A Portrait of Beijing Men

I finished writing the most hilarious chapter today. I really laughed while writing it. When I was designing the plot, I didn't have this part, but I wrote that I felt like my character had come to life and I wanted to perform it, so I wrote it out, and the effect was pretty good. At least my husband laughed when he saw it.

I don't know how many people are watching, and the clicks have been cancelled. No one said anything. The collection went up today and dropped tomorrow. Qingyun has not given any, and has no recommendations. Too lazy to put it on the shelves...

The plot is on the road to death and there is no turning back 😁😁😁😁 Absolute variety of life, hahahahahaha

Updated the most romantic chapter, I am no longer good at writing sweet articles 😅 Let's read it together

Haha, this latest chapter is really fun, very interesting

Let's start with language style. The author's language style is plain and smooth, without inappropriate rhetorical writing, and the article as a whole is easy to read without any hesitation. Especially the character dialogues, the language atmosphere is very happy. It's just that there are some minor language errors that are harmless (whisper bb Let's talk about the plot. Since I have been vaccinated, the author mentioned that this is a realistic novel, so the plot is in line with expectations, very close to life, and can give people some resonance. But in fact it is really true. It is both an advantage and a disadvantage. Too plain development makes the entire plot a smooth straight line. There is no big conflict, or the tension of the conflict is not enough. Although there is no big problem with this writing method, it can easily become a chronicle-style article. It can be done in the short term, but it must be read in the long term. The author still lacks stamina. I hope that the subsequent plot can develop well. (The comments below are only personal opinions, not suggestions, and may be a bit harsh. Regarding realism. I think the content of the article is realistic, but it does not need to be completely true. Add it appropriately. It's also good to add some drama elements. The conflict can be deeper and broader, instead of being resolved in one or two chapters. Personally, it feels a bit... Emmmm, it's a bit of a joke? (Purely my personal opinion Finally, I wish this book will get better and better! Come on, author!

I don't have much to say, just one word - like! Great work, looking forward to updates.

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Very well written! So tasty!

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