Fox's Temptation

Dear author, I accidentally came across this work of yours on Douyin a few days ago. I rarely read novels, and I didn't even read any of them. Once I read it, I was attracted by the imagination of your work. I specially downloaded it as a starting point. The overall writing is really very good. I think some people say that your writing is like a running account, but I don't think so. I can really empathize with you when you describe family love. Maybe I was born at the wrong time. If you had published this article in 2025, it might have really become popular. After seeing what you said later, you were forced to finish it because it had no commercial value. I can understand your helpless situation, and I can also clearly feel that your later writing style is different from the previous one. I can only say that Qidian owes you a big ending I saw that your homepage only has one novel. I wonder if you are still writing? I also hope that you are still insisting on writing what you like at this moment, and have gained the commercial value you want, come on! Because I really, really like this work!

No wonder it's so popular and the story is so bad... The first plot is ups and downs and exciting, but the second part can't get any worse. Three years have passed, and Jiang Long's Taoism has not improved at all. Looking at the whole article, it feels like I stole someone else's manuscript, but I didn't steal the rest of it, and I feel like I can't edit it anymore.

I really like Lao Huang so much, and the clips with Lao Huang are very heart-warming 😭 The ending is really too hasty, the author really can't update some extras on Weibo 😭

Why didn't Huang Jiu suddenly like the heroine? And didn't Jin Manshan ask the heroine to help him? Why didn't he write it? Please don't abuse the elderly. Manshan is over 60. Liu Chen said she was an evil spirit and you didn't write it. How could the heroine not learn any Taoism? Did Huang Yan work for a living? The heroine was stronger than she is now when she was a child, right? You let the four spirits explode directly. What should their parents do? Didn't you write that Bingbing's parents love her very much? And in the end, the villain's fighting power also collapsed. The fighting power of Huang Jiu and Huang Yan was not well written. Aren't they two awesome people? Why didn't you write it well? They were like paper tigers. And why does Huang Jiu hate the Green Fox Fairy?

Why did Liu Chen hate the heroine but didn't fill in the holes? Xue Chen ran away from the master to find a way to separate the soul of the Green Fox Fairy and didn't write it carefully. Who is the ghost general's aunt and why Huang Shuangshuang obeyed Dai Yuemian's orders? It ended without filling in a lot of holes. Later, I felt that the author didn't want to write and just wrote an ending to explain to the readers. I wrote it seriously. This book can be better. Also, do you have any similar books that you can recommend?

This novel has a total of 320 chapters, of which 275 have been read. All I can say is that it's like a running account, with no climax. I've written this and that, that's all. After reading it for so long, I still haven't understood what I'm writing about. I can't stand it anymore and the heroine is stupid too

Re-write the ending, bro. It makes me so uncomfortable. Can't I give you some money?

To be honest, if it weren't for the forced ending on this platform, I think this work would be better

I feel like the finale is a bit baffling and a bit hard to understand.

Come back and write it. It's so uncomfortable. I dream every night that I am a fox fairy with a bunch of people who go to various halls to fight. It's because you are too stubborn and you ended it in a hurry. Then you can do less emotional drama and more metaphysics, techniques, and suspense. In short, there are more metaphysics. Let's update Liu Chen's part. I want to know what he wants to say. What is the meaning of keeping that jade pendant? And then there is the matter of their Taoist temple. What is the meaning of Dai Yuemian's other two people with the same appearance? How did he catch the big boss in the end? Huang Jiu's monologue chapter: Why did the big boss hate him but created someone like him to make up for it? You must also know your own pitfalls. Anyway, they are all filled in thickly.