The First Immortal to Return

Please give me more suggestions. My collection hasn't increased. Is there something wrong with my writing? I'm seriously lacking confidence!

As the title suggests, I welcome your feedback. What are some of the problematic aspects?

I hope this book is to my liking. 🤝🤝

Haha, I'm the first one! Keep it up, author!

Friendly reminder: The author's previous books were all poorly written and left unfinished; please don't read them, they're deceiving consumers! The author also permanently banned me from another book.

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Qidian has taken down many books due to its review process.

I've read several of the author's books, and none of them are as good as this one. The author is incredibly skilled at writing about sword cultivation; it's very engaging. If the ending isn't rushed, becoming a top-tier author shouldn't be far off. I should focus on writing a few more complete works, otherwise my reputation will be ruined, and most of my long-time readers will leave.

What on earth is this you've written? Wang Xian smiled faintly. Was he laughing at a chicken? Reborn just to study. Holy Mary is awesome.

Why do novel protagonists always seem to have a million ways to provoke the villains, and then even the smallest things lead to their demise? Is it some kind of protagonist's special ability? Or are the villains just stupid?