The Cave Borer

The author seems to think readers dislike the female characters, but actually it's just that your writing skills are lacking; what people dislike are the female characters you've created... A well-written character is a beauty mark; a poorly written one is a hemorrhoid.

It's well-written. However, shouldn't the female lead be introduced? The later war scenes are described in great detail, but it feels like something's missing, not as exciting as the beginning. Also, the perspective is too focused on the protagonist; there isn't a single supporting character who can be considered a major character. There's only the male lead and a bunch of extras; there's no female lead, second female lead, second male lead, or third male lead. It gets boring after a while.

It's well-written, similar to the "ordinary people's journey" genre. Some details weren't handled well, and the transitions were a bit abrupt. But undeniably, it's a great read, and hopefully the later chapters will be polished.

This novel just wouldn't become popular. The more I read, the less interested I became, and it was even supposed to be an unfinished story with no female lead. A large portion of the comments section said things like "I like it without a female lead," and "I've already added it to my favorites." But did this novel actually become popular? Absolutely not.

Actually, the book's outline is quite good and very appealing, but unfortunately, the author probably doesn't write many novels. There's a big problem. The 50-word description of the fight and the 500-word explanation of the terms significantly hinder readability. At first, I thought I was just starting out and hadn't quite gotten it right.

It's not like a cultivation novel, it's more like a fantasy novel. Furthermore, the cultivation progression is too slow. Over eighty chapters in, and I'm still stuck in the first realm, refusing to break through no matter what. It was somewhat understandable in the beginning because of a few insects, but later it's all about building a foundation, pushing myself to the limit…

When I read the book review saying that there was no female lead, I immediately added it to my favorites.

Since it's a classical cultivation story, could we please not use rice? Measuring the dimensions isn't that complicated.

I've read over 100 chapters, but I still can't remember or understand the levels. They're too hard to remember! I don't understand what the cultivation method for the Spirit Preservation stage is! I haven't even figured out the other categories of martial arts techniques yet; it's all so dazzling!

Keep watching, there are quite a few interesting parts, it's pretty good. The path to immortality is a solitary one. Even within Zhang Daoling's family, no love story about their ancestor, Zhang Daoling, has been passed down. Those who criticize the lack of a female lead in the comments section, according to a certain real person, are just some people whose legs go weak at the sight of a woman.