I Level Up by Sleeping

The protagonist levels up every day he sleeps...?? 365 Days a year... That's 365 levels???? Ten years is 3650 levels...? A hundred years would be level 36,500... Huh?? So, you could say... The protagonist is already at level 36,500...?

Honestly, the way you write novels is exactly the same as how we wrote essays in junior high school. There are too many action descriptions, the psychological descriptions are too long-winded, the environmental descriptions are either long-winded or non-existent, and there are no scene descriptions at all.

Keep it up, Xiao Ming! 😏😏

I quite like that prehistoric fantasy novel.

The writing is fluent and it's a rare gem; I've already added it to my collection. I hope you'll check out my work, "The Spirit Master Scroll."

Your book really captivated me; I loved it. The plot control and character development were excellent. I want to learn from you! Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง

That's right. I'm a new author, and my novel, *The Legend of the Twin Demons*, is also on this theme. I've learned a lot from you, thank you! Could you please take a look at *The Legend of the Twin Demons* and give me some feedback? 🌹

The author has too much internal monologue; if there were less dialogue, it would become a silent film. 🤭