Rainbow Crystal of Elf

Overall it's okay, but there are too many private items, and often a whole chapter is filled with the kind of brain-boosting "I'm thinking" kind of rambling...

It's broken. It's a scam again. I've forgotten everything I said in this book...

Well, boss, if you want to sign a contract, I recommend changing the Pokémon in the title of the book to an elf. Because of copyright reasons, I won't sign a contract with Pokémon.

Disclaimer: This review represents only my personal views and has nothing to do with other readers. [Book Title + Introduction] 8/10 XXX Series of Elf, the word "Hongjing" sounds slightly literary and artistic when read for the first time, but it feels very smooth, the introduction is bright, time travel + adventure. [Cover Sensation] 10/10 The cover is handsome, fire-breathing dragon, biting land shark, Sirona and other praises. [Preliminary Review] 24/30 1. The wedge in the previous chapter explains the time-travel process very cleverly. Because it is a wedge, there is no problem in the details of time-travel in the whole chapter. After time-travel, you see the DP gods choose the plane, and the story starts directly. The time-travel rhythm is 9 minutes. (It doesn't matter if you wear the wedge throughout the whole chapter, I personally think you can skip it if you don't like it) 2. Chapter 1 of the bright gold finger is steady and old-school. Although this gold finger is very ordinary as the author said, it directly tells the reader that the gold finger is 9 points. 3. The three chapters travel directly without delay, starting in Kanto, selecting three little animals from Dr. Ohki's research institute, starting with the juvenile body of the old spray, etc. The overall rhythm is well received. The protagonist's description of the whole book is 6 points, which is not too obvious (the ultimate goal is to meet the old alpaca, the adventure begins, etc.) 4. The protagonist's name is Lu Ming, and Luffy + Naruto join forces. 5. The beginning is generally well handled, and I am interested in reading it. [Writing and Impression] 32/40 30 points or above, the reading is quite smooth and the paragraphs are clear. I don't think much about the basic writing and it feels good. However, some psychological descriptions and complaints in the early stage may be a little longer, but the complaints are OK for those who can get the point. If the GET is not enough, the effect may not be very good. [Others] 6/10 As an adventure element in traditional elf novels, it is very qualified. There are no major problems in the overall aspect. It is very qualified as a NICE book. The remaining small problems may be common phenomena in the process of long-term development. In a long adventure, small stories sometimes suddenly become scattered. This is one of the small problems. I've finished reading Kanto, and now it's the Fang Yuan chapter. The big main line and the main line by region can be clearer! The dream does not stop, come on for a million dollars!

Wow, it's so awesome, Jiangjiang is bubbling + support 😜

Hello Hongjing, 🤓 Jiangjiang has a little head, reward support, trade reservation, (not py, super quiet)

I hope it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists 1 Single female protagonist 2 Multiple female protagonists 3 Single female protagonist plus Shannaido (author's idea 😁)

The sentences are quite fluent, but the problem is that many times it is not pointed out who said the sentence. There are many self-centered sentences, which are incomprehensible, as if they are immersed in their own world and talking to themselves. The stream of consciousness is very serious and needs to be paid attention to.

Will the author insist on writing this book? I want to invest

Is the author here?😭

Correct me if I'm wrong: Armored Tyrannosaurus has a ground element. Why does your sandstorm cause harm to ground element elves?

In fact, it's okay to read the beginning. After all, the author is a hardcore gamer and a senior comic and animation enthusiast. If he can proceed step by step, it can be said to be a masterpiece. However, the author's advantage is that he is a senior player, and his downfall is that he is a senior player. After all, this game only has so many useful lineups. If we talk about the game alone, there are only about twenty Pokémon that appear frequently after writing about it, which is exhausting. But what Pokemon fan fiction needs most is bonding, imagination, and a description of the social landscape between people and Pokemon. Battles are of course an important part, but not the whole story. As for the battle part, it is high and low from the beginning. There is no detailed cultivation process, no growth, and no bonds. In one hundred chapters, it is already at the king level. What else to write next? What is the point of writing all about mythical beasts? I know that for experienced players, their minds are full of tricks, or they are very clear about skill combinations, egg laying, and lineups, but games and novels are different. We all hate the repeated grinding of levels and effort points in games. There is nothing wrong with using cheats to brush up effort points, levels, and skills. But this is a novel. Readers want to see your training process. No matter how bad it is, they also want to see your tactical application under different lineups. It doesn't matter if you write brilliant battles. Fighting relies on recklessness, and training relies on sugar-coating. Then why should I read novels? There is no sense of substitution and no experience. Wouldn't it be better if I just play the game?

Well, is there multiple female protagonists now or just one heroine? If it's just one heroine, I won't watch it...

Book friends, who do you want the author to change the cover to? If you want 1, please type the number "1." Below. If you want 2, please type the number "2." Below. If you want 3, please type the number "3." Below. 1. I hope the author will change the cover to Girona. 2. I hope the author will keep the main character unchanged on the cover. 3. I hope the author will change the cover to two people appearing together.

I can write pretty well, but I can only invest next month.

Post some viewing suggestions. Your setting is very good. After reading about the work, I found that the setting of this book is very suitable to my liking. This is an excellent place. Let's talk about some bad viewing experiences. Golden Chapter 3. In fact, using the time and space gods to circle at the beginning is a bit embarrassing and cliché. My personal advice to you is that if you time travel, you don't need to circle the time too much because you are used to time travel when reading PM articles. What readers need more is a natural feeling. Your opening setting of the time and space gods has turned the reasonable setting of your book into unreasonable. In the next chapter, a messenger appears, which actually makes it even more embarrassing. In fact, the process of time travel is simply time travel and you don't explain too much. I think it is better than the beginning now. This is my personal opinion. If you think it is wrong, it doesn't matter. I am just commenting.

After reading Chapter 20, I suddenly discovered something. There was basically no interaction with the elves, only explanations. It was a bit strange.

This work boasts about mythical beasts, is full of imagination, and is written inexplicably.

Nowadays, there are too many Pokémon dark reality streams. Do you have any recommendations that are lighter? I don't want to see them always making malicious speculations.

What have you been writing recently? You don't need the main character anymore, right? A bunch of supporting characters pop up all of a sudden. I write about this and that and there is no progress in the plot at all. How can I keep up with it? I am afraid that you will be raised to death.

I feel like... The heroine Sirona has a very high presence in the book... But when it comes to the cover, she doesn't occupy as much space as her biting land shark...

Why do you need to add the word "m" in front of it? It's super annoying and disgusting if you read it too much.

If this book had more female protagonists, judging from the current writing situation and progress, it would be a failure. For example, I said earlier how affectionate I am, and then I feel so emotional. I still have you in my heart, but there are just a few more people~ （(ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻）

It must be a pigeon 😅😅😅😅😅

Looking for novels where Sirona is the heroine