After Reaching the Level of Cultivation Game

When I saw a place to rent an apartment, it was not my type. Let me talk about what I think makes me dislike it. If someone is like me, there is no need to waste time, or let those who say that the later stage looks good give me a portal. I can't see the good things they say in the later stage. First of all, what I didn't like was that the protagonist in the book was penniless and picked up a stone before entering the inn, and then paid the bill with silver in the inn. However, the book did not make it clear whether it was a deception or a real change of matter into gold. If it is a deception, the protagonist will ask the waiter to buy him clothes. The waiter will be greedy for two cents when returning the change, and the protagonist will make him sick for a month and spend a month's wages. In this case, the protagonist has double standards and goes too far. A month's illness costs a month's wages? It's equivalent to losing your job, and isn't one month's salary enough for a month's illness? This depends on the economic system set by the author. If it is based on ancient times, I think it is far from enough. I think this waiter is really cool. Summary of this paragraph, if the money is a cover-up, then I don't like it when the protagonist has double standards and punishes the waiter too harshly. If it is not a cover-up, then the punishment is too severe. OK. Secondly, I find it strange. No matter how peaceful ordinary people are, they will not adapt after experiencing drastic changes in the environment. Moreover, after having the ability to cultivate to the full level of immortality, I only see the protagonist gaining the ability of immortality, but the protagonist is very indifferent to such magical abilities? The ability of the immortal ≠ the state of mind of the immortal (the detachment after possessing the ability of the immortal for a long time, etc.) The change in mentality was too sudden, which made me feel disconnected. Not to mention that omniscience is boring, sometimes it is precisely because of the sudden knowledge that there will be waves in the heart. To summarize this paragraph, the mentality changed too quickly at the beginning, and it looked distorted. I read the reviews and said it looks good, but the psychological gap is huge and uncomfortable. The third is not the third, let me tell you what I think. I think if you travel to a fairy world and suddenly have fairy abilities, you will be very panicked, right? If you suddenly made me the most powerful and wealthy person, I would be panicked and confused at first, let alone an immortal who is separated from others. Then you will be excited, right? Will you try your immortal abilities? Flying everywhere? Then you will be scared, right? I am afraid that my ability will disappear. After all, it is something that comes suddenly. Would it be boring to live forever without losing your ability? At this time I adapted, I was no longer a human being, but an immortal. Then you can control the human world after death and do some interesting things. Then it will definitely get boring again, right? After all, there is no point in playing too much. They are all people who have received compulsory education. They will study the world itself when they are bored, right? How is the world made up? How is life born? Questions like that. After all, they are just immortals. What does it mean compared to the world itself? This is what happened behind the scenes. The ability of an immortal is limited. Help some people, and now you can spend endless time by focusing your wisdom and strength on exploring the endless unknown. You can also try to break through the universe and try to return to the earth. I quit the book mainly because the protagonist in the book gave me too bad senses and high psychological expectations. The rest of the book was pretty good. If the requirements were not high, it might be a good book. After all, I can't be sure until I see the back part. I won't read it with my head next time. We will also ignore the replies that the front is poisonous, the back is good-looking, why don't you write a book, and that you have no money and are not qualified to comment. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better, handle the contradiction between the character setting and the image seen by the readers, become more powerful in writing, and make more money every day. To borrow a word from logic and adapt it, everyone's background is different, and different people can interpret the same text differently. This is the difficulty of writing. The person in your mind is rarely exactly the same as the person who wrote it.

This is only my personal opinion on this book and does not represent the author's views. It may be different from the actual situation. It contains spoilers. This is written after reading Chapter 564, so please be careful. Seeing now, I slowly picked up the big net that the author had just laid out. The overall view of the whole book is that the world is broken and about to be destroyed, and a group of people continue to grow and work hard to save the world. The world in the past few days ended up in the same fate. The Holy Master and the Taoist escaped due to their detachment. They chose to give up after their initial efforts failed, and in the new world that followed, they only chose to give some tips to reap some benefits, but they had no intention of saving the world, and their thoughts were in the wrong place, deviating from the direction that could truly save the world. The Human Emperor is the ancestor of all spirits. The appearance of the Human Emperor has filled the world with vitality. However, the development of living beings is always easy to move in the wrong direction and is unstoppable. The Human Emperor, as the will of all spirits in the world, cannot stop it. He can only watch the prosperous age he built develop on the wrong path again and again, and was destroyed by the apostle when it was riddled with holes. When the world has reached its fourth day of development, it has gone through many tribulations and is riddled with holes. The rules are very weak, and coupled with the disturbance of the previous generations who were just trying to survive, the will of all things has not grown enough to compete with the rules to purge and repair the world. When the power of the world exists, the newly born creatures will only be constantly wiped out and purged during the correction and recovery of the world. At this time, due to the excessive weakness of the will of all things, the human emperor will be difficult to awaken, and the world will continue to be in chaos, and will eventually be shattered and erased from the world's qualification to exist. Tiandao, the source of rules in the world, cannot bear all this happening, but it is connected with the world and is restricted by the rules and cannot save the world. So relying on the observer of the world, she violated the regulations and separated her own existence from the world itself bit by bit, and became an existence of compassion and love for all things in the world. She took on a physical form and was active in every era, saving the world's creatures in danger. She was once the Golden Crow, the Moon Goddess, the Mysterious Lady, and the Giant. . . Every time, when all the souls were in danger, she would step forward, dedicate herself, and sacrifice herself to protect the world. She responds with tenderness to everything in the world, even if everything in the world does not feel anything about her. The higher the degree of stripping, the more she can do, and in this life, she is Qin Sanyue. But all this ultimately treats the symptoms rather than the root cause. All spirits rely on the world and are parasitic on the world. Even if the self-correction of the world is borne by the source of rules itself, the pitiful foundation of the world after it is used for recovery will still be constantly explored, plagiarized, and parasitized. Under such a prosperous age, what is buried is that the rules of the world have long been riddled with holes, are difficult to maintain, and are on the verge of collapse. In the prosperous age, he looked weak. After all, paper cannot contain fire. The extent of the brokenness of the world has already attracted the attention of the apostles. The apostles are already preparing to set off to bring this world that has lost the source of rules, is riddled with rules, and has lost its qualifications as a world to zero. After this, there may be chaos or rebirth, but history will continue to repeat itself, and tragedies may happen again and again. On the third day of the world, Emperor Donggong made efforts and discovered that promotion was the right path, but her promotion failed. On the fourth day, she still insisted on this method, but something went wrong (maybe the method was inaccurate, or there was not enough time). When she saw that the fourth day was about to break again, Ye Fu appeared. Ye Fu pointed out in the previous chapter that Ye Fu is higher than the world. It is easy for him to save the world. He is omnipotent in this world. But of course, he doesn't know everything. He is not eternity itself. He is just a projection of existence in this world. What he can do is limited, but even so, he is omnipotent in this world. But instead of changing the world all at once, he chose to be a teacher. As teachers who tried to be saviors one by one, to correct their mistakes and teach them the correct methods, they chose to teach people to fish. When uncivilized people find it difficult to eat, giving them food can only meet their temporary needs, but teaching them food growing and hunting skills can have a long-term impact in the future. This is Ye Fu's thinking. Although he can help in a crisis, he cannot rely on him in every crisis. After all, he does not exist in this world, so he tries to teach the creatures in this world how to save themselves. Of course, this is what I admire the most. This kind of description is a description that truly fits the image of a powerful person in my heart. He takes action when it is time to take action, punishes those who make mistakes, and focuses on guiding the younger generations rather than taking care of everything. It's not like in the novels next door where the juniors were bullied and a few high-level monks came out to shout and kill. Those were just guardian parents who knew how to fight, not real powerful people. He is a reckless man with nothing but strength, but no corresponding state of mind. So in this invincible article, the male protagonist is Ye Fu, but the protagonist is never Ye Fu. The protagonist is those who continue to work hard to save the world, those who refuse to give up and are gentle to all things. Their growth, their ideals, their dedication to protect, their sacrifices, their disregard for death, and their spirit of succession are the real value of this book. Compared to the eternity of Long Aotian's growth history, this book is an ukiyo-e of the world, a grand world conceived in the author's mind. The book contains many descriptions of buildings, cities, institutions, world trees, clouds, animals, talismans, calligraphy and painting, food, mountains and rivers, poems, clothing, music, ghosts and other cultures and civilizations of other worlds. The characters' ideas, speech, etiquette, behavior, attitude towards things, etc. Are also touched upon. It is really intended to show us the other world that the author feels deeply for. This is not the rise and conquest of one person, but the ups and downs of various characters in the world. A series of major events that occurred in the prosperous civilization of cultivating immortals. The author is willing to describe the impact of the confrontation between big men on the world as a whole, on all forces, and even on the common people. It allows us to understand more about the world itself, and allows us to realize the complex changes in the world as a whole, rather than the achievements of one person. Long Aotian's novels give all the camera to the protagonist, but in this book Ye Fu does not have too many scenes. He is equivalent to an observer. He does not take too many shots himself, but shows us all aspects of this wonderful world and the prosperity of this world. In this book, everyone who works hard to protect is the protagonist.

Foreshadowing arrangement (Volume 3, ebb and flow, the numbers represent the chapters where the foreshadowing comes from.): If you don't look carefully, you won't find that Sister Wen has buried so many foreshadowings. The more you study these foreshadowings, the more serious you find them. In particular, the foreshadowing of the characters' fate and emotional changes is very delicately written. If nothing else, let's get started! 1, 263. Ye Fu said to Qi Panshan: If you can choose to live, choose to live. It indicates that Luo Xing Pass will definitely be broken, and it is estimated that many people will be killed by then. II, 263. Bai Wei told Ye Fu that her surname was Donggong, and the previous article said that Bai Wei came from an ordinary scholarly family, and in the second volume, it was said that Bai Wei knew the music at his fingertips. It is speculated that Bai Wei had a previous life, and he might have been a master of music in his previous life. Three:​264. Ye Fu asked Luo Fengmao to go to Zhongzhou. Four:​264. Shi Zhu was seeking some kind of opportunity somewhere for his disciple Zhen Yunshao. It is speculated that Zhen Yunshao will appear in the fourth volume. Five:​265. Meteor shower. Ye Fu said that the last meteor shower was 3,333 years ago. There must be a mystery to such a special number. Combined with the sentence "The sword opens the gate of heaven and sweeps away all dust", it is guessed that it is related to a certain sword cultivator. Combined with the subsequent chapters, it may be either. Six:​269,270. As a foreshadowing of the black line, Ye Fu asked Qu Hongxiao to find a lamp with the word "Huang" on it. The young Jiang Shen changed his name to "Huang", and his life experience may be Bailong, the youngest son of the Dragon King. Ye Fu asked Huang to go to Zhongzhou to cross the Tribulation Mountain and give him the Ksitigarbha technique, guessing that it was related to the god in the story of Crossing the Tribulation Mountain. Seven: Chapter 274. Ning Jianghu released Shiran in advance. So, why? And why is Shiran sleeping? It's all foreshadowing. The guess is related to the general trend. 8:274. When describing the Mohist bronze tree, he specifically stated that the bronze tree could turn into an airship. It is speculated that the Mo family may be in trouble and move the base to escape. 9:275. A short paragraph describes the Flower City, saying that the saint who loved flowers died here. This may not be foreshadowing. If it's foreshadowing, I guess it has something to do with Bai Wei. 10:279. Big foreshadowing! The origin of Sanwei Bookstore. According to the description, it was left by Li Ming's savior. Even after Li Ming became the Great Sage, he didn't know his identity, so he was guessed to be a person from before the chronology. And this character likes flowers and has good music. Friends, is this attribute similar to that of a certain heroine? 11:281. Big foreshadowing! Ye Fu's conversation with Qu Hongxiao showed that Hu Lan will have a heavy burden in the future and may have to face the whole world. It is speculated that Hu Lan will stand on the opposite side of the world. 12:282. Qu Hongxiao asked Ye Fu for help in emotional matters, and she expressed that she was dedicated to seeking the truth. The one who suffers this must be Wen Zaijian (who is not there yet), and I guess he wants to torture Wen Zaijian. (Since reading Sister Wen's book, I know that this is a person who shoots knives whenever he wants. But he is a serious person and will not mess around, so don't worry.) 13: 282. This is my guess. I probably belong to the Qu Hongxiao Party. The description in this chapter is relatively delicate about Qu Hongxiao's emotions. I feel that she may form some kind of special dependence on Ye Fu. Friends who like Qu Hongxiao can read more of this chapter. Of course, in fact, I most hope that Wen Qu can achieve positive results, (holding the lily flag high) 14: 285. Sister Iris appears for the first time, and is described as "care", "love and tenderness". It is speculated that her identity may be to serve or take care of some kind of existence. Fifteen: ***. Big foreshadowing! The existence of dating was confirmed for the first time. The giant beast, the prisoner skeleton, has died and turned into a mountain of bones. It is speculated that it will appear in the plot of Crossing the Tribulation Mountain in the fourth volume. Hu, the giant beast of the times, existed before the beginning of the era, and has been sleeping until now. Here, there is a sentence describing "This is a dialogue that changes the world." It is speculated that Ye Fu and Wei may have reached a similar cooperation or agreement, and Wei may come to the rescue when the world changes. 16:287. Say something. As mentioned here, Ao Tingxin also has a name called "Ao Guanguan". I guess it may be changed to this name in the future. The name Guan Guan will be more famous than Ting Xin. Seventeen:​288. Big foreshadowing! Ye Fu took Shi Ran into the long river of time and returned to Shi Ran's childhood. The conflict between Shi Ran who moved here and the Confucian Academy was most likely a conflict with the Holy Master. Then Shi Ran gave up studying and went back to directly inherit the King of Cloud Beasts. Then he began to challenge masters from all walks of life. It is speculated that this may be related to the dynasty and the general trend of the world. Shiran discovered some secrets, and then her mentality collapsed. She wanted to stand opposite the Holy Master and the others. She challenged the masters of all walks of life to find people related to the secrets. The author seems to want to describe Shiran in a way that promotes desire and suppresses it first. Eighteen:​291. The author deepens the foreshadowing of Hu Lan's future. At present, it seems that Hu Lan's future is to play a leading role. 19:291. Ye Fu wants Qu Hongxiao to accept Ao Tingxin as his disciple. Guess, Ao Tingxin may be a very special existence. Twenty:​292. It was snowing, and while describing it, Qu Hongxiao felt like she had lost something. Let me analyze it. First, when Ye Fu and Qu Hongxiao explained that Hu Lan's future was very difficult, Qu Hongxiao felt distressed and wanted to plead for mercy. From the previous description, we also know that she liked Hu Lan very much, and as a senior sister, she could not help her and made her blame herself; second, after Hu Lan and Ye Fu got to know each other, they understood the reality and cruelty of the adult world and thoughts in advance. She is smart, so she can adapt quickly. She adapted, but Qu Hongxiao didn't, so she felt like she had lost something. What was lost was the innocent junior sister. It's snowing, and the description between the junior sisters is really good and delicate. Twenty-one: 293. The girl "Yue" appears and she eats hot pot dozens of times. It is speculated that she may have had a relationship with Li Si in the past. Twenty-two:​294. Shenxiu Lake used to be Luoshen Slope, and it is speculated that this may have been a place where gods died. Twenty-three:294. Ye Fu showed interest in Iris, guessing that he valued the specialness of the fifth Iris. Again, the specialness of Iris V is emphasized. Twenty-four:​295,296. The place that hangs upside down is the foreshadowing of the building that reaches the sky. It is speculated that they existed before the era began. Through the conversation between Jianmu and Ye Fu, it can be seen that after the chronology, things or people from before the chronology still seem to exist. This also indicates that big things will happen in the future. There is a description here, which is that the top of the tall building is in a void, and this void is full of huge skeletons. This echoes the foreshadowing of the first volume. I wonder if you still remember it, Qi Qiqi, who was sitting quietly on a huge tree in the void. Obviously, this giant tree, which is the ancestral tree in the Black Rock City curtain, is part of the Tongtian Jianmu. Twenty-five:​297, Dao Shining Jianghu appears. His presence was strange to me, but I always felt he would be a key influence at some point. Twenty-six: 301. The biggest foreshadowing in this volume, maybe! Appeared. I will analyze her separately. Twenty-seven: 311. At the end, March said, if I fall in love with him one day, don't be surprised by him. March is a serious person and rarely talks nonsense. March Party members, you can have a laugh. Twenty-eight: 307. A foreshadowing of lifelessness. The four lifeless people are Xuannv (full name Jiutian Xuannv), Jinwu (no specific description yet.?), Moon Goddess (who lives on the moon, or she is the person who takes care of Yuegui), and Juzi (a Mohist giant who went to the Xiantian Palace and disappeared). Based on Shi Ran's doubts about Qin Sanyue, he speculated that they were related to Qin Sanyue, that they might be the same person or of the same nature. Twenty-eight: 312. Ye Fu asked March to be the Xuanming Secretary and preside over the mourning ceremony. Why. Guessing, Ye Fu may already know about March's situation. March is close to nature, and he speculates that it may be some kind of spiritual existence from heaven and earth. Twenty-nine:324. Big foreshadowing. A statue of Qin Sanyue appeared in the deep sea and was worshiped by all the whales after they fell. Whales are spiritual beasts that only serve heaven and earth. Naturally, the only thing they can worship is heaven and earth. The author has slowly revealed March's identity. Thirty:329. Jiachuan here revealed three key words, "over there", "East Palace", "Tian" or "Tiandu". "Over there" may be another world, it may be heaven, or it may be the past. "Donggong" may be an organization or a person. Let me mention here that Bai Wei's surname is "Donggong". As has been analyzed before, Bai Wei may have been Li Ming's savior in a certain life. "Heaven" or "Heavenly Capital" is either an organization or an era. If there are any omissions, please feel free to add them. In addition, if there is something that you don't understand, you can comment and I will go take a look and help analyze it (I am idle at home and can't go anywhere, so analyzing this makes me very interesting). Or the characters are analyzed individually below. ​ ​

As a 13-year old bookworm, let me evaluate this book objectively. First of all, this book is not suitable for novices. It can only be read by old bookworms of at least five or six years. However, it is indeed a good book. For many newcomers, it is very uncomfortable to read because the book does not have the various adventures, pretentious slaps, happy grudges, etc. They want. Some of the plots are just daily life, leisurely, but for people like Long Aotian and Ye Xingchen who can't get tired of reading novels, this kind of book seems to be the most comfortable. From the writing style in the book, it can be seen that the author has a solid foundation. Generally speaking, no book will be liked by everyone, and no book is useless and can only be suitable.

The author of this book emmm. . . It's not positive at all. He's obviously only twenty-six years old, so how come he's an old man? The setting of the protagonist is unreasonable. If you are reincarnated and have memories of past lives, it's okay. But a young man in a time-travel game should be full of energy but lifeless. It doesn't fit the character setting of young people. Moreover, here is The world of cultivating immortals is not an ideal world. The world of cultivating immortals should be one of intrigues and deception, the weak and the strong, rather than being bland and ordinary. The author's writing style cannot control the article he wants to write. The whole book is very stiff, the plot has no characteristics at all, and it does not attract readers' interest in reading. It is very awkward for people who read it, giving people a feeling of being cobbled together forcibly. The main and secondary roles of the plot are not clearly distinguished, and it is impossible to see who is the supporting role and who is the supporting role.

When I saw Chapter 29, I said it straight away. The character of the protagonist is too inconsistent. Everyone he meets is meek, and the character of the character is not clearly explained in the previous article. It feels like he is invincible once he travels through time. Then if I want to be ordinary, I want to be ordinary, then I have to be gentle. It feels strange to read between the lines, as if a person is forcing gentleness and being ordinary. The author's writing is completely unable to control the protagonist he originally intended to show us. The result is an invincible person who acts ordinary, carefree and gentle in his performance. Secondly, the plot part. I can't think of an invincible person who is proficient in everything. A person who is bored with the world. I want to be an ordinary person, but because of a little stimulation, I want to teach him to become a "saint"? The whole thing is completely inconsistent with the protagonist's state of mind. Writing this, I suddenly remembered a book, Forced King Li Qiye (Emperor's Domination). Some things in this book are very similar to the settings in Emperor's Domination---Bamboo corresponds to pear blossom? Apprentice corresponds to fairy? It's also an invincible pretense style. That book clearly states that I just want to cause trouble and just want to show off. But this book is different, this one is, I want to be ordinary! I want to show off! I want to be ordinary! I want to teach a saint! What the protagonist does is completely inconsistent with his mental state. It feels to me like a person who has gained strength, pretending to be deep and ordinary on the surface, but in fact he has set up a show of pretense. Some of the things I said are not easy to say, and may be a bit messy, but these are indeed the thoughts of a bookworm who has been around for about ten years. That being said, everyone is well.

To be honest, I came from piracy. This book is not a cool novel. There is no love or hatred, no fighting, no blood, and no darkness. When reading this book, all you can feel is that everything is calm and gentle. Of course, this book is not appropriate for today's fast culture. It doesn't have the passion that people like, nor the warmth that others like. The only thing it has is blandness. Everything the protagonist has experienced has passed in his tranquility. No matter the process, no matter the result. My only expectation for this book is that the author can use this style until the end.

The protagonist is really speechless as his life is boring. Let's put it this way, you get tired of playing one character in League of Legends (or Honor of Kings, whatever your favorite game is), such as Swordsman. After trying various gameplays, you have no interest in this character or the canyon map. At this time, if you travel to a different world and have the ability of a swordsman, will you look like you have no motivation? I believe you, why don't you try out every skill and every magical outfit like a fool, open a blue bottle and a red bottle and try my T M hand-chopped durian. The game loses its fun when it reaches the full level. Do you know what you think? With such strength, it is a whole new world, and with such a mentality, it is really a waste of goldfinger. When I saw the third chapter, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I slipped away Also, let me explain, this is a normal complaint about the author's work, don't blame me for criticizing it, and slap the blame on it There are also those who say that they can't stand it, so don't read it. If you don't like the comments, don't reply. Really, gone, gone

The writing in this book is definitely above average, and I can't criticize this. It is true that there are many flaws, and there are also many logical loopholes. I can tolerate all of this, but it's just a bit poisonous. I have high poison resistance. But I really can't stand this group of readers mindlessly boasting about their writing skills. Please read it again from the beginning quickly. The author can even use and write wrong four-character idioms. Can you talk to me about writing style? The prepositions and phrases are used erratically. Are you telling me that the writing style is good? I just want to ask here, for those who say that the writing is good, I don't talk about the ancient Three Kingdoms Dream of Red Mansions, nor the modern Jin Yong and Gu Long, nor the current Qidian master. Let me ask you, have you ever read the graduation thesis of a college student? ? Taking a step back, have you ever cared about writing a high-scoring composition for the college entrance examination? Let me take one last step back. Have you read the high-scoring composition for the high school entrance examination? Your nonsense without even a reference point will affect the popularity of this book.

I haven't seen such a poisonous novel in a long time. The protagonist is a young man in his 20s, but the writing seems to have no sense of vitality for the whole world, and a very decadent feeling. Don't say that he has learned everything in the game. Games are games after all, and it will definitely be different when it is passed down to your brain. Besides, if a young guy suddenly becomes invincible, won't his heart swell? Would it be as negative as what you wrote? There are still many things he has not experienced yet. For example, marry a wife, have children, start a family and start a career. These are things he couldn't find in the game, but he can get them now. I didn't read what you wrote later. I just saw the first few pictures and felt that I really couldn't bear it and couldn't stand it anymore. So I'm posting a book review. I hope the author can carefully conceive of the protagonist's character. What is his character like? Don't think about what ordinary people are like in this situation. You have to know that from the moment he time travels, he is no longer an ordinary person. He has powerful power and can control the life and death of countless people.

To put it straight to the point, if you want to read at the starting point, the first thing you should read is the three golden chapters. After reading three chapters, I felt severe pain in my head, my breath was held in my chest, and I couldn't vomit and felt unhappy. Today, starting from the platinum boss, down to the salted fish and shrimp, all are new and different, going against the routine. The author is a talented person. These three chapters are a collection of the dregs from 5 years ago, the routines from 3 years ago, and the writing style is a bit young, and the dialogue is disordered. (Can you read this dialogue? Normal people talk like this?) They forcefully poured poison into me. The poison is so bad that it can be saved. After reading the introduction, I thought the book was for a relaxing, farming flow. Looking at the book reviews again, there are countless people who believe it and then read it. It is actually a nanny novel with the word "easy". If you fall into a trap, you need to be careful when entering it. Don't ask me why there seems to be nothing, because I always look for books from the starting point, QQ reading is genuine, neither black nor water, just a simple reader.

Ever since Chen Zhengqing's reincarnation of the Pure Buddha, I felt particularly disgusted when the protagonist helped Chen Zhengqing abandon his old mother to become a monk. Even if the mother did not follow her son's wishes and force him to study, it was for his own good. Just like most mothers nowadays, they wholeheartedly cared for their children, but the methods were ineffective. Chen Zhengqing was stupid for 15 years, his husband left him for 15 years, she took care of a stupid son for 15 years, and supported a huge family business for 15 years. In the end, the protagonist came here to restore Chen Zhengqing's sanity, talk to him a few words about Buddhism, and then persuade the mother to let her son become a monk. Have you ever thought that her husband died and her son became a monk, like a second son who failed to live up to expectations. Even if he is reincarnated as a clear Buddha and will definitely become a monk, he should serve his mother and cut off the mortal world before becoming a monk. At best, this means ending the world of mortals; at worst, it means being unkind, unfilial, and unethical.

I also read a few chapters and couldn't get through it. The protagonist is a young man in his twenties. He probably doesn't even have a wife or children. He just plays games and his life is boring. I guess the protagonist hasn't even done anything about love before time travel.

.. I have never criticized the book.. But you are really too rude. Bad review.

There is something to say. The author's writing is great. It is much better than the straight-forward white text. It is really helpless in the Internet environment. It is seven years old. This book is indeed very different from the others. It means to stand out from the crowd.

The protagonist and the author really have enough differences between men and women. Is this cultivating immortality? What the hell, disgusting person,

Seeing so many negative comments in the comment area, I feel a little aggrieved for the author, so I want to express my support. I started reading this book from the middle. When I saw the title, I was a little disapproving, thinking it was a boring book like The Return of the King. After reading more than ten chapters, I realized that I had misunderstood. This is the real cultivation of immortality. It is in terms of strength, but also in terms of thought, soul, and moral character. The protagonist Ye Fu was born with great success in Taoism. He is quite like the ancient legend about the immortal who attained Taoism in one day. If his heart is strong, Taoism is achieved (although the setting is not the same, the result is very similar). Mr. Ye's heart has come true, but he is still a little green and lacks maturity at this time. He became a teacher in a small town, because his heart and strength were enough to preach and teach, and he also taught others to cultivate themselves. In the daily teaching at Sanwei Bookstore, we can see Mr. Ye's character, and it also reflects the worldview and values ​​of this book. Here is an example: Hu Lan asked: I would like to cultivate a sword to kill the evil thoughts of monks and demons in the world, and save all sentient beings in the world from bleeding and drifting. What's the use of reading? Mr. Ye first refutes the theory and then teaches it: You say that reading is useless, but how do you know that there was a master in ancient times, who dared to make all the ghosts and gods in the world cry with one sentence "Master said"; Hu Lan was impressed by his reasoning and said word by word: "Student Hu Lan, I have met Mr. Ye." Mr. Ye has seen many such things in his daily life. Mr. Ye teaches people, is good at teaching, and every sentence is reasonable and convincing. He deserves the name of this gentleman. This is a gentleman and an immortal. When you walk in the world, you should act according to your heart and people. Observing etiquette and doing benevolent things, but also informal, somewhat interesting, and full of life style. It has the style of a hermit that ancient literati longed for, but it is also different from Mr. Wuliu and others. It is something that people of today, the present moment, and the present world should learn from. It is also something that some very violent Internet articles should learn from. There is a song in the book that says: "Everyone in the world would like to become an immortal, but a pure heart and a few desires can't bear it..." (Although it is quoted from Red Mansions, it is used appropriately). According to the common view in online articles, becoming an immortal means becoming the strongest person, who can do as he pleases and do whatever he wants. How can we say "pure heart and few desires"? Even if it refers to the cultivation process, it doesn't make sense. Zhuang Zi said: Take advantage of the righteousness of heaven and earth, resist the changes of the six qi, and travel to infinity. Only when you are free and happy in this way is the way of the immortal. In ancient times, elegant people who cultivated their moral character respected the benevolent and aspired to attain the Tao. This book and the like give the great power of heaven and earth to those who have attained the Tao. The deeper the practice (here refers to the cultivation of virtue), the stronger the power, so that the family can rule the country and the world is no longer out of reach. Although the ability of self-cultivation is exaggerated, it has a lot of flavor. This book really makes my eyes light up. I hope Wen (sister?) Will continue writing it. When I saw a separate chapter at the beginning of the article explaining the protagonist's so-called character problems, I felt aggrieved for her. It's just that the world view is a little different, and some friends may have gone too far. Come on Wenji! ! !

Don't represent otakus casually. The otakus you think are just what you think they are, and the content is quite cliche. Bye bye

From the current point of view, the plot arrangement is too deliberate. The protagonist gives me the feeling of pretending not to want to but forcefully pretending. It seems so embarrassing that I can only stop at chapter 33. I hope the author will write better and better. Farewell 🙏

Let me tell you what I think of this book. The beginning was very poisonous, not grasping the character, old routines, awkward pretense b I almost gave up, and it's not unreasonable for you to scold me But in the middle and later stages, the writing was really, really, really good, with that light feeling, I was glad that I persisted and found a good book😊

1. The cool thing about regular books is that the protagonist is so powerful that he will die if he offends him, and his personal achievements (substitution) are sold to readers in various ways. The advantage is that it is straightforward and almost everyone can get happiness, even if it is only deliberately created by the author. 2. This book is not. The most profound thing I understand is that the mistakes made by the times should be shouldered by the times and have nothing to do with individuals. To present this era to every reader, the article has too many embellishments. From a small Black Rock City to the world-famous Shenxiu Lake, they are all the characteristics of this era. "I" is just an onlooker, and "my" job is not to promote its development. "I" just want to take care of myself and the people around me, even if I just know them, that's all. I really enjoyed this book, thank you.

I feel very sorry that Sister Mang no longer writes. I will always keep this book Thank you for all the happiness this book brings me.

I've finished reading it. I've finished reading all the chapters at this stage. For the time being, I don't plan to read it. I plan to wait and see. To be honest, I came here because of the beginning, but later I found out that I had been tricked, but it was pretty good. This book is one of the best books I have read in the past two years. I really like this kind of story line and the feeling of telling a story. It can bring me into it but not feel like it is inside. It is very comfortable to read. Of course, if you haven't read it, just pretend I didn't say it. After all, if you cut off two lines in the middle of this book, you might not be able to read it! Because you don't even know what he's talking about. But you can also break it into a short story and read it volume by volume, which is quite good. The main points of each volume are different, each has its own characteristics, and has a different story. The characters, things, and events are described in particular detail. Of course, there are a lot of foreshadowings, which makes it a little headache to read. You don't have to read it carefully, but you need to read it carefully. But I won't compliment you in the first few chapters! ! 🙂🙂🤭

The title of this book should be "I originally wanted to be a pretending to be an invincible and unscrupulous teacher, but somehow I started to really be a teacher and in the process of teaching and educating people, I silently pretended to be a NB that the supporting characters could not understand. At the same time, I lived a happy and depressed daily life of a kind of cabbage that could fly, run, and play with myself while traveling to the new world and accidentally saving the world."

This book is really wonderful. It's a bit like the Ya She that I've read. Each supporting character has his own story when he enters the protagonist's field of vision. He is not added randomly, but has his own identity. The whole process does not revolve around the male protagonist, but the supporting characters' stories form a small world. It is not a refreshing novel, but a more interesting way to experience it.

I'm used to reading those cool articles that are straightforward. After reading this, I feel like I need to catch up on my Chinese lessons 😁. I can't say that it's well written. It still looks good. I just feel that sometimes I can't understand it. 🤭 Come on

After reading the beginning, I feel that the writing style is very similar to a junior high school Chinese textbook.

This book started out with the feeling of a poisonous internet text, then it felt like an internet text, and then it no longer felt like an internet text.

The description of the panda is so cute, my heart almost melts.

Passing by... Easily attracts attention (mainly because of boredom)