Swordsmanship Is the Best

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The book is okay, the plot and characters are good, but it's a bit too wordy. There's no need to keep asking questions and explain a lot of things when describing them. Just explain the reasons concisely and clearly. It's too wordy and makes me feel tired.

The writing is still good! Details, logic and other aspects are all handled well. Let's talk about the heroine! This character is smart but is often mistaken for being smart. She has a rather arrogant personality and looks down on others, thinking that she will be arrogant after rebirth! In the end, she was turned upside down by the little people she looked down on.

The more I look at it, the more I feel it's very similar to Jian Lai's style of painting 🤫 but it's also well written.

So pretty👍

So hungry, not enough to eat...

The plot flow is very appetizing, and I also like the character of the heroine, but I have to wait to gain weight. Who knows how many books I have gained at the same time...

It's amazing. There aren't many books like this that are impeccable in every aspect. The author's writing is very well-conceived, and I feel like he must have put a lot of thought into it. The plot is compact and feels high-energy throughout. Some people think there are too many psychological descriptions, but I think the characters are richer. All in all, it is very exciting, bookworms should not miss it!

I was "shocked" when I first saw him, especially when he was on the line between life and death several times. Originally I wasn't interested in rebirth novels. I'd read too many and always felt the same. This one really made me read it over and over again, and I was deeply impressed. Even if it's broken (just a hypothesis), the chapters already written are still exciting enough. So I won't rush it. I just want to let people know that there are people reading this book and waiting for it.

1. The female cultivator is more realistic, with dark human nature, but also a kind and positive side. The author has limited writing power, so he can only write what he wants to write. 2. This is not a masterpiece that will be famous throughout the ages. It is just a humble work. There will be flaws. For example, it is very slow to warm up and can be called a fighter. If you want to see a smooth and smooth upgrade in one step, please go out and turn left. For example, the text is a bit verbose. I have worked hard to improve it, but I am still not satisfied. Please go out and turn right. 3. Accept criticism, say it is correct and I will correct it, but please try to say it in this chapter. I will try not to move in the comment area, but I did not understand it, and misinterpreted what was expressed in the book. Malicious comments mislead newcomers, and all posts will be banned and deleted. 5. Complaint - The author of Sanyuan is very busy. Apart from working, eating and sleeping, he basically spends all the time he can squeeze in coding. But writing itself is difficult. I also have to act as customer service and answer questions. The important thing is that it doesn't cost money. Why am I so worried? Don't blame me for not replying. Don't call me tacky. I worked hard to code for a month and you didn't even spend five yuan. Do you think I'm tacky? Then I beg you not to read it. 6. Finally, thank you to everyone who supports genuine subscriptions. [Note] A self-report and begging from a humble author who suffers from repeated attacks of mouse hands - please support the original version and give the author a bite to eat!

The beginning is really long-winded. Many of the descriptions are either similar or repetitive, and the same thing is said over and over again. When writing a novel, it is a good thing to have plot foreshadowing, but if it is too foreshadowed, it will affect the progress of the plot too much, just like a water chapter.

The idea of this book is actually very good, and it is good to create some atmosphere at the beginning, but as the author said, the writing is too tedious. The plot flow and the upgrade flow are different. All book friends know this, but if you analyze and explain over and over again, you are a book lover idiot. Is it? The plot is driven by endless explanations and analysis. After reading dozens of chapters, I can finish the story in 5 chapters. Add the background and writing method and dig some holes. At most, I should leave the town and change the map in 20 chapters. How many chapters have you been grinding? I am speechless.

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Although it's very interesting to watch, I really can't stand it anymore. The plot is too long and lengthy. It's written over and over again in one sentence. It would be nice if it could be simplified.

I read ten chapters to persuade me to quit, read many recommendations, and persuaded me to quit countless times. The content was repeated and repeatedly emphasized. There was no big boss's plan before taking action. It seemed specious and seemed very profound, but in fact it was just pretending to be profound. I wanted to add new words to express my sorrow. It was ten chapters and there was no content at all. The number of words was low.

After reading the comments for a long time, because the author said that there is no such thing as love and that she/he can't write it, I felt relieved and started adding books to my reading list. I found this author to be very cute and I replied to almost every comment. PS: By the way, I would like to say to those who say that watching a movie without a male protagonist is a cult. Personal preferences are different. Of course, you have to spend money according to your own preferences. Ask if there is a male protagonist. If there is a male protagonist, we will cancel it. If there is no, we will watch it. There is no need to outline what we require from the author. What kind of story line does the author write and what kind of readership will he accept? It is not that difficult to say clearly whether there is a male protagonist or not!

I have read more than two hundred chapters, and I can see that this book has its strengths and weaknesses. The writing is good, the plot is not trivial, and it is a story about strong women. It is considered a good book among female cultivators. But there are also some shortcomings. First, the pace is a bit slow and the plot is a bit protracted; second, Golden Finger is too big, and I feel like I have to rely on Mo Chan for everything. Treasure hunting, concealing secrets, and sacrificing longevity can solve almost everything, which somewhat obscures the heroine's own light. It is obvious that many things can be done by herself, but she is a bit over-reliant on Mo Chan; third, the introduction clearly talks about practicing swordsmanship, but the plot does not. Swords are the main focus, and I feel that I rarely see the protagonist using swords, especially after receiving the inheritance of the Supreme Sword Pavilion. There is not much space for practicing swordsmanship, and I feel that the cultivation level is a bit inexplicable. Looking for treasures and scoring opportunities will greatly increase the cultivation level; fourthly, the plot arrangement is too tight, with treasure hunting and facing various crises all the time, but the description is slightly delayed, and the rhythm is a bit strange. Overall, it was a bit amazing when I first watched it, but then it got a little boring. I hope the author can continue to work hard, after all, there are too few good female channel cultivation articles.

I think the only good female videos are Di Shen Tong Jian and Ken Dao.

After reading the first hundred chapters of this book, I was confused. Is this a fairy tale novel or a Machiavellian novel? The procrastination is nothing, it is all about the background conspiracy. Why not just write a heroine conspiracy novel, which has nothing to do with cultivating immortals? ? When it comes to background and foreshadowing, it shouldn't take more than a hundred chapters. It feels like the author can't write the fairy tale theme and keeps dragging it on.

Really, it can be explained clearly in one sentence. There is no need for ten sentences. The imagination is very good and you can see that the background is also very grand, but there are some inner activities and environmental details. It is really unnecessary. It is okay occasionally, but after one chapter, there is not much specific content. The progress is too slow. Really, if you don't want to change the previous part, forget it, but can the later part be simpler...

It feels like the characters in the novel are basically selfish. I didn't say this was bad. According to this setting, the purpose of cultivating immortality is to lead yourself to immortality, and everything else is just a stumbling block. However, I always feel that I am missing a bit of passion. Feelings for family and country, eternal righteousness, etc. These grand spirits are difficult to see. Maybe I haven't seen enough or my eyes are frustrated. But I think that there are things that a man should not do, but he must do something. Before becoming a cultivator, they are first of all human beings. People should have great spiritual sustenance and faith. Even for cultivators, some things are more important than immortality. I say this from the perspective of a male channel. I don't know if it is suitable for female channels. Please forgive me if I am wrong.

My wife likes it, come on.

I read some of the novels two years ago, and my impression at the time was that the plot and settings were pretty good. The only drawback was that it was constantly being reworked, but that's understandable. The writing became smoother and smoother later on, but I didn't really read it. Now that I've come back and looked at it, I find that it has changed. It's a bit of a pity.

It's so slow, I haven't read it for a few months and it's already over 40 chapters.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like the author really likes Jianlai.

My dear, I have almost finished reading your previous ancient poems. They are all very good. I really like your works. After reading your ancient poems, I will read your book from the beginning ^_^^_^. I love you😍 Come on, I will always support you.