I Am the Transmigration Ender

To be honest, the writing style is decent, and the logic is also good. You're unlikely to be very passionate when writing your first novel. The first book is about building experience and accumulating readers. How can you just stop writing halfway through? Most importantly, as a time traveler, when you're looking at other time travelers, you should also use those time travelers to look at yourself! Some of them seem to be lowering the IQ of other time travelers!