Dimensional Grocery Store

The character restoration and growth of the characters in this book are quite good. It would be perfect if the writing was better. However, this is probably because I can't get along with the values ​​expressed in some of the plots in the novel, so I plan to put this book on the shelf first. There are new people coming to read the book later. Well, I can say that I have tried the water and this book is definitely not bad, but I don't know much about whether it is compatible with the Three Views. Anyway, if you are interested, you can still read it. I slipped away and left the remaining tickets for the author.

Let me just say one thing, this book is awesome! If you don't watch it, you will really regret it

Give me an answer. After writing San San, I feel a little stuck 😭 and feel uncomfortable.

My mind has been a little empty lately, can you give me some advice😌😌😌

Two months later, Qingfeng is back again. This time I want to write about the second dimension, the second dimension in my heart. I hope all new and old readers can save it. Thank you Qingfeng here.

I am positive about the author's writing style, but I personally think there are many shortcomings in the setting. First of all, the male protagonist's lack of emotion may be special, but it requires control. I have only read the first 80 chapters. Personally, I think it is still close. It is not that the character is broken, but the plot and detailed description are poor. Simply put, it looks uncomfortable. Also, in terms of the power of the male protagonist, I personally think it is still a bit unbalanced. I think that as the future head of the family, although the male protagonist is not omnipotent, he should still have some involvement (as for how much...). The resurrection of Kuang San is so complicated. It is very frustrating to say that one life is for another life. Aren't you very strong? You're already across the world, you're killing the demon king casually, why are you so useless! Maybe someone will criticize me here. Each author's settings are different. Are you not used to Jianou? I think the minimum setting for writing novels is to follow the crowd. Maybe some innovations are good, but don't be too deviant. As a (pseudo) infinite stream, resurrecting people are all basic operations. As for the other male protagonists who were so easily challenged by Wei and so-and-so, and the male protagonist's family's view that relationships are useless, I won't complain about them one by one. In short, I hope that if the author writes this kind of book next time, he will not make these mistakes that can easily make the book jump. (Personal views only, opinions only)

The setting of the unintentional protagonist is very poisonous. Especially the setting where everything can be exchanged but there is no limit. Let me have a glimpse of what the prairie looks like

I can't understand the combat power level. It feels like Dragon Ball. One person has a combat power of five, and another person has a combat power of more than 10,000, which is a gap of more than 2,000 times. One person slaps the ground and his hand breaks. Another person slaps the ground and the earth is gone.

It's so boring, dry, and can't bring you into the main character.

Is the author still around? I hope you can continue to update.

I felt relieved when you posted about the poison testing process. I feel that the author's emotional description, plot narration, and core settings are super blunt. The pig's trotters written by the author are bound to something similar to No. 8 Pawn Shop. Why does it feel like I am opening a shop? There is a direct lack of emotion, and the plot often contains jumping statements from a dozen words to a few dozen words. Kuang San's fighting scenes are just like the lack of funds. From fighting to surrounding the enemy to being counter-surrounded, the disadvantage is just like this in less than a hundred words. I won't go into the poisonous points one by one, just give them up.

I was silent for a while when I saw the introduction... I felt that even if I didn't pursue it, I should go in and take a look.

The author recommends four books related to your works, all of which are eunuchs 😁

After reading Chapter 65, I'm a little confused... I don't really understand what the author does. I feel that the setting is very good but there is no detailed description of the events at all! Kurasan hunts dem, dem besieges Kurumi, elves save the world, World Strategy No. 2 And No. 6, The protagonist defeats Izuru Kamizo... So many things are written in one or two hundred words. I really can't understand it if I haven't read the original work, okay? Not to mention supplementary settings, at least tell the story well first.

I think a harem of one or two is okay, but a stallion is really disgusting.

I don't know if it's good or not, but I'm definitely not a eunuch.

It's time for the author to come back and write. If you come back and continue writing, I'll book it all. Also, it's time for you to come back after such a long vacation.

There is no one left (><) Don't ask for leave, just finish the book

Your leave request will be for five years immediately.