The Cave Borer

The author seems to think that readers hate female characters. In fact, it's just that your writing skills are not good enough. What you hate is just the female characters you write... If you write well, it's a beauty mark, but if you write poorly, it's hemorrhoids.

Wonderfully written. But, is it time for the heroine to come on stage? The description of the later war is very detailed, but I always feel that it has some shortcomings and is not as exciting as the beginning. Moreover, the perspective is too focused on the protagonist, and so far there is no supporting role that can be called a major one. There is only the first male and a bunch of extras, but no first female, second female, second male, and third male. If you watch it too much, you will get tired of it.

The writing is pretty good, similar to Mortal Flow. It's just that some details were not handled well, and the transition was a bit stiff. But it is undeniable that it is indeed a good book. I hope that the next plot can be polished up.

This novel is not popular. The more I read it, the less interested I am in it. It is still a eunuch or something without a heroine. Most people in the comment section said that I like it and have collected it without a heroine. As a result, this novel became popular, but not at all. What's even more sad is that there are not many people in the comment area. From this point, we can see that whether or not to include a female protagonist has nothing to do with whether the novel is popular or not. It is even better if it is written. Not including only one protagonist requires higher writing skills, and the author obviously does not have the ability. Otherwise, if it becomes popular early, wouldn't it be without a female protagonist? Why don't they support it? There are not even a few deacons in a group of trainees.

In fact, the outline of this book is well set and very attractive. It's a pity that the author probably doesn't write many novels. There is a big problem that there are 50 words for fighting and 500 words for noun explanation. This greatly affects reading. At first I thought I was just starting to write, but I wasn't sure. It turned out that there were more than 200 chapters, and there were still two lines of fighting and two pages of instructions... Maybe it was not deliberately thinking about water. When I changed the map and met the fifth prince, the three puppets were instantly separated by just a few lines. It turned out that it took thousands of words to describe the psychology of the fifth prince. A mortal actor wrote more details than the protagonist's psychological activities?

It's not like a novel about cultivating immortals, but more like a fantasy novel In addition, the level of improvement is too slow. It has been more than eighty chapters, and I have been staying in the first realm, refusing to break through until my death. The first thing is just for the sake of a few insects, but the second part is just to lay the foundation and cultivate to the limit... The author has always emphasized that the protagonist has the resources and the ability to cultivate the first realm very solidly and solidly But what is the use of this? It is not a profound stage that can affect the final immortality, and if it is broken through, it will leave hidden dangers. I really don't believe that if you break through, you will leave irreparable hidden dangers. Refining the essence is so troublesome No matter how good the foundation is in your first realm, it is unprecedented and unprecedented. What's the use? This is very unreasonable, and the strength is completely inconsistent with the realm. The realm hasn't changed much. Each enemy is stronger than the last, but they all end up killing him. Isn't this a joke? Anyway, I can't understand why current authors have to suppress the realm of the protagonist. They won't break through if they can, and they constantly cross levels to kill enemies. Although it is standard for the protagonist to cross levels, but deliberately create it, is this necessary?

When I read a book review that said it didn't have a female protagonist, I decisively collected it.

Since it is a classical cultivation of immortality, can we not use rice? It's not that troublesome to measure the size

I've read more than 100 chapters, but I can't remember or understand the levels. It's so hard to remember! I don't even understand what the Divine Presence Stage Kung Fu is! I haven't understood the other types of exercises yet, it's so dazzling! I don't even understand the various races in various places, as well as the sinner race and so on! I'm really tired from watching it and can't remember it! Isn't it better to just practice Qi, build foundation, golden elixir, and Nascent Soul? It's too tiring for you to be unique.

As you read on, there are many interesting places, which are quite good. Immortality leads to immortality, and one walks alone. Apart from anything else, even the Zhang Daoling Celestial Master family has not circulated the love story of their ancestor Zhang Daoling. Those who complain about the lack of female protagonists in the comment area, according to a real person, are just things whose three legs become weak after seeing a woman.