Mecha Odyssey

After reading more than 40 chapters, I feel that the protagonist is a scumbag without mechanical weapons. He was fucked by a few gangsters and ended up in the hospital. He is so useless. This is the most useless reborn person I have ever seen.

Come on, stop writing. This is not a rear admiral and captain. He is a useless person. What is the biggest advantage of being reborn? Have you ever been a soldier? Check the information. More novice than novice

I want to read mecha stories, but few people can write them well. I miss the skeleton elves.

After reading more than 40 chapters, if I want to be with a woman, I might as well make myself super strong and reborn. I am just a fool without the advantage of foresight.

You really shouldn't write about rebirth. It's better to set it up with the protagonist dreaming about his own life. After all, the dream has no real sense. The protagonist is childish because he is childish. How can he be so childish when he is reborn?

The protagonist is just a useless student, far from a soldier.

The story is not bad, but you are writing about a major general in his thirties or forties? ? ?

If you don't strengthen yourself first and make yourself stronger when you come back from rebirth, it's useless to calm down.

This lousy book should use this rebirth to pick up women. He can try to become stronger and seduce women as hard as he can. The main point here is to kill insects. If you try this hard, it is highly poisonous.

The biggest failure of the rebirth story is that you really become that age when you are reborn. When I was reborn 20 years ago, I behaved like a child again.