Heroes of the Red Chamber

This book seems frustrating, and I have already confirmed to you that the protagonist is brainless, childish and an idiot. The author is probably underage and writing about adult matters. The protagonist seems to have no life experience. People of several decades have their IQs dropped by several decades after traveling through time to become teenagers. The storyline has no logic or emotional intelligence. For example, the lewd thief caught and tied up the protagonist but ran away? This is not something that decades-old martial arts masters would do. It is impossible to become a master with such an IQ.

Seeing Chapter 11 Entering Jia's Mansion, it is said here that Zhou and Zhao are not Jia Zheng's concubines, but aunts. Concubines usually come from poor people, small families or businessmen. There is a formal process for entering the house, and there is a formal concubinage document. They can be treated as sisters to the main wife. Only when the husband makes a mistake can the husband and the main wife abandon the concubine through formal procedures. She is the actual master in the family. Aunt Zhou and Aunt Zhao are actually slaves of the Jia family. Because they were "promoted" by their master and became aunts, they are actually still slaves, regardless of whether they have children or not. In fact, the children born to the aunt are sent to the mistress (the first wife) according to regulations, and she is not qualified to teach them. Mrs. Wang in the Jia Mansion deliberately kept Jia Huan with Aunt Zhao because Aunt Zhao, who was uneducated and vulgar, could not teach her son well, so Jia Huan did not pose a threat to Baoyu. Instead, she was not wanted by Jia Zheng because she was obscene. In addition, aunts do not have any legal protection. The beating, scolding and selling are all decided by the master and mistress. The so-called "half master" is just deceiving himself as a slave.

It's so embarrassing to post it with such a short word count. Fool the elementary school students.

What the hell is this writing about? It's a forced pretense, a forced confrontation of benevolence and righteousness. The inhuman thief was actually let go. Or is the personality of the thief a reflection of the author's heart?

I feel like after entering Jia's house, Sister Lin couldn't stop writing. . .

At the beginning, it was written that Lin Daiyu recognized Zhou Lin as her younger brother, Zhou Lin was fifteen years old, and the thieves also coveted Lin Daiyu's beauty, so it can be said that Lin Daiyu was also about fifteen years old, and the age difference with Lin Daiyu when she entered Jia's house was too big. Even if the age was adjusted because of the author's need to make up, in ancient times, people who were fourteen or fifteen years old should have been engaged, and even if they were not, they should not be sent to relatives. I feel that the age is unreasonable.

Maintain the standard and order everything on the shelves. The heroine in my heart is Baochai. The most important thing is to write it well, as long as you don't enter the palace, please feel free to do anything else~

He is ruthless and ungrateful, but he insists on being affectionate and righteous. Pig's feet has been trained to the level of dragon leopard, and he is considered a master. He can save the prince, but he cannot save his biological mother. He also looked like he was waiting for relatives when the Jia family was in trouble.

You can complain first before speaking, don't just copy the original work. Copying books is too much. The plot progresses too slowly.

It's good-looking, the fusion of Red Mansions and martial arts, the author is very thoughtful.

Just saw the comments. Did I accidentally cheat the author? I just said that I hope the heroine is Baochai, but the author did not say for sure who the heroine is 😅

I hope there are more female protagonists, preferably Lin Daiyu. Jia Baoyu, die, motherfucker.

When I looked at the chapter that explained the protagonist's life experience, the setting of the protagonist's life experience was not good. The parallel world of Red Mansions was barely passable, but there was nothing eye-catching. It's not a time-traveler, and it doesn't have a strong sense of immersion. Moreover, it's a bloody life experience explained in a few chapters, which is a bit poisonous. Objectively speaking, if you are not a seasoned Red Mansion fan, there is a high probability that you will not be interested in watching it!

Author, I'm sorry that I may have cost you an important supporter. In the next period of time, I will give you 8 recommendation votes every day~

Looking at this update, I feel like there might be a eunuch

Don't copy the original text of "Red Mansion" and then write an analysis. Everyone else's writing is bad.

In addition, true energy can allow people to survive underwater. Can Qin Keqing be stunned?

I feel like the writing is not very good and there is no sense of flow when reading.

Can I still push it up after being cut for two years?

The author's technique is really stupid and really funny. Is the Red Mansion the same as reality? Unexpectedly, the techniques are the same, they are both real dragon skills but too fake.

Just read the introduction. It's rare for Jia Baoyu to get his wish.