Clark from the Comic World

The author no longer cares about the plot. He almost doesn't want to use his brain to think about the rationality of the plot. He just wants the plot to catch up with the plot and end it. I have never understood why those works that are willing to think about the plot and create their own Marvel universe are more difficult to recommend than those works that only copy the plot. Is this kind of work really a fan? It should still be considered a script. I hope the author can see it. After all, your writing style is pretty good.

Author, you have a big problem with the Superman you set up. Have you read Smallville? It is basically impossible for an adult Superman to feel the pain caused by a hot weapon. At most, it is a mosquito bite, and a nuclear bomb is about the same. Moreover, I find that you are too attached to the plot. If you know the plot, why do you insist on staring at the Marvel novice village chief and becoming addicted to it? If I didn't say anything about getting two suits of armor for my family, but kidnapping my relatives didn't show much reaction, look at the Superman in the Marvel world next door. He killed my family and asked you to be buried with them all in New York. How much does it matter? Anyway, I can't restrain my kryptonite. Use nuclear bombs to keep up with my speed first. I think most people who saw that part were unhappy. They just pushed a puppet and dismissed it. And they also went on a flirtatious date with the Black Widow, a collection of humanoid genes? Female agent, brother, he relies on his body. He is a superman after all. There is no need to find such a thing for emotional scenes. Scarlet is an instant kill.

I have read more than 20 chapters and viewed it from the perspective of a bookworm of more than 10 years. The author just slapped his head and wrote it. I feel unprepared. I guess there is no outline and there are many poisonous points.

This novel is really rubbish, author, you better stop writing it. Think carefully and write your next novel.

Every day's recommendation votes are given to you, come on! The student party has no money, but I really like Superman fandoms. There are too few wives who write Superman fanfics online! You must stick to it! 😡😡✊✊

The writing is very good, I hope the author can stick to it

Author, have you forgotten Diana's mantra lasso? Why don't you use this magical lie detector? The Mage's Monastery can also detect lies.

Dear author, I just started reading, let me tell you, if Marvel's S. H. I. E. L. D. Knew that the protagonist was Superman, the first reaction would definitely be to find a way to threaten Superman such as kryptonite. They were afraid that the protagonist would use this ability to do bad things, or become dark, etc., So they shouldn't be so calm. . . Moreover, Nick Fury is not sure whether the protagonist's character is the same as DC's Superman or whether he is the same person. There will be various opinions in the society. After all, a comic book character appears in reality. . . Marvel has DC comics, and in the end, I begged the heroine to be Wonder Woman! ! ! The heroine is picturesque

According to big data statistics: ·43% of Americans have been on a blind date ·44% of men have been on a blind date ·42% of women have been on a blind date ·30% of single blind dates ·52% went on a blind date after divorce ·18 to 24 years old: 20% ·25 to 34 years old: 34% ·35 to 44 years old: 41% ·45 to 54 years old: 48% Did you find it incredible after watching it? Seeing so many people saying in such rhetoric that it is impossible for Americans to date, I wonder, are you living in a TV series? There is a TV series about aliens going to invade the earth, why don't you run away?

The pig's foot in this book is 24 years old this year, and the steel-bodied Superman is 33 years old. The steel-bodied Superman has been in the sun for 9 years longer than the pig's foot. I don't know how Superman's strength grows in terms of strength, but according to the content in Steel Body, I set that the older the Kryptonian is, the higher the absorption and conversion rate of the sun will be. This can be seen from the fact that the steel-bodied Superman only started to have superhuman reactions when he was almost 10 years old, compared with Zuo De's steel-bodied man who reacted when steel came to the earth. Comparing a few hours to 10 years, the age difference is so big. The difference in the sun's conversion rate is almost 10,000 to 20,000 times. There is a 9-year difference between the pig's feet and the steel-bodied superman, but they still have 9 years of sunshine. I don't think the difference in strength is thousands of times too much, right? After all, Pigfoot is still young, and there are still several years before the plot of Women's Federation 3. I think this time for growth is completely enough. This is the strength setting of this book.

Come on! I hope I can keep writing, and I hope I can keep reading.

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I have just read a few chapters, and it turns out that I am kneeling down to S. H. I. E. L. D., I am exposing myself without thinking, I am putting the safety of my family at the conscience of politicians, and I am just going with the flow of the story! Bye-Bye!

On the surface, you care about your family, but in reality? A scapegoat will send you away, and you also know who is on the other side. I had some intelligence when I threatened the White House earlier, but what about later? Hehe

Just to correct you, Europeans and Americans put their surname last and first name first. It is generally polite to call the other party's last name + sir. Only close friends or family members can call each other by first name. "Mr. Clark" is the wrong name. If it is Director Fury, he should be called "Mr. Kent". To give some other examples: Iron Man is generally called Mr. Stark, Captain America is called Mr. Rogers, the director of S. H. I. E. L. D. Is called Director Fury, Batman is called Mr. Wayne outside, and only Superman and the adopted sons of the Wayne family can call him Bruce. In addition, complaining about the so-called "things that time travelers would do" is a poisonous point because it is very childish. For example, the first one: calling Director Fury "Braised Egg" directly. This was the first time they met, which seemed rude. Moreover, the teasing title of "Braised Egg" is more suitable to be mentioned inadvertently after the relationship has matured. Second: The full name of SHIELD is "Homeland Strategic Defense Attack and Logistics Agency", which is not difficult to remember. Considering the super brain possessed by Superman, it is even more funny. These are purely malicious jokes. I have read every fan novel once. The first time it is funny, but the second time it becomes poisonous. Superman's hidden identity in the original comic is that as a reporter, he can run around and trigger the plot, which will not make the occurrence of events appear too deliberate or sudden. In this work, the protagonist, a flower shop, basically stays in one place. His social circle is narrow and he cannot trigger events. He can only follow the plot to make ends meet, which is a bit deliberate. It will be very difficult to develop the plot in this way. Whether in novels or comics, people have to move around. Otherwise, without communication, new people and new things will not appear.

One hundred times the speed of sound is 1/3 the speed of light? The speed of light is 300,000 kilometers per second!

The plot remains the same, and there is basically no daily life. The author's daily life is that his American parents urge him to find a girlfriend. No, the author's original text is to find a daughter-in-law? ? ? Blind date? ? ? Are you kidding? ? ? And then forcefully participate in the plot, it's too blunt. You see the army fighting the Hulk while basking in the sun in outer space, and then you feel that the Hulk is hurting his girlfriend? ? ? ? Then deliberately go down and fight the Hulk...

Black Widow's innocence, author, you want to make me laugh to death, will you inherit my flower?

The protagonist actually wants to find a girlfriend? Aren't you afraid of turning into a thorn-clad man when you applaud?

I hope it can be completed. There are really few novels about Superman in the Marvel world. Come on, author, you can listen to good opinions, but you still have to give priority to your own ideas.

If you think it's better to choose the heroine, or if you don't think it's better, you can say it here. There is no restriction on the content of the speech, even those from non-Marvel will be considered.

I didn't feel immersed in it at all. As a superman, the protagonist lives like a coward. He keeps messing around with the plot. There is not much difference between having a protagonist and not having a protagonist. The vision is too low, the structure is too small, and it is forced to be mentally retarded. It can't even be considered a simple novel. If it doesn't have any fun, what's the point?

You say it's fan fiction, but the original characters aren't restored enough. You say it's science fiction, and the protagonist doesn't know how to tinker with technology. Let's look at the writing. The writing is not good, so I thought it would be a fun read, but it turns out it's not fun at all. Do you think it's magical or not?