Boundless Sea

I've read a few pictures and it's okay, but I feel that the title of the book should be changed to attract more people. The title of the book should be well introduced and hit the key points, so that the audience of this book can find it. For example, it can bring about the arrival of the infinite mage and the source of law in the infinite world. The same goes for simplicity. Add a summary sentence at the end of the literary version. For example, this is the story of a mage in the infinite flow (). The brackets are self-filling You write so literary and artistic. No one wants to read it and they don't know what it is.

I feel that we are in the same boat. I even feel that I am in a worse situation than you. 900,000 Words and 300 collections. I pay tribute to you. You are also a big brother. I am not too lonely. I will come here often in the future. I will read Chapter 20 today.

The main character is a bit awkward, but the writing is obviously okay

Can the protagonist return to the original world? If not, why did he write that his sister was kidnapped (and the reason was not stated)

Personally, I feel that this book is still readable. It is good in all aspects, but I feel that it is a bit lacking in all aspects. In short, it is very awkward to read, because I always feel that after reading it, I want to go to see the Samsara Paradise next door. It is not that this book is not good, but the Samsara Paradise next door. There are many aspects that are similar to this book and better. There is always a feeling that after reading this book, I would rather go to see Samsara Paradise next door. Of course, I did not say that this book is not good. On the contrary, in fact, I quite like reading this book. After all, it feels good, but it just feels awkward. Maybe it's because I read Samsara Paradise first and have read more than 2,000 chapters, so I feel this way. But I emphasize again and again that this book is definitely worth reading, and it still has many highlights. Of course, poisoning varies from person to person. Don't criticize me if there is anything that makes you uncomfortable. After all, it's useless to criticize me.

Click your paw to predict the takeoff of this book

The main character is a bit awkward, obviously the writing is okay, but I just don't feel comfortable with it.

Author. Listen to me and open the book again. This 2 million words, 700 recommendations, 1,000 collections can explain the results. I used to have 100,000 words and 3,000 collections, all of them were eunuchs. Although your updates are very stable, the results are a bit unsatisfactory. I think the results will be better when the new chapter is opened. After all, I have experience.

Just saw it on the shelves, let me tell you what I think of this book. Advantages: The savior of the book, the plot is good, the ability is good, everything is very good, and it makes people want to read it. Disadvantages: There are too many typos, which makes it uncomfortable to read, and the author's writing level is not very good, and the writing is too fragmented. Many things are not expressed clearly. Coupled with typos and wrong words, sometimes a paragraph looks very confusing and I don't know what to express. As a result, I felt very stuck when reading this book. It didn't have that silky feeling. When I read it, I had to read carefully line by line and sentence by sentence. I also had to guess typos and then guess what the author wanted to express based on the entire paragraph. So tired. . . Didn't hold up. . . I wish the author's next book will be better

Author, you are referring to Samsara Paradise, right? The settings are pretty much the same

Su, the beheading girl next door: Everyone uses knives, how can you cast a forbidden spell? Young people do not respect martial ethics

The author feels that the protagonist's quality is a bit low. Love you so much

I was so confused after losing.

With unlimited mana, why can't you just throw fireballs, small fireballs, big fireballs, continuous fireballs, bursting fireballs, extremely effective fireballs, and fire rain?