idiot. 5Why is the protagonist so fond of his parents? Can you give me a deeper reason? You've only known each other for a few days, and you're just kissing me like this? It was just a brief introduction, and the feelings became deeper. Your description has no psychology at all. Some things seem to be unclear. Why are you suddenly so close to the protagonist? I can't understand it. It's just like giving you a meal and letting you try an appetizer. I think it's great and I'm looking forward to it. In the end, I give you a lot of Aoli. How does it feel? ? 6 What's the plot? Who wants to read your Demacia orthography to ease the change? When you talk about change, it doesn't make people feel profound, that is, I want to change. I don't know if the author has considered some of the protagonist's ideas. It's disgusting. It's really disgusting. You talk about justice one after another and practice double standards. If it's not true, why did you think about it? One moment he said he felt sympathy for ordinary people, and the next moment he said it was a matter of family background, they were all guilty, and I just wanted peaceful change. Isn't this pure NT? The author has really thought poorly about some things. Why do mages riot? Why do most civilian mages support it? Why can Silas be so extreme and still be supported? Have you really considered the issue of the rights of the forbidden demons clearly? If you, like Hai Xin, write in a fast and concise way, and the logic can stand up to scrutiny, there will be no readers who will panic when they look at it.

Come on, author... The writing is really good League of Legends has suffered heavy casualties recently, and now the only book I can read besides yours is Hex's Heart, and even Windwalker has not been able to survive the disaster. I put all my hopes on your book. I will reward you with rewards.

When I saw Chapter 218, I'll give you a brief introduction: The plot starting from Chapter 180 is too big and the author doesn't have such good writing skills After a wave of routines, the plot is greasy and disgusting, and you, the author, are not exempt from it in the end. Does the struggle of human nature, the swing of morality, and the darkness of the world need you to repeat it over and over again in your novel? Only you can see through this. Do you think you can teach us anything? Remember Lao Guo's words: Let's be funny first! Otherwise it would be too funny We are here to read novels for fun, understand?

Damn, I've added a chasing cast, don't be a eunuch!

It is not easy for the author to write so much. It is really out of love, but in the final analysis, the poor performance is also due to the quality of the book itself. The plot goes crazy after the man escapes from prison in Chapter 180, and then there are dozens of pictures in a row without the protagonist, and then there is a forced war between the angel sisters. To be honest, the plot is too outrageous, and the strength of the protagonist is not worthy of the previous major events, so he can only use mechanical deity. Then the content of these dozens of pictures becomes a big filter, directly sending away the joy of 60 to 70% of readers.

The main abuse text, although it is a Valoran world text, but I still don't like it very much. And I don't like the development of the plot. Keep talking about war, which is a war story that ignores the alliance's world view. I might as well read a historical article, at least it would be more interesting.

Is this book really interesting? It was so vicious in the early stage. People who praised this book had their consciences eaten by dogs, but they still took the money 😰😰😰😰

What on earth are you going to talk about? ? ? Isn't it annoying to have to waste so many things in the weakest city of Demacia (similar to Qingchao)?

Since the protagonist already knows that Silas is there, why not kill him earlier? As the core strength of the entire country, does Galio have no defender at all? Just force Silas to cheat.