Legend of the Ancient Candle Dragon

I know it's not easy to write an article, so I hope the author will adopt some suggestions. 1. What realms are there? There are too many. Readers can't remember them, and they don't know what they are for. For example, it was established by a certain great master himself, how powerful this great master is, how big the interface is, etc. Either explain clearly, a small plane, a few details of the plot, and readers will know it. Just take a look, no need to remember, or don't write about so many continents and so many planes. 2. The plot must be coherent. Switching scenes or jumping in time must be explained clearly so that readers can see it coherently. I suggest you watch it (The Spies of the Republic of China or The Detective). I have been following it for a year, and sometimes I don't watch it for half a month. After watching it for two minutes, I can get involved, and I can think of the previous plot and reason about it now, and I feel very involved. 3. Mistakes and missing words are common, and you don't read much at one time. It is more difficult for readers to recall previous plots and substitute them. If there are typos that require readers to distinguish, then there will basically be no highlights.

I was attracted by the name Zhulong, but I was persuaded to leave in the first chapter. There are two versions of Zhulong. One is the God of Time, the most ancient god, the first creature born in the world, and the other is the first dragon of the dragon clan in the prehistoric times, second only to the Ancestral Dragon. By this time, it has been written down as rubbish. . .

I like it very much, keep it up

Sure enough, the protagonists all have the habit of touching the tip of their nose when they are embarrassed. I just want to know if this habit exists in real life? Anyway I didn't

Su Shi: If you don't think about it, you will never forget it. Margaret: I'm in bed and the rice is in the pot. Fan Zhongyan: Wine enters the heart of sorrow, turning into tears of lovesickness. Li Bai: The man came riding a bamboo horse and went around the bed to make green plums. Zhang Ailing: How dare I grow old before you come. King Qian Wusu: The flowers are blooming on the road, so you can return home slowly. Fang Wenshan: Tianqing

It looks good, but the updates are slow and a bit frustratingớ ₃ờ

To be honest, Hongjun is an old Yinbi! In my opinion, there should be several great traditions in ancient times! Hongjun's immortal way. . The demonic path of Rahu. . The royal way that unified the ancient world. . And Shinto (Buddhism is a product that softens Immortalism and Shinto). . . Why do you say Hongjun is better than Lao Yin? This involves a dispute over orthodoxy! ! ! First, use Luo Hu to trap the three clans of dragon, phoenix and unicorn (the royal way), and then form a team to trap Luo Hu's (the evil way)! This is the Dragon and Phoenix Tribulation! ! ! ! Then another Lich Tribulation came and tricked (King Dao) again! ! ! ! Later, I used the Great Tribulation of the Gods to create a castrated version (Shinto), which is Heaven, and cut off the potential of Shinto! ! ! ! ! What's the final result? (Hongjun's Immortal Way) is the only one, while others such as the Demonic Way, the Divine Way, and the Kingly Way still exist! But there is no potential to threaten (immortality) at all!

It feels so confusing. It's not about Shinto. Why did it suddenly change? It feels so confusing when I look at it

"The worst thing is not being led down a lost road for no apparent reason, but when you pick up the sword alone and decide to go your own way without stopping, a person suddenly appears, hugs you tightly, and says, boy, I want to share this long life with you. When you get excited, you throw away the sword, roast the horse, and when you turn around, the person is gone. ​​​" [Tears] [tears] [tears]

"If you like someone, you must tell her not to ask her to repay you, but to let her in the dark days in the future, when she denies herself, remember that there are people in the world who like her so much that she is not useless."

The protagonist has practiced Shinto, so it's impossible to give up on the Dragon Clan! After all, the status of dragons in mythology is that they are the natural water gods of caves, lakes, rivers and seas.

Come back and write some more. The new book is indeed important, but even if this book is not finished as planned, at least the follow-up should be made clear.

Slow, too slow, very slow, so slow that I thought I would die just to read a chapter. I didn't even remember that this book was on the reading list.