Bridge of Old

Support a wave I like the Cthulhu theme and the story is told very well But I feel that the atmosphere is not enough. The right hand hanger is too strong, and there is no sense of irresistibility, unstoppability, and the horror of all destiny returning to nothingness It also makes the unknown less scary.

My ancient ice soul is a cold projection outside of time. I came from the cold endless void, witnessed the birth of the universe, and witnessed the end of the universe. I am the supreme power that exists yesterday, now, and forever... All your cognitions, all the things you think are powerful, in the eyes of the eternal Me, are just the tiniest and weakest echoes. It is said that as the universe ages and decays, my power and light will become stronger - I will become younger and more powerful. My control over frost can freeze everything, and the light emitted by my projection is extremely dazzling. I will no longer be a soul, but a god!

Q: This is the first Lu Li since January

Lu Li? Is it Lu Li, the father of cultivation and the Lord of Shadows?

After reading about thirty chapters, I didn't remember anything. I just remembered touching my nose. I touched my nose every now and then. In the most egregious chapter, I touched my nose three times. Has the author ever tried this action himself? This action looks stupid no matter which scene it is used in, especially when you suddenly touch your nose during a conversation. How can a normal person do this action? It's like putting your innocence and guilty conscience on the public screen.

If you touch your nose four times in one chapter, aren't you afraid of causing nosebleeds?

What I hate the most is this kind of novel where the protagonist never knows how to use his power and is always passively triggered.

The author wanted to express a lot, but the writing was very messy.

Damn, it feels like a mess. . . . . .

Alas, to be honest, this is really a good subject, why don't I write about it again. And to be honest, the introduction is really domineering (°ㅂ° ╬)

May I ask what the relationship between this Lu Li and Zhang Zhang is 😰

Is he the bizarre Lu Li from the Righteous Path?

For those who are new to the game, I suggest you start reading from chapter 11. I didn't read the first ten chapters very carefully. Anyway, chapter 11 has explained everything that needs to be explained clearly. The book is of good quality and the author's writing style is good. I personally feel that the main reason why I am tired of reading this book is that the author does not use God's perspective, but it is like watching a movie. Only the readers who know the protagonist know, and only the readers who see the protagonist see. Although this has a strong sense of immersion, the protagonist in the first few chapters doesn't know anything, so the reader doesn't know anything either.

Very nice, supported 🙂

Big plan? The ancient sage is here for the big plan

I feel like the pace is too fast and a bit depressing.

The writing is pretty good, vote for it^ω^

Come on, author, the subject matter and ideas are good, the writing is not a noob, and there are some minor bugs in some places that don't bother you, but it's just a bit slow to get started. Don't pay too much attention to the opinions of book reviews and chapters, just write your own, and be sure to come and place an order the day it is released to support 🙂

? What (ﾟoﾟ;, my post was deleted? I watched Qidian for a long time before I finally figured it out 😭😭

There is a problem with the written expression, there are too many bad sentences

No updates in the future?

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but I'm confused when I read it Write some fast food articles

I like your works and have already collected them. I also hope you will pay attention to and collect my work "Spiritual Master Volume".

The first few chapters are a mess of words.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

It's all a mystery, the beginning is a mystery, how I traveled through time is a mystery, why I was sent for treatment is a mystery, my abilities are a mystery, I was confused when I saw it.