Online Gaming: Immortals and Buddhas

The writing is good, but the character of this pig's trotter is a bit too unique. When he has no money, he borrows a hundred from this or that. When he has the ability, he never repays the buddies who helped him. He even has no awareness of mentioning his buddies' difficult situation to the female gang leader, and even changes his face to look like he has been upgraded to the boss. Those who were leveling up with him were killed because of him. Before they died, they helped him retrieve the flying sword dropped by the boss. However, he didn't even express his gratitude. Even if you don't say thank you and take others for free for two days, it's not a waste of help. But you turned around and left those people behind, and never even mentioned it again. Such a pig's feet of character is difficult to be replaced and recognized. No matter how well you write, it is in vain.

If you feel uncomfortable with anything, or if you see something wrong, feel free to mention it. Also tell me what kind of plot you like.

Book Friends 7-8-2-4-3-7-4-2-0 The author's update is so awesome. You don't even ask for anything. I'm afraid of you, eunuch. . . Promote your book everywhere. All you veterans here should take a look. You can't have too many recommendation votes and you can't have too few monthly tickets. Subscribe and go around and live to be ninety-nine.

The name, background, skills, magic weapon, and sect name of the dragon set.

I came here on a limited exemption. I really like this kind of fairy tale-themed online game-turned-reality novel, but after reading a hundred chapters, I found some problems. One of the main characters' IQ is sometimes high and sometimes low, and their character is sometimes deep and sometimes wise. Secondly, various inexplicable emotional scenes come out of nowhere (for example, the mission character Xiaowen is very embarrassing to watch, but it would be nice to have a little foreshadowing). Third, the progress is too slow and the plot is bland, which seriously hinders the progress.

This author is very Buddhist. If you can give me a first order, please support it. To say these words to a reader, I find that I am really free.

The writing is really good, but we need to be careful about economic issues to prevent the economic system from collapsing. Many online game novels have this problem. It often happens that people at the level of the crown prince of Samsung Group invest all their wealth. Not to mention why people at this level are so addicted to games. Just such a random investment will cause the board of directors to intervene. It is not a one-person company.

You have to know what readers like, not what you like. What's the use of writing happily and updating thousands of words every day? 1. It doesn't matter how many women you have, whether you can take them or not, what's important is the ambiguity, it's best not to be a stud, it's appropriate, you can refer to the early women in the previous books of Not Fuyun 2. Appropriately interesting talents, items and skills, don't be invincible 3. The basic plot, no procrastination, no need to be imaginative, what kind of virus, not being able to go offline, foreign countries using games to destroy us, etc. These are basically out of our control. Let's talk about this book again. I have almost forgotten about it, so let's talk about preparing for the competition. I have written more than ten chapters and researched various spells. Do you think readers in this fast-paced society will read it carefully and see how the protagonist upgrades his spells under your setting? After reading this, readers can cast spells on their own? Otherwise why study your system? I know he just needs to upgrade. Let's talk about the various instant kills in the game. Will readers find them entertaining? Emphasis on plot and light on principles. What readers read is the story, not the paper. You can show it to your friends. If you don't have the patience to read any chapter, there is no need to exist. Xianxia online games are basically gone, author, come on!

The author updates are pretty awesome. I like this kind of excellent author, so I subscribed!

Can the protagonist not be so vicious when dividing things? I couldn't eat anything before. Even if something is distributed according to work, I have to pick first. As a result, the protagonist pushes it back and forth. He wants it but is embarrassed to ask for it.