Go with the Wind at Night

🙊: Oh my god, I haven't seen it anyway 🐵: Me neither 🐵: No 🙉: I second the proposal! ! ! 🐒: Then read the book quickly! ! [Impression of the work] "The title is like a supernatural book, the introduction is like fantasy, and the description is like ancient sayings, it is indeed love on campus." The above is my initial impression🙊 First of all, "Guess where I went at night", the title of the book is really very supernatural. When I read the title, I felt a creepy feeling, like on an old TV, Sadako suddenly ran out and said to me: "Guess where I went at night!" (Tight or not, stinging or exciting) But what the author, a damn kid, actually wrote in the introduction is "Time and space transformation caused by calcium tablets!!!" (Nani!!) This kind of operation made me click on it. [Wedge] [Starting] of this book "Starts in a funny and humorous way, and unfolds with a heart-wrenching plot." Funny and humorous first time travel, encountering a magical banana skin male protagonist. A painful math test brought back distressing past events. The author uses a funny and humorous writing style to express the heroine's cautious love in detail. Underneath the joy, there is a painful old misunderstanding. Creativity"I will not admit that I was attracted by calcium tablets." Until after reading dozens of chapters, I was immersed in the setting of calcium tablets and could not extricate myself (the author came out and was beaten ), which is a bit magical. However, this is indeed a breath of fresh air in the time-travel world, and the setting of this article is also very rich, not the kind of boring plot. This is a book that people will remember after reading it. [Emotions & Emotions] "Emotions that are impetuous and superficial, emotions that are delicate and touching." I feel that the author's emotional handling is not natural enough. The male and female protagonists' anger comes too quickly, and their tenderness comes too quickly. The emotions are so changeable that it is difficult for readers to have a sense of involvement. However, the author's emotional portrayal is particularly delicate. As soon as I saw the two male protagonists, I felt that things were not simple. It is mentioned in the article that the heroine longs to have love for three lifetimes like the heroine in "Plum Blossom Brand". This may be the setting of the past and present life (is this true? The author is great) Now, there is mainly a modern world where emotions intersect. A heroine who carefully protects love is like the catkins falling on the spring day, holding all her thoughts in the dust. A male protagonist who is as cold as ice and rejects people thousands of miles away. It's like a flower blooming on an iceberg, blooming only for the heroine with its unique tenderness. However, the reason why I say delicate is because the author does not abuse for the sake of abuse. Two scenes that deeply affected me. When Fang Chunyun asked the heroine if the hero was her boyfriend, the heroine said: "It's not what you think, it's just... A stranger..." I thought he was ruthless and passionate, but he didn't expect the hero to behave like this on the heroine's blind date. He took the heroine's hand and said, "There's a fire in your house, leave quickly." The fire was clearly in his eyes. It's so delicate and gentle. [Sense of expectation] "If the real world is full of wind, frost, rain and snow, I hope to see the frost disappear and the sun warm in another time and space." This misunderstanding has made the heroine a target of public criticism in the real world. The hero's family and his own family cannot understand her, and even his love can only be concealed on his lips. So I hope she can shine in another world. Finally, let me talk about the problems: 1. The heroine has too many internal monologues, so it is not recommended to write too many internal dramas. 2. The emotional expression of the characters needs to be carefully considered, the transformation is not natural enough, and the sense of substitution is not enough. 3. The plot is fragmented, especially at the beginning, with too many scene changes. Driving back across time was too fast. 4. The beginning is a bit procrastinating. You don't need to write down details about what happened when you were a child. Just give a general explanation. 5. The function of calcium tablets is explained too vaguely at the beginning, and there are many scene changes, so the readers may be confused.

As long as the heroine is not too self-righteous and has too many inner dramas, female videos are basically acceptable. If you want to write about publishing rights, you can refer to Aunt Qiong Yao. —Off topic (If the ending is just a dream of the heroine. What will be the result?) 😁😁😁😁

Title of the work: "Guess where I went at night" Total score: 78 Category: Fantasy Romance Author: July Meng Yuan Commentator: Mi Lianzi Number of words read: 50,000+ Overall comment: This article is well-conceived. The heroine uses a bottle of calcium tablets as a time-travel medium to tell the story of the modern world and ancient times. Book title introduction (13/20): The book title and introduction may be the weakness of this article. Using a question sentence in the title of the book can attract readers' attention, but it always gives people the feeling of a supernatural novel. Some timid readers may click ❌ directly when they see this title. In my later reading, I roughly understood that this was because the heroine could travel through time by taking calcium tablets at night. The introduction is a bit vague and does not mention the highlights of the article. The small theater is very interesting and can arouse interest in reading. Characters (17/20): The character outline is very good, and there is nothing inconsistent with the characters in the 50,000 words I read Heroine: Ye Suifeng In the early stage, the heroine was a humble girl, living with her grandmother, because she predicted that the hero's sister was about to suffer disaster and wanted to stop it, but it caused a huge misunderstanding. The breakdown of her family caused her to be in desperate need of care, so Yuwen Shuxue's gentleness became a light in her heart Male protagonist: Male protagonist No. 1 (Childhood sweetheart with a cold face but not a cold heart): You Yihan, as the No. 1 Male protagonist in this book, is the heroine's childhood sweetheart. However, due to a misunderstanding that the heroine pushed down his sister, his sister became a vegetative state and resented the heroine. The male protagonist's thoughts are human and understandable, and he helps the female protagonist time and time again, which shows that he is actually an upright and kind person. Male Protagonist No. 2 (An elegant young man who is not favored by a wealthy family): The existence of Yuwen Shuxue is probably the warmest part of this article. He will take care of the heroine and can let her vent her anger. Probably because of his status, he also understands the heroine's thoughts very well. Different from the evil, charming and arrogant male protagonist, he is gentle and graceful. However, what is a little discolored is that his behavior towards his younger brother seems a bit cowardly and self-defeating. Plot (15/20): In terms of plot, the processing of camera jumps is slightly weak, which is where this article is lacking. However, the exchange between day and night, as well as the transformation between modern life and ancient times, does require a strong ratio to avoid jumping out. I also hope that the author can work hard to strengthen~ Rhythm (16/20): The rhythm is a bit slow. There are a lot of sad descriptions of the heroine in the article. I personally think this is the main reason for the delay of the article, so you should pay more attention to it. Writing style (17/20): The author's writing style is very good, there are not too many gorgeous words, and the expressions are very good, but some places are like prose, which makes people jump from the plot of the novel. This point is the same as the specific issue of rhythm, so I won't go into details. Summary: Overall, this novel is very readable and has novel themes. Apart from too many useless psychological descriptions, there are basically no major flaws. I hope the author will work hard↖(^ω^)↗

A love-hate relationship caused by a misunderstanding!

🍀After reading the opening chapter of Little Sister, this story resonated and made me feel a little sad. I believe that the heroine can reconcile with her former childhood sweetheart in the future. 🍁I believe many of you have experienced the college entrance examination time on the blackboard, and the same is true at dawn. At the same time, I also wish everyone a good score in the college entrance examination... 🌴With the super power of foreseeing the future, will you lose something if you block it? Bookworms who are hungry for books can take a look! 🙈But I still have to say that the plot of Miss Sister is very gripping, but if the paragraphs are too long, it will easily distract the reader, and the reading experience will not be good for readers. It is recommended to divide it into paragraphs well. 🌷Finally, I hope the author can write well, believe in yourself and fight🐬

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