The Bright Moon Shines on Xijing

The writing style is quite good. If it is more traditional, it does have a sense of language. Many people like this kind of martial arts novels with a sense of language But everyone has their own preferences. If you have written in this way, you have to maintain this sense of language. I hope to delete general parts while maintaining the sense of language. Too many words will affect the reading experience, and too long a paragraph will also affect the reading experience. However, if there are typos hidden in it, the possibility of being discovered is not high. Some excessive descriptions are not necessary. Just give a brief introduction to some specific and particularly famous places, such as the desert. Everyone must have an impression of what the desert is like. Another example is places like Yanliu Alley. Once you mention Yanliu Alley, the picture will naturally emerge in your mind. There is no need to describe it again and create too many cumbersome words. If it's something special, you can write it down, but you don't need to write about the things that have nothing to do with the plot, just write down what's useful. The plot advances too slowly. There is no feeling in the first four chapters. It doesn't matter if the foreshadowing is delayed. The purpose of the first few chapters is to be fascinating and to attract readers. Only the foreshadowing is useful. Otherwise, it would be better not to write it. Goldfinger is in line with the environment and background, but the writing is a bit awkward. It is difficult to write well in places like this. Flashbacks are not a good technique, and it is better to watch the main story. There is a lack of character creation, and there is currently no three-dimensional image. I have only read four chapters, maybe I have not written the main line or ignored the main line. So far I still don't know what the main line is and need to continue to strengthen it Some situations seem very abnormal, but they are not written in the text. Compared with the sense of language, it is better to pay more attention to the logic. When writing, think more about the effect of this part of the plot arrangement Similar novels are also There are quite a few, and it is difficult to break through on this basis. It is best to follow the path of the predecessors and accumulate experience, and at present, this type of novel is rarely popular. I hope the author will persist and be prepared to be ignored by no one. If you give a score, it will be sixty-five points Extra points: Goldfinger Main line Character image Plot arrangement Writing style

"The Moon Shines on Xijing" Author: Luo Qiu Wuhen Type: Martial Arts Rating: 8.7 Book review: The writing style is great, the writing is very smooth and natural, the scene creation and character depiction are also done well, the details are also more delicate, and the wording is also very precise, which can give readers a great sense of substitution and picture. The only fly in the ointment is that there are still some minor grammatical errors and some typos in the text, which affect the reading experience. It will definitely be better if it is revised. Da Da Da's writing style is the kind of unhurried and unhurried type. It is an article that becomes more interesting the more you read it. Here is a small reminder. In today's era of fast-food online articles, this type of article will suffer a little, because today's readers are generally more pursuing explosive points, so it is very important to catch their attention in the first few chapters. I will consider accepting this opinion as appropriate, because in fact, I personally like the beginning of the story very much. It has certain ups and downs but it is not purely for the sake of fun. It will be more meaningful and not flimsy. At present, it seems that Dada's plot settings and rhythm are generally quite good. Basically, there is not much to say~ Generally speaking, Dada's writing style and plot settings are still very good. I am happy to recommend your article to everyone in the eleventh issue of the drug test recommendation post and include it in the book list❤️Please continue to work hard! Finally, I'm sorry for posting a book review so late, I hope you can forgive me [Bow] From: Chu Shi Ji

The first volume is coming to an end, and no matter how many people read this book, I want to say sorry. I wanted to polish this first book in detail, but found that it was not in line with everyone's interests, so I accelerated the progress and finished the outline and branch lines of this volume. I originally designed a lot of customs and charms, and I thought about them a lot from the time I designed the nine streets, six lanes, and thirteen lanes, but I didn't write them down. After thinking about it carefully, at first I felt that everything was trapped in a Xijing city, and the scene was too small. Later, I realized that my writing power was seriously lacking, and I was in a hurry to end this volume. Even if I had ideas, I couldn't express the emotions I imagined in the story in my mind. I would like to apologize to everyone who has read my book. In the next volume, I believe I will polish it carefully. There are also many hidden lines left in this volume, and I will unfold them one by one in the next volume. Thank you Qilili for your support. When I am single-player, I am really grateful to know that someone is reading my book!

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