The Final Ninja World

It's extremely poisonous. I don't know who the protagonist is. There are hundreds of chapters in the middle and later stages where there is nothing about the protagonist. The protagonist's brother and sister get married. The child's mother is written to death, his son is written to death, his friends are written to death. In the end, the protagonist's daughter wants to kill the protagonist. He becomes numb and vomits blood. .

After reading the introduction, I don't know the plot. Well, what's the difference between this and time travel and amnesia? . . However, this type is all gone

Today, I, Madara Uchiha, actually met my brother Uchiha Tatsu who has been missing for many years, and I also found my sister Haru Uchiha, who has been missing for many years. But hey, why is my reincarnation eye in your eye socket, Tatsu? ! Also, Chen, please explain why you and Qing even have children! !

From a design point of view, not knowing the plot of Naruto will make some people feel uncomfortable. But in fact, Naruto stories with spoilers are the same, while Naruto stories without spoilers are more flexible. For those with a little patience, it would be better to avoid spoilers. Those spoilers either break away from the original work at a certain point in time and merge with the non-spoiler directions, or they forcefully follow the original path later, which is prone to various logical bugs. The author's plot design currently seems to be generally very smooth and more in line with the characters' personalities. Although there are inevitably some unreasonable places, this is also a common problem in Internet articles. Generally speaking, the flaws do not hide the advantages. Then in terms of language style, it is a bit literary and has too many paragraphs, so it is not very suitable for the form of online writing. It feels a bit redundant when reading it. After all, the current mainstream requires the feeling of being able to see through it at a glance. Simplicity, speed and straightforwardness are the main requirements. Elegance and beauty are more suitable to be displayed in prose, and may appear a bit artificial in novels. But personally, it is better than the mainstream Xiaobaiwen on the market. Those compositions that look like primary school students really make you vomit blood when you read them. In general, it can be regarded as a masterpiece among Naruto fans.

I'm only commenting on the first ten chapters. I feel like I'm going "underground". The first part is pretty good and more engaging than other Naruto fanfics. I'll look at the later chapters and look at the heroine and other aspects. I don't think it's as cool as the main character. The heroine is Haru Uchiha, right? The protagonist is a time traveler, right? The protagonist has a past life. My girlfriend is Xu Jing, right? She even set a flag saying she must go back, right? The protagonist knew that he flirted with Xiaonan in his previous life, right? It's a bit unclear, and I'm not saying I'm nitpicking, it's just uncomfortable. The first few chapters were obviously good, but it's a pity, and there are more than a thousand chapters like this.

I really like this kind of very delicate writing. Although it will be very hard to follow up, it is very comfortable to read. Come on, the author, I have already ordered it all. I haven't finished it yet, but I hope there won't be any particularly sadistic plots. Many authors like to let themselves go 😒

How to say it. . . Let's talk about the advantages first 1. From the current point of view, the timeline has no errors and no poisonous points. It is also very interesting to worship Uncle Snake as a disciple. 2. The plot is also relatively rigorous. Considering that the protagonist has not seen Naruto before his death, and there is no system after time travel, such as golden fingers, perhaps the biggest advantage is the Sharingan. 3. Character creation is also very good. It is possible to create original characters, but I believe that building a good character requires a lot of thinking. It should not violate the comic plot too much, and it should not have too many flaws. Let's talk about the shortcomings 1. If you start writing this book earlier, I feel you will get better results. Naruto has been finished for a long time, and now Avengers 4 is in full swing, and the entire fandom has become a comic column. 2. I still feel that my writing is a bit slow. I have written online articles for a period of time when I had a whim before. I also know that coding is very tiring, but your speed is really slow at 515. ps: I am also a huge fan of Naruto. My favorite is Brother Tu. I hope to give him a happy ending. Don't give up, your results may be small at first, but the gold will eventually shine. Come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Don't mind too much about my little opinion.

A very real fanfic, especially the protagonist has no knowledge of the Naruto world and no golden finger like memory. The beginning does not travel to Konoha, but around the Nagato trio. The author is really thoughtful.

Come on, I prefer this one without gold fingers.

Come on, waiting for you to be put on the shelves 🙂

Offer sunshine to the sky and open a kaleidoscope.

It's a pity that I don't like romance novels

If you persevere seriously, your popularity will definitely increase 😏😏😏 I will give you a thousand taels for encouragement.

Come on, finished reading. I think it's good🙂

In Naruto, Chakra, body and soul are actually inseparable. As mentioned before, the protagonist opens his eyes under extreme emotions, and discovers that there is no chakra in the protagonist's body. It means that the soul of the protagonist's previous life is affecting the current body. In fact, in this process, the protagonist may not be sure why he inherited the drunkenness of his previous life. . You can proceed step by step on this point, Let the protagonist study it, you can understand the essence of the Naruto world more quickly That is, Chakra At this point, I prefer the author to make it clear, The soul of the protagonist is very special [Why did Naruto destroy the three views in Naruto without black Transformation, from the history of the Ninja Sect, we can imagine that chakra has an inheritance relationship, not only inheriting the ability, but also inheriting the personality and soul. Naruto not only inherited the innate chakra of Little Taiyang and Katsuyuki, but also inherited the chakra sealed in the body at the end of their lives. If Naruto can become black, then he will be called a ghost. . . Just like Uchiha, the chakra is always filled with love and hate, Nara, Yamanaka, Akimichi, and those who were exterminated like the fighting clan Corpse Line. It can be said that the chakra in Naruto is like bloodline, but it is more extreme than bloodline, and the inheritance is more obvious. When chakra can influence the next generation in such a clear way In the context of the soul and the body, it is not an exaggeration to say that the protagonist's special soul from another world interacts with the body through the chakra of this world. Although the protagonist does not have chakra in his body for the time being, he must have it in his soul or be able to communicate with it, so he can open his eyes... It's like a small amount of alcohol. . I have read Chapter 17 so far, and I am quite satisfied.

I feel like it's well written, but now I'm afraid of directly sacrificing Qing.

To make a complaint, according to my construction site Japanese understanding, the pronunciation of Uchiha Haru should be うちは はれ, Uchiha hare, or even the more ridiculous Uchiha ha (because it seems that a single は has the meaning of Haru), there will be a mysterious "haha" sound in the middle

This novel has been ruined. The protagonist's daughter actually killed her father, and she still took it for granted. The most important filial piety in China for five thousand years was completely lost. After reading the novel for three times, I couldn't accept this kind of plot.

I don't want to watch Ye Cang as soon as he dies. Don't do this with a single female protagonist. She has a child and then write Ye Cang to death. She also talks about respecting monogamy and being both serious and established.

To be honest, I really don't like the heroine's character. The author recommends that you stop writing emotional dramas in your next book. I only subscribed to part of this book because the character Qing is so annoying. I was even more disgusted when I saw the two of them fighting together in Susana. It's not that sensational. It's true that the heroine is getting stronger, but it's not a little worse than Tatsumi. Holding her hand and fighting? Author, are you kidding me? The most annoying thing is a woman who insists on following her even though she knows her own strength is a hindrance. If you want to make the heroine three-dimensional, you must spend a lot of space describing the character, instead of today, where you only see pretentiousness and no self-improvement. Aside from this, the character of the protagonist is really hard to explain in one sentence. The transition is too abrupt and I haven't seen the ending yet. Anyway, this book is inconsistent and the character of the protagonist collapses in more than one way. After completing the Naruto fanfic, I can only say that the concept of this book is quite brilliant, but the rest is not good.

The protagonist has been in the ninja world for 30 years and has been the Hokage for more than ten years. He has not changed the structure of the ninja world at all. Everything he does is pulled back by the so-called plot. It is disgusting and there is a mastermind behind the scenes who is invincible in manipulating people's hearts. The protagonist can't do anything.

Friendly reminder, stop when you see Hokage. The author is almost as if he has changed the author later. It is very poisonous, especially the last battle is completely based on the original work. The ending is not mentioned.

I really don't know what to say when I see that Ye Cang is still dead... Just take it as a throwaway for my previous subscription. According to the plot, everyone is dead. I really have nothing to say. Lin is dead, the fourth generation is dead, Kuna Xin is dead, Ye Cang is dead, oh, and Yahiko is also dead in the end, me! Want! This! Host! Horn! Have! What! Use!

The author is probably a young man, right? Prefer to poison others

This fanfic is the most disgusting novel I have read since I read a Naruto fanfic. First of all, I must confirm that the author's writing is indeed good, but the plot and character creation are a mess. The protagonist is not the author, right? He is indecisive and has no protagonist. He wrote his son and his mother to death, let his daughter stab the protagonist in the back, and the protagonist became the ultimate villain. Your mouth is not open, right? I don't know how to explain. Isn't reading fan fiction just about making up for the regrets of the original work through imagination? In the end, what changed in the protagonist you wrote? What's the matter with such a tragic ending? I might as well read the original work. Anyway, Naruto still has a happy ending. Your protagonist might as well not travel through time.

I saw it introduced in the review section of other novels and said it was a masterpiece of Naruto, but after seeing the introduction, I had no desire to read it. 1. I don't have a golden finger, and 2. I don't know the plot. In this situation, if modern people travel to the past, wouldn't the author consider the cultural gap? Can the worldview adapt? Can the cruelty of ninjas be adapted? Who among you here can guarantee that you can survive one episode in this situation? ? ? Under such circumstances, time travel is a failure. The protagonist is a native of Naruto who is 10,000 times better than time travel. Don't tell me that modern people's thoughts are the biggest golden fingers. This will only be incompatible with the Naruto world and die faster. It seems that if you don't time travel, you can't write. There is no golden finger or understanding of the plot in such a high-risk world as Naruto. Modern people are guaranteed to die as many as they can when traveling through time. Naruto is famous for his cheating. There are many and dangerous. The protagonist does not have a golden finger and does not understand the plot. If he develops to the strength of Itachi, he will be overwhelmed. If you want to catch up with those cheaters, unless the author forces the protagonist to cheat, but this will fail. In a novel that time travels to Naruto, the golden finger must be at least the same as the plot, otherwise you will not be able to write it later. This is also the common point of many Naruto novels. Either there is a golden finger or you understand the plot. Many readers may be tired of reading it, but it is really indispensable, otherwise it will be very messy.

The original work had many bugs, and this book has more bugs than the original work. Anyone who has been following Naruto knows that Kishimoto has changed the outline several times, so the original work has many bugs and some very blunt whitewashing. The timeline is confusing. This is what originally existed in the original work. The timeline of several generations in this book is even more confusing. But I think this is a minor problem. It would be nice if the timeline was normal when the third war started. Orochimaru's top disciple? This is just a joke. In the animation, Orochimaru's expression looked like he was crying when the rope tree hung up. He even cried because the scene was raining, so it was hard to judge. Uncle Snake's character distortion started when his apprentice died, that is, he cooperated closely with Danzo after World War II (there were about three stages of cooperation with Danzo, before it was simple cooperation, after the character was distorted, he cooperated closely, and when he lost the Hokage election, it was deep cooperation). Even though he knew that Tsunade wanted to protect the hero, he still tried to take action. This was not something Orochimaru could do just after World War II. The only two Uchiha names that could be named were Shisui and Itachi. The genius who opened his eyes at the age of six was almost tricked into entering the ANBU by the third generation. Don't say anything. It's weird for Uchiha not to assemble and petition. Although the Third Generation and Danzo are not good people, they still have brains. This point directly persuaded him to quit. I didn't read the rest. There was nothing to say. No matter what the reason or trick, Uchiha would not allow this to happen. Itachi was the son of the clan leader and Shisui was a descendant of Kagami. Uchiha felt that throwing him out as a bridge to the top of Konoha would not be too much, so he dared to do this. A clan member who has just come back from outside has a rubbish talent and is not going to be married anyway. A genius who opened his eyes at the age of six is ​​the hope for the clan to have new high-end combat power after Madara leaves.

To be honest, this is a very interesting Naruto fanfic. It is not the kind of cool article where you are busy upgrading and killing monsters all day long, and your imagination is wide open. It also doesn't fit in with the frivolous and violent atmosphere that is prevalent in today's fan light novels. Rather than being a Naruto fanfic, in my opinion it has more of the freshness and delicacy of a traditional classical fairy novel. In it, no matter the protagonist or the important supporting characters, they are not a cookie-cutter template. They will be helpless, helpless, and forced to make changes, and in the end they will have no choice but to empathize. Well, this article has a delicate writing style and full characterization. (Some people may find it difficult to agree with some of the characters, but in my opinion, a character is considered successful if some people like it and some people hate it.) The overall evaluation, from the perspective of fan light novels, is Immortality. Also, if you like Xiaobai's writing style, please proceed with caution.

I have read 150 chapters so far. So far, the whole journey has been tumultuous. The protagonist's growth path is a mystery, and so is his improvement in strength. It's like this for no reason. Some of the transitions in the chapters are baffling. There are too many emotional scenes and the descriptions are average. The Ninja World War can be seen as an experience copy in Naruto fanfics, which improves the protagonist's strength, but I don't see any place in this book to gain experience for the protagonist. After reading Chapter 150, the whole process was bland and I had no desire to continue reading... The above are all personal opinions. Whether you think about it or not, I will continue to look for other Naruto fanfics.

The author didn't understand fanfiction. Most people who read fanfiction only care about adventures in a pure fantasy world. Generally, the setting is from the earth mainly for the convenience of cheating. To readers, fanfiction is a text version of the game where the reader takes on the perspective of the protagonist and adventures in their favorite fantasy world. No one will experience the constant emotion of being separated from their real family members in fanfiction. It's not that we are cold-blooded and cruel, but because no one thinks that I want to go home or return to Earth when playing the game. This is so stupid.