Pirate Zefa

It's boring, this novel has no sense of immersion. It's like a clear soup with little water and tasteless food.

I have read the first six chapters of this book, and I feel... Let's put it this way, the writing is very poor, and the characters are well created. It is not plain water. However, many parts of this book are unreasonable. For example, the bounty is 800 million. Well, before the era dominated by the Golden Lion, Roger, could a small fish and a small shrimp have such a high salary? Even if Roger and the others ushered in the Age of Discovery, I remember that Bigmam at that time seemed to have only more than 500 million. This was not the era of the protagonist. Just look at Brooke's bounty. Let's talk about the issue of branch lieutenant general. The G1 branch is not an ordinary branch, it is a New World branch. Akainu has moved the navy headquarters to G1. How can the base commander be a waste? These are a bit poisonous, so I think the author needs to be more careful to come up with good results, but overall it's still good.

There is a book about rustling fruit ideas, you can read it, maybe it can give you some suggestions.

I have a few questions~ Mainly because I'm worried that if it's related to my work, no one might care about me, so Bendong will just post it alone. About the timeline. As a Haimi for many years, I still respect the basic timeline and have consulted a lot of information. However, I have changed some things to meet the needs of the plot. The specific parts will be mentioned in the article. In addition, the era of great pirates begins, which is when Roger is executed. After reading various opinions, I finally chose the year 1500 in the Hainan calendar. About devil fruits. To be honest, there won't be fruits that are too buggy, such as space fruits, time fruits, chaos fruits, bala bala bala. After all, Bentong is not Oda. Oda is the author of the original work. He can make it come true no matter how he edits it. Bentong, as a small kid, does not have this ability. Of course, if the original work already exists, that's another matter. Guan *** restraint. Follow the principle of sea restraint. About rationality. To be honest, Bento is a reasonable person, but in the world of One Piece, as you all know, unlike the world of Naruto, the world of One Piece is a bit unreasonable if you use your imagination. Bento can only say that big things are reasonable and small things are for the needs of the plot. So I can only say that I am a semi-reasonable party😂 Regarding combat power. For convenience and intuitiveness, a fuzzy bounty form is adopted. About the title of the book. I originally wanted to ask one of the pirates to lead the way, but I didn't dare... Finally, about the protagonist. The protagonist Moosa needs a growth process to change his mentality. In the early stage, the protagonist is a person in modern society, who is indifferent, rejecting, and evasive to the world in his heart. Later, he gradually accepts the world, changes the world, and becomes a middle-aged person. It takes a process. The remaining small settings will not be mentioned here, they will be mentioned one by one in the article. For example, is the natural system trigger-type, such as the structure of the navy, such as the layering of kendo, such as the awakening of devil fruits, such as... Do you want to know the rest of the questions? Go read a book! Recommended votes, please remember to save them~~

Ahem. As title. Bendong received the short message. So I am willing to admit defeat [inappropriate word choice crossed out]. It was Bendong who kept his promise and officially evolved into a two-shift beast! ! ! Every morning at six o'clock and every evening at five o'clock~ If the effect is not good, change it after a while~ Sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers~~~~

Many friends asked me why it is called Pirates of Zefa... I've talked about this in a single chapter before, but many newbies don't know, so I'll say it again in the book review area~ Well, to put it simply, some time ago I felt that using the original title (looking at the cover) was a bit empty, so I was going to change the title. Then when I was communicating with the editor, there was a problem that I couldn't understand, so... He became this Yazi... The protagonist is Zefa's son…

The most confusing thing is that Enero's lightning can instantly melt gold, but it can't do anything with rubber.

The male protagonist is a marine, right? The navy eats shit like a fruit, the sea is full of water, and the air is full of water vapor, so why don't they make thunder? What are you afraid of when you are running around? Mom is about to eat the giant eagle fruit. Is it difficult to go to the White Sea? Akainu Lava Fruit also has sustained high temperature damage, what about Shasha Fruit? He jumps into the sea and comes back up, and he doesn't even need to be domineering to beat the male protagonist.

I have been reading books for 20 years. Nowadays, I always skip through the books. There is no book that can attract me from beginning to end. Why do I feel that it is boring?

Contents of Zefa the Pirate: (The pig's foot is Zefa's son). . . . . Complete book😄

Come in and take a look. The author changed the title of the book. He thought the protagonist was Zefa. Then he looked at the character bar... Oh, I feel tired.

Zefa hates the devil fruit writing technique the most, or maybe the fantasy beast type would be better

We are all fellow pirates, let's work together!

Obviously the sand crocodile can suck people dry, but it is ridiculous that it can be defeated by such a small amount of water. The difference between whether sand sticks to water or not is just the difference between being broken into pieces after being punched and broken into grains. It won't affect the elementalization at all. I wonder if the author will change this ridiculous setting. The writing style is great, but I can't understand book friends who give negative reviews on this point.

Alas, there are actually many regrets in life, but we have to do this. Just like the protagonist, if he does not eat the Shasha Fruit, he will not be able to return to the Navy Headquarters, and he will definitely die. After returning to the Navy Headquarters, if he does not have the fruit ability to discover the abnormality, then he will definitely die, at least he will save a life! By the way, I would like to say that the author almost wrote a famous sentence in just a few chapters, which I feel is a good job.

The anti-theft is really good. I haven't seen the new chapter since July 5th. I have been refreshing until now and I am impatient. Goodbye

It's a very interesting novel. I don't understand why so many people criticize the power of pig's feet. There are a lot of pig's feet that like the thunder fruit. Search it yourself.

After reading the first few dozen chapters, I really don't think it's that good. I understand that the author wants to write about the protagonist's early desire to become stronger, but you are sure that he is a child under 3 years old. He is so damn strong just after eating the Shasha Fruit. (If you say he is not strong, please note 2 points. 1. The protagonist is 3 years old, 2. It takes less than 5 minutes to eat the fruit.) Later, when I came to the headquarters, I was worried that eating the Shasha Fruit would not make me stronger. I gave in. Let's not talk about how the Shasha fruit is natural, let's talk about your father's and your mother's genes. One is a pure physical general, and the other is also a major general (about to be promoted to lieutenant general). They don't even look at their physiques, so they are worried that they will not be able to stand at the peak of their combat power. In the early stage, he was afraid of being killed and had no time to become stronger. This can be explained by the fact that now that he has gone to the headquarters for training, he doubts that he will be able to stand at the peak of his combat power because he ate the Shasha Fruit. Are all the great taijutsu generals finished? Generally speaking, a 3-year-old is not a 3-year-old, and a 20-year-old is not a 20-year-old. All I can say is that I'm looking forward to what comes next.

Author. . . No update for three days

Very nice(○｀ε´○)

I came here after seeing the title of the book and left after reading the first chapter.

It's really well written. I'll hook up with some book lists.

I will soon become a peer and study.