The Strongest Konoha Teacher

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction either. Third, the plot of the original story can be briefly described, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work should be able to roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions and other plots, and make appropriate modifications or extensions to the original story plot. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand abuse and stick to principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing, and do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to drastically change the plot. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and release packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, the chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. Fifteenth, try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

I want to say: What originally attracted me to this article was the master-apprentice department, but it was written as a business department. Except for the first few chapters, which made my blood boil, the later chapters became more and more distasteful to me. Alas!

When I read Chapter 17, I always felt like "this is a fantasy novel in the skin of Naruto". The setting is very good, but it just feels out of place. Obito likes Lin, but there is no need to be such an idiot. If it were Sanji, I wouldn't feel it would be inappropriate. As for the setting of Master Yan, I thought about my Master Yan. I hated her so much when she taught me, and it took a long time before I remembered how good she was. The Genin Exam, the author has added settings, but even though I know these settings, I still feel that it is a joke. Graduation from the ninja school should be very simple. What is difficult is the elimination of each teacher. In the original book, there were only about 10 people in the Chuunin Competition at the end, and the previous elimination rounds were only judged by the instructors of each team. It is so grand just for the powerful people to see, "Look, the genin of Konoha are so strong" The author wrote a graphic scene at the beginning, with audiences from various families, unimportant ungraduated students, and instructors who evaluated, and there was even an audience. I couldn't help but think of the venue of the chunin exam. What happens after that? I read some reviews of the book saying that there was a bit of a breakdown at the end, maybe that's the aftermath. I say so much because I like the setting of this book. Looking at the rankings of fan fiction, most of them have a light-hearted plot and a relaxing tone. I suggest the author add some light-hearted plots, and lightness is not necessarily daily life.

This book is called Konoha Teacher and then it starts off by criticizing Konoha and trying to make everyone listen to you. There are all kinds of setting loopholes everywhere. It feels like the author has not studied the settings in Naruto properly, and it is like reading fan fiction and adding his own imagination before writing. Then why don't you put the protagonist outside of Konoha? Play however you want. I also wanted to follow the original plot to save effort and add plot settings casually. The characters' thinking logic is a mess, and the power system is also unreasonable. Just like the protagonist of a certain Naruto fanfic got all the blood stains on himself, and also acquired the abilities of pirates, tutors, reapers, hunters, etc., And ended up dying miserably. A relatively complete setting of a power system like Naruto cannot be imagined casually.

You can make instant noodles! I appreciate you! 😁

In general, the author forgot what the title was

It's really uncomfortable to be stuck in the exciting part, can't you stop being stuck?

Why isn't it updated? Very nice

Why has it been updated? What's the situation?

Isn't the protagonist invincible in the gym? Why did he fight for so long? At first, he said he wanted to maintain his teacher's demeanor, but then he changed into nothing like it. The book was still okay, but the numbers were low.

It's getting better and better. As a master, you have to be tougher.

Boss, please update more, and you will feel less uncomfortable when you see that you are trying to show off.

I think it would be more promising for the author to write pretentious fantasy novels!

If the author is writing out of interest, you can just pretend you don't see me. If you want to make some achievements, then you can make up for the settings, analyze the characters, and also, please step away from the martial arts fantasy dialogue style, okay?

Can the protagonist stop looking for excuses to make Tsunade uncomfortable? 😫😫😫

The best thing to watch is Naruto Shock Shield. The characters have individual personalities and are uncompromising, and have their own main plot. . . . You don't have a main plot of your own, and the protagonist only knows how to compromise. He sees being beaten and killed, and even helps the other party to train ANBU... I'll go ahead, I'll give you a slap in the face, reward you with a dollar, say sorry, and then you just say it doesn't matter... Leave, the author writes slowly

I feel like you're off topic. Where is the strongest teacher you promised? What about teaching students? I feel that the appearance rate of two students is not as high as that of three generations.

I'm going to make a post. I'm currently reading Chapter 4, and I feel that the author has never watched Naruto and the setting is messy. However, I'm still ready to read this book to see how many chapters I can last.

Seriously, you are already invincible even before you reach the Kage level, and you can just fight the tailed beast? Does a movie-level boss treat you as his elder brother? Just wandering into Ninja Village? Sixth style of navy equals invincibility? Can't hit anyone? So fake!

I really hate Tsunade more and more →_→ Maybe the protagonist thinks it is gentleness, but in my opinion, why is it so like a licking dog? →_→ If you don't have enough money, no problem, I'll pay for it! (Tsunade, as long as she gets enough money, she will take it without saying anything) Try the effect of the medicine. After taking the medicine, she hits the protagonist, but then she has side effects and faints! (The second time I directly tried the drug on the protagonist, but the effect did not increase, but the side effects came directly. You really didn't mean it???) And you usually don't fight back when you hit him, and you don't retaliate when you scold him →_→ Are you sure where that character was when you killed the root? →_→ Or have you only seen big men and never women in your previous life? ? ? ? →_→

50，     ，，，，     ，，，    Until Danzo led people to surround and kill the protagonist, he began to lower his IQ and EQ without any limit, and recruited two million Hokage to train the ANBU. The ANBU refused to accept it, and arranged a rosy lace for Konoha's top management, and the whole village was sought after. Where is the agreed-upon master-disciple system? Although I don't know how to round it out later, I was poisoned anyway I wish the author good results, bye!

In my opinion, the outline of the author's book has collapsed. It was originally written about disciples, but how many of them are now written by disciples? Most of them are the protagonists trying to show off. Judging from the author's current plot, I estimate that the protagonist will fight against the entire ninja world at the end of this book. Otherwise, there would be no place to write it. The protagonist's character is also like this: one moment he is greedy for money, and the other moment he is inflated.

It's time to eunuch, burn incense 🙂

I thought the strongest teacher was someone like Jiraiya, but I didn't expect that I was just teaching my disciples for fun.

I don't know why, it looks awkward