The Haunted Tomb Beneath the Underworld

How to put it I came here after it was free for a limited time, and the novel is readable. However, I have some suggestions. The female lead actually possesses quite a few skills, but these weren't adequately explained in the beginning, or the explanations contradicted her later abilities. It makes me a little confused; how can she be so powerful when she doesn't have many life experiences? The beginning could be revised a bit to give the main characters more experiences or learning processes; otherwise, these characters give me the feeling that a newbie is stronger than a level 100 veteran. Then there's the constant danger, which makes me wonder, doesn't the protagonist ever rest? So, a few sweet lines about taking a break would be appropriate. Just a brief mention is fine; a relaxed balance is best. Next, there's the issue of writing style. Some of the descriptions in the beginning are a bit rambling, and some parts could have been more vivid and evocative. It will definitely improve as it progresses. So, although some descriptions in this novel didn't give me that immersive feeling, I believe that as long as the author perseveres, the later novels and so on will only get better. Finally, I wish the author all the best. 😊

Why does such a good book only have less than a thousand recommendation votes? Why are those mindless system novels with endless chatter so popular? I don't understand.

This is a first-person novel. But I must say, even in the first person, it reads very smoothly. An adventurous "I" is destined to lead an extraordinary life.

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These are books that have been free for a limited time; there are always good books available after such a long break.

The author's perseverance is truly amazing! It's been so long, and they're still updating!

That's good. I hope all three princesses can escape the ghost town. But I guess reality is still in those three coffins.

Just between us, is the author a girl?

Holy crap, you'll regret it for life if you don't watch this! The story is exciting and engaging.

Keep it up, author! There aren't many tomb raiding novels left these days.