Reborn as the Internet Overlord

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Why is it all about women?! Less than half of it describes business. Is the author trying to run a brothel through his novel?

I've tried it so many times, and every time I die from the addiction after reading just a few chapters. There aren't many good internet business novels these days, and what attracted me was the author's idea; if he continued with that idea, the results wouldn't be too bad. But this author's writing skills are lacking, yet he insists on including romance. Can you tolerate that?

To be honest, right from the start, there were three rounds of review, with various reasons and delays. It was so frustrating that I got angry and revised everything that needed to be changed. Those who understand these companies should understand them, and those who don't should refer to the company symmetry table. Domestic section:

Your trademark squatting incident would be a satisfying story for someone else to write about. But you don't really write about these kinds of things, so you still don't quite understand what appeals to the average author. Fortunately, this new chapter is starting to show some promise.

I've managed to hold back 200 chapters. I want to finish it all at once, but I'm afraid I'll have nothing left to read after that. I feel like I'm about to lose control. I'm so sad.

The protagonist wakes up every day to find himself surrounded by women, and has absolutely nothing to do with the internet. It's a story disguised as an internet-themed reincarnation tale about an older man who is reborn and becomes a twisted scumbag.

I've read seventeen chapters, but the protagonist is still immersed in his past life, mentioning how glorious it was in every chapter. Aren't you annoyed? I'm annoyed, bye!

Enough with the nonsense... No cheat codes, no powerful background... Even if I were reborn, I wouldn't be able to accomplish anything significant! Being a rich man is fine, but if I mess around with high technology, I might be okay if I'm not good at it, but if I'm good at it, I'll lose my life!

I think it would be better to put Chapters 10 and 11 at the beginning, and add another chapter to explain the background. Get to the main storyline faster, focus 90% of the writing on the growth of the protagonist's career, write less about the small-scale business in the mainland, and focus on the impact of the protagonist's career on individuals and groups, and the user's experience.