Konoha's Projection Magic

I have already thought of the Noble Phantasm to defeat the Nine-Tails. Let's see if you can guess it. It is limited to the first ten floors. If you guess correctly, I will add two more chapters. I will post a post as proof! Substituting wood's small penis secretly! Hint, bow level

The writing is good and the plug-in is not outrageous. I really want to read it, but it is too boring. I really can't stand it anymore. I feel so blocked in my heart.

In Japanese, the "Pain" in the name of Six Paths Pain is homophonic with the English "pain" and is translated as "pain", which refers to the catastrophic and painful feeling that Pain's powerful power brings to people.

It feels so confusing, I'm confused

Suddenly I thought of a certain Pirates fanfic. The protagonist is a magician, a crispy man, who was beaten by his superiors because of some violations. The main idea is that no matter how strong other means are, the body cannot at least become a shortcoming. The protagonist said that magicians are noble. As for the profession of a magician, the protagonist does not explain. And the protagonist of our Naruto fanfic is great. When the teacher points out mistakes, he will accept them humbly. Is it possible that people are getting old and can't stand the maverick protagonists (thinking deeply)

I think this book is very good. I don't understand why you have so many questions. You need to be so rigorous when reading a novel. I feel that once a novel is rigorous, it is no longer a novel. After all, real life is not so rigorous. Just think it looks good. If you think it doesn't look good, I can only say that this novel is not suitable for some people. Don't force things that are not suitable.

Instead of calling him Shiro, it's better to call him Shirou!

I would like to ask you if the protagonist of this book is another earthling conquered by Naruto's most powerful illusion, "The Will of Fire"?

Is the author's setting about projection magic based on the original version or a modified one? Let me reveal it 😁

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The best thing about the fate setting is that the props of the law of cause and effect can also be broken by strength. For example, Jack the Ripper's Noble Phantasm of the Virgin of Disintegration met the three conditions, but because Joan of Arc's ex blocked the magic (originally, if the three conditions were met, she would die), Xiaoyu in fate ex also made it clear that Tamamo Mae in the nine-tailed state can completely destroy Avalon. (Avalon's fourth-dimensional defense transferred all attacks to Utopia and returned it. The Moon Holy Grail's world-class treasure was kicked to pieces.) The old flash charged up a great flood that would destroy the world in seven days, but the flood could be erased by the unsealing light of the Holy Sword of Stars. Even Gouzi's thorn-piercing spear can be judged by luck. So Fate's Noble Phantasm basically has no solution, just like Jojo's stand-in. Once you know its ability, you can find a way to solve it.

Seeing that there are still people bb Bai Ya, I will say a few more words here. 1. The third generation and other high-level officials have damaged White Fang's reputation. Don't tell me that the third generation of Bingqing Yujie doesn't know that the public opinion war absolutely requires the permission of the Hokage to start. This is politics. Xiaobai doesn't want bb. Maybe at first it just wants White Fang to bow his head and give up the right to inherit the Hokage. 2. However, White Fang is the kind of upright person. He may give up the future position of Hokage, but he will never be convinced by such disgusting methods and does not want to bow his head. This is self-esteem, something that people without this cannot understand. 3. There is no problem that Naruto is a hot-blooded comic, but this is also a writing that I dare not go into depth. In fact, there are many dark things, which cannot withstand scrutiny. After careful consideration, there is a problem whether Naruto is the protagonist or not. 4. Was the Uchiha destroyed because they were born evil? (Said by the second-generation uncle), but I don't think so. Before others joined Konoha, they continued the history for nearly a thousand years. By the time you were in Konoha in 56 years, the clan was exterminated, and the Senju clan also lost their family name. Zizi, the politics of Konoha are amazing! It is completely developing in the opposite direction of the two founders (Uchiha Madara and Senju Hashirama's motivation for founding Konoha was to protect the tribe and prevent them from making the same mistakes as they went to the battlefield when they were a few years old). The second generation's vision is really bad, (if he chooses the leader of a rich clan to be the Hokage, a righteous backstab is inevitable).

The biggest shortcoming of this book is the protagonist's character, which is neither righteous nor evil enough. The bottom line has been lowering, but there is still a bottom line... Both sides of the standard are not flattering. Perhaps this is indeed the psychological process of an ordinary person, but this kind of character is difficult for most people to like...

I always feel that the author's writing is a bit weak and less attractive. The protagonist is obviously systematic, but rarely changes anything. For example, the death of White Fang, and the rescue of Xiang Lingma, was there some spying mission on an enemy village, and was discovered by a small villager, and actually killed the entire village. I know you want to write about the cruelty of ninjas, but you didn't write it like this. This will not attract readers, and will dissuade some people. Make the protagonist stronger. Don't always say that it is because of fate that it cannot be changed.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Shen Nong, give me an introduction: Since this book is the author's first book, it will feel unintelligible and has language problems. And there will be a lot of explanatory narration that has nothing to do with the plot, taking up a lot of space, so it will be a bit boring to watch. In addition, the protagonist of this article is a complete waste with a golden finger, and the protagonist has a deep understanding of himself as a waste. Specifically reflected in: First: the protagonist cannot use the ninjutsu of Fengdu, and even if it is Fengdu, it will be very difficult to learn. Second: Although the protagonist can obtain the Noble Phantasm through golden finger projection, he also has the combat experience and knowledge of heroic spirits. But in addition to being good at using Noble Phantasms, learning the magical knowledge and experience of heroic spirits is also very difficult and slow. It makes people feel like they are worthy of being trash.

The idea is pretty good, the writing is average, and the plot is a bit poor. The connection between the plots is not perfect and a bit forced. Most of them are about the protagonist suffering a loss, which is used to emphasize the sunshine and gentleness of the protagonist's name, and the strong charm of coercion. The system integration between fate and Naruto is relatively poor.

You are another person who has modified the Eight Gate Dunjia. It's okay if you say that the system helped you to modify it. The problem is that you don't have any foundation, so how can you succeed in making changes? Of course, as for the halo of the protagonist, I have nothing to say. After all, I have watched a lot of them where the protagonist is the main character and there are no plug-ins. They are all modified by the Eight Gates Dunjia. The most outrageous thing is that it is permanently open.

Author, here is a suggestion: Burying a story for the sake of burying a story is going too far. It's good to have foreshadowing, but it's not as good as going too far. Do you understand the meaning of this idiom? Nowadays, it is very common in this book that the story is told half way through to forcibly add a sense of mystery. It is fine in moderation, which is the fun of solving puzzles, but if it is overdone, it will make the reading experience extremely unfriendly The current situation of this book, to be more direct, is that the one who is beaten up in each scene is easier for people to substitute, because Shiro and Orochimaru who hang people up and beat them are too mysterious and overdone Do you feel happy about the reading experience of being the one who is hung up and beaten? When reading a novel, the sense of immersion is very important, because it determines the perspective from which the reader will visit the world you created - usually the protagonist, so there is a lot of space! In particular, the main sales of fan fiction is to add more intervention/substitution angles that are different from the original work. Then if I want to feel that this character is me and that I participate in this world as this character, that is, substitute, what is the most important thing? It is to know the basics, what this character knows, the reader must know, otherwise it will be very dramatic - for example, if I don't know something Shiro knows, and he won't let me know, then I will be popped out on the spot. This is not just referring to a certain character, it is talking about the scene (equivalent to the view of the camera when watching TV). Forget about the scenes taken from the corners, if they are temporarily blocked by actors or scenes, it would be disappointing to just put them there and print them. Is it easier to understand this way? ); Things that the character doesn't know but the readers know are from God's perspective. This appropriate amount can reduce the mystery and increase the expectation, so that it is not easy to abandon the book?

I was immediately persuaded to quit when I saw the name of the protagonist.

What kind of emotional drama is this? You just picked up a random person on the street and invited each other to dinner?

There is a lot of nonsense, and useless psychological activities are reversed. Just skip a few pages without affecting the plot. To read this kind of power system fanfic, you only need to watch the collision between power systems. I have been saying that practicing magic has not achieved anything after dozens of chapters. The author's control of the rhythm needs to be improved. The protagonist needs to constantly obtain staged improvements. Maybe it is because the things given in the follow-up are too good? Does the author not want to give too quickly? As a result, it feels like the protagonist's strength has been suppressed, which makes me feel frustrated.

Alas, after reading so many Naruto novels, except for Tenseigan, there is no one in which the seventeen-year-old has not yet reached the movie level. Yes, Naruto is indeed precocious, but after seeing so many seven-year-old chuunin, ten-year-old jounin, thirteen-year-old clan leader and fifteen-year-old kage level, it is really boring. In the entire Hokage, only Kakashi and a few idiots do not match their age and level. Yes, I admit that there are indeed billionaires in the world who have become teenagers through their own efforts, but every fan fiction writes like this, so this billionaire is too worthless, right? It's boring to read too much. Why does the reincarnation eye attract so many people? Because it is reasonable and makes sense. Cheating is acceptable, age is acceptable, and emotional lines are acceptable, so even if it has some minor flaws, it is still popular to this day.

A useless protagonist, a literary young author. I read this book for free on QQ and saw 345 views. The unbearable poisonous point is that there is a bottom line in shaping the protagonist, and then from 146 to 148, the bottom line is given up to kill passers-by. The author also thinks he is being reasonable and talks a lot of nonsense. In addition, the author is always reasonable, and from 342 to 345, he starts to poison again. The protagonist is arranged by the author to have a schizophrenia, and the bottom line is completely lost (after 148, in a chapter, the author also writes that the protagonist has rearranged the bottom line for himself, and says that this time he will not What kind of praise can break through. ) Looking at Goldfinger, I can only say that this book is not on the same level as the author's new book Steady Wizard. Although the wordy literary youth part can be seen to be of the same origin, there are few poisonous points in Steady writing, which appear from time to time in this book.

Read a few chapters and complain about it. A 7-year-old chuunin, is this called ordinary? Is it developing at 7 years old? Just arrange for companions to fall in love... At the peak of Konoha, there are only more than a hundred jonin? How about playing? When a ninja appears in a mission, he will automatically be promoted from C level to B level. The commission difference is huge... Not much to see... A lot of problems...

After reading a few chapters, I might as well write that the protagonist reaches the limit and then use cheats to break through the upper limit, or use cheats to reach the upper limit in one step, or add the upper limit and then write that the protagonist reaches the upper limit after exercising for a period of time. At least there is a sense of perception It turns out that cheats add future potential to the protagonist. Adding it gives people the same feeling as if it is not added.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

There is no trace of Shirou Emiya at all.

I haven't watched Xingyue very much, but I always say that I should practice and strengthen it. How can I practice it? What effect?

I can't understand what's written at all, it's a mess of red a's. I haven't watched many anime, but I've only watched Jap's Conan, Dragon Ball, and One Piece.