One Thought to Know the Immortal

It's pretty good. The protagonist is realistic, interesting, and ordinary yet unyielding. Unlike other fantasies, it starts with either the hatred for killing the father or the hatred for taking away the wife 😤. Come on, author, you're in a trap

Three updates a day, no matter what the results are, the bottom line is 2.5 Million a year, no supervision, otherwise the live chop☺️☺️☺️☺️ The rest will be left to you!

Here, let me tell you that the characters I write have relatively distinct personalities. For example, Xiaobai can be indifferent to many things, but no one can touch his bottom line Like Ning Yi, walking on the edge of madness, he seems to be a product of despair, wanting to get the salvation of his soul There are also Nangong Hongling, and other characters who will appear in the future They all have different personalities and have their own stories, which I will unfold one by one in the future So my novel is relatively slow to develop, you can follow me and reveal little by little different lives of different people!

Come on, author, a powerful book like this will have sales of over a million words and clicks.

This book is great! Vivid and humorous, why haven't you signed the contract yet? But the text could be more detailed, so that the sense of the scene would be stronger, and the current story would be fine.

The protagonist of the novel, Ye Zi, has a very good image design and a distinct personality. He moves from a remote small place to a larger martial arts platform step by step. The plot arrangement and ideas are clear. I give the author a recommendation vote. I have collected it and look forward to a return visit!

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I feel that the bond between Ye Zi, Lin Yueyao and Bai Haoran will last a lifetime

Well, these two have my heart. All the poison testers are here.

Not bad, please update!

The characters and plot are pretty good, but the narrative technique is a bit painful to watch. For example, when I took ginseng and returned to the village, it felt very abrupt and a bit inexplicable. For me, who is slightly obsessive-compulsive, it was a pain in the ass.

Authors should advertise more and go to the book review sections of some novels to advertise

I can only help so much! Take care of yourself!

It's good to read one chapter of the article, but how can I put it, it's difficult to sign a contract if the general trend is

Keep it up slowly... There will be no shortage of people reading good books.

The word "immortal" is easy to write but difficult to practice.

The book is a good book😐

The scariest thing in the world is not forgetting your original intention. You will spend your whole life without making any progress at all.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

There are 9 problems with the concept. What kind of fairy tale did you write?

I want to know how many words were signed

After reading Chapter 67, it is obvious that there can be a softer solution, alas.

I can't stand this style of writing, so go ahead and look at the number of clicks and reads. It makes sense!

Ask a question? The author has big claws? ━┳━━┳━

The author has entered the palace, please disperse

If the author is really confused, I would like to give you an explanation. . . It's really sad to wait. . .

It's been a long time? Why hasn't it been updated yet? Isn't it? . . . Abandoned?